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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 11:31am | IP Logged
Hey guys please decide whom you want as the face of Vishal!

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 11:46am | IP Logged
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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 11:57am | IP Logged
Hey guys, thanks for liking my track. So now a long update, with Vishal's history and ummm... ViHa's story. Wink

Hope you guys like it.

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"So are you telling me or not?" Kria said to Vishakha as they entered the cafeteria for lunch. The first half of the day had ended and she hadn't been able to get anything out of Vishakha since the lectures after the project work had hardly given them time to talk.

"Why are you getting so curious? Kuch hua kya?" Vishakha waggled her eyebrows whispering to her as they sat down next to the boys.

"Shut up. Mai bas isliye puch rahi thi kyunki even he's a dancer, vo bhi St. Louis ka star dancer aur vo ek Dazzler nahi hai, that's surprising."

"Vo ek Dazzlers tha." Swayam said listening to Kria.

"What?"

"Ya." Vishakha said. Suddelny the whole gang stopped their chatter and were into the same conversation. "You wanna know his story right?" Vishakha asked and she nodded. "So for that I gotta tell you Dazzlers ki history."

"Come on!" Kria groaned.

"Tumhe sunna hai ya nahi?"

"Okay!"

"The Dazzlers team was actually made five years back. Tum janti ho na St. Louis sirf ek degree college nahi ek junior college bhi hai?" Vishakha said.

"Dazzlers ki team Rey ke bade bhai Devaansh aur Sharon ki behen Shalini ne apne junior college ke time pe shuru ki thi." Swayam told her.

"Dazzlers shuru se hi elite type 'phenomenon' raha hai. Mr. Singhania and Mr. Prakash college ke trustee hai to koi bhi is discrimination ke against nahi gaya. Later junior college ki Dazzler team ko Sharon aