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FF: U n me!! PART 4 pg 16 (Page 10)

amzu32 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
loved the update...
pls cont soon...

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Chelsha Senior Member

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 12:20am | IP Logged
Maan and Geet are in the same class. Maan the same kadus Baba. Geet the same chatter box. Loved Yashs character too.
Nice starting dear.
I love romantic stories and yours is a fabulous one. Eager to know how you proceed with the story. Thanks for the pm.

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bhanu_rekhag IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 12:34am | IP Logged
u can take a call...i liked both... so do as u planned

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tinatartari IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 6:00am | IP Logged
beautiful.i used 2 b ur regular readr n ill read it again.plz cntnue

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 8:10am | IP Logged
ohk so i l add sum childhood scene mre so ...u l bt sweet toks n may b a kiss if i feel lik addin heheh  n fr passionate romance u hav 2 wait ol is 5n wid dis ehhe
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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 8:44am | IP Logged
I have already read first few parts yaar. . . . Wat too do. . . .maan will use geet to patao sameera den 8year leap reunion. . . Den Watefall dance see mujhe story yaad hai.

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
loved da update
do continue
it was amazing

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 5:34pm | IP Logged
as she entered her choachin class she 4gt abt studies geet notice maan! a slight blush cam on her face..n then she realised hw rude he was wid her in d morinng!...
she gt into class n was abt 2 join from tommo!
 On their way home geet was constanly blabbering...
mom apne ush ladke kho dekha tha jho coaching class main tha ..
woh ek dum sadu hai.. mujhe woh pasand nhi... itna attitude...
n throught out the way she was complaning as they entered handa haveli!
GEET: maa mujhe tho woh bilkul pasand nhi...itne buraa
GEET's mom prenana:.bas kar geet purae raste tu us bechare ki buraye karti aye hai...
before she could complete geet's dad anurag cut's her : prenana agar tum maa beti ki baatein katam hogaye tho dekho kon aya hai...
geet instaantly ...TUM!!Pinch
oh god tum! look yeh wahi ladki hai jis k bare main i told u..
ek dum creamy creamy skin said  PARI to her mom
AUNRAG: geet yeh huamre neighbours hain n mere bhut purane frnds...
GEET: dad i noe her she is mah class mate...
pari n geet were chating ..and a lady in her  late 60's came down ...
she was charming in ol d sense..
PARI: whose dat lady..goshh she looks awsum at dis age
GEET let me intoduce u to mah sweetheart she called loud NANI cum here..
pari u noe she was a busines women ne bhe unse sekha..
n i also wanna b lik nani!..she tld wid a grin!
PARI: wow teri tho puri family models ki lakti hai i m sure nani
 apne zamane main ravishing hogi and both laughed
wase meri mom sirf dad k pase kharch karti hai ...
main bhe wahi karing wid dis they laughed agan
NANI: hello dolls ..geet hume apne frnds se nhi milange...
GEET: sure nani...nani she is pari...n pari she is mah nani! n she is d  sweetst!
PARI hie aunty nic 2 meet u..
wase cn i cal u nani i neva gt a chance 2 adress sum1 as nani...
dere was slight tears forming in her eye whch dnt wnt unnotice by geet n nani
NANI: sure darling!
the family got settled wid each other ...
and joind them fr dinner...dinner was fun!
dear dairy!!...
    Today was mah 1st day at school...
n was nt bad... pari ,yash ,sanjay kajal
n ol r so sweet n helpful 2...
bt woh sadu god!
wase woh dikhne main accha hai diaryy...
ek dum mast bt itna atitude huh...
apne ghar par rakhe...
khair dairy i m tried nw abhe hw bhe karana hai
aur school bhe jana hai so cya aaj k liye itna he ...
wase paris dad mom r sweet..
n even she was sweet enough though was too girly
nt excatly my type but she is sweet hai na...?
hmmm aur diary main tho MUMBAI kho bhul he gaye ..
didnt even missd..
and i was so easily setled in co-ed shcool cn u bet that! gosh!
mujhe laga hw wil i manage!! u noe na gals school main hw it is..
ohh !!god diary Angry
tum bhe mujhe kitna likhati hoo ..
dekho main kabse likh rahi hun nw let me go byee muawh!
next day...
TEACHER: students wot do v call TEARS! in scientific language...?
ol d studnet lookd at maan becuz 2 such high fundo questnz maan only had answers!!...
he was a perfect blend of sexiness..handusmnes..arogance...n intellignece
bt tody maan himself was nt noein the answer...  he dnt llikd dat feelin!
TEACHER: maan would u lik 2 answer??
MAAN: mam i dono makin a puppy if he lost a battle
TEACHER: ohk i l give d answrer!
GEET while hesitating said "mam may i?" i bit nervous...
cuz she was nt sure wid her answer!
TEACHER: yea sure...
she replied"LACRIMAL FLUID!" a low voice
teacher gud dats rite...
MAAN was boiling in anger..fuming..
hw did she noe he dnt lik her answerin dis questn!...
wel fr him gals were fool bt geet was nt excatly a fool he thought infact
geet was a witty ...
days passd and maan realised she was very intellignt..
once maan was stuck wid a maths sum
 n he wntd d answer any hw...he thought of askin geet...
he hessitated bt he badly wanted d answer  
MAAn during recess wid ol the courage he askd "GEET CAN U HELP ME WID DIS SUM?"
she remembered d day maan insulted her whn she said him hie...
she wntd 2 throw attitude bt she couldnt cuz it was nt her anture to hurt any1..
she helpd her enemy to..n dis was maanEmbarrassed
maan was amused hw she slovd d sums in secnds and he was strugling since when...
MAAN"thnks" wid a fake smile...
and geet was blushin she dnt noe y?
PARI AND YASH: wowow...maan cam 2 u n said THANX!..
geet yea..n was blushin in her heart bt dnt wanan shw any1 ...
geet wnt hme...
rushed to her room..and updated her DIARY...
   2day he spoke wid me ..u noe diary fr d 1st time! she was on cloud nine!!!!!
 days past! months went...
geet at nite before bed...
DEAR  diary...
yesterday maan talkd wid me fr the d 5th tym.
.u noe 5th tym!...and by mistaly he thouchd my hand...omg!...
u noe i jst skip mah heart beat...dairy..y m i so attractd 2 him!??
thinkin abt him she slept!
 sam tym khuaran manshion!
maan was waiting in the hall fr his dadi as he heard d car park...
 he rushed to the door...
DADDAi: n hugged her! a bear hug!
after maan's parents death he was the only left wid dadai
n she was his world
DADI: maan beta hw was ya day!
and he tld her the whole days stry while she was havin dinner!
DADI: so maan u liked any gal...lik u noe u wanan date..
she was free wid maan and so was he..
MAAN: well dadi ladki tho u noe ol GALS  r fida on me she is different..
she is smart...beautiful...
bt i wnt her 2 aproach me...
 kyunki maan singh kharan kabhi kisii kho aproach nhi karta.. he said dis wid proud
DADi: beta attitude is gud itna atitude is nt gud if u like sum1 u cn ask her out...
n ofcuz leting me nw!...dey kept chating and finaly bit gud bye to each other
nxt day during recess
due 2 sum prank maan fell on geet ...
every1 started teasin them
GEET was blushin she lovd dat!...
bt could nt expresss while maan was fuming in anger...
he could hav killed every1 around...
GEET: hmmm
MAAN: wel i m sory..
GEET: its k...bth were in a awkward position and the bell rang ...
n they thnk god and soon were bisi wid lecs
maan avoided geet dnt tok 2 her ...
wase bhe he dnt tok bt nw he dnt even giv her dat fake smile,,,,,,,,,,,
they had cleared 9th and were in 10th...
geet and maan were in same class...
and nw she use 2 sit next 2 maan s row dat means
she does nt hav 2 strugle 2 see him cause he was jst next 2 her!...
omg she was happy...very happie...
dat day in clases maan was late so was geet...she could not remove her glaze frm maan when she entered wid him...white neva lookd so hot on any1...she exclamied!
MAM: y u guys are late ...nw dnt waste tym and go 2 dat last seats...
the whole class was packd and dere were 2 seats vacant ..
maan dnt wanan sit wid her...
as ol d school frnds wil still tease or tok abt them whhc he dislike
 bt he had no option
and while siting maans leg by mistakly touched geets...
dere was a sudden shiver in her body his touch had dat effect on her ...
she couldnt think straight!
TEACHER: geet i m askin u ! GEET..
wid dat her thoughts broke!..
GEET wohh actuly!!...she dnt even heard d qustnd
 she was feelin so embrased if teacher askd wot was she thinking...
bt suddenly maan act as her saviour n wishperd d answer is 3.27 was unlike maan anture...
she was shockd wid his help!
teacher: geet!
GEET: 3.27
teacher!: gud ..nxt tym b alert!
GEET :sory mam...
she lookd at maan and said thnks ...HE smiled...
god! he smiledEmbarrassedShockedShockedShocked
she wnt hme in her room
Dear diary
u noe diary 2day his leg thouchd mah thighs ...
his touch was magical i neva felt dis b4...i guess i m gone mad fr him!!!...
and his smile...god dat white shirt!! it was so awsumm!! wel...i doubt he liks me
i m nt dat ahpenng fr her!
dis is ol nani ka lov ...god woh parathaz ne muje size 1000 bana diya hai...
10th k baad i m on DIET!! strictly!
precaap: school annual day and maan touches geets lips!!!Wink
hyy peeps do u lik it shall i continue..btw i noe dis update is a bit less of dialouge becuz mujhe paka raha tha 2 add dailoges lol..jokes apart i dnt feel d need fr d convo
nw leave long commnts n shower ya luv i l update soon!! Smile
next :PART3

Edited by beautiful_life - 16 May 2011 at 8:15pm

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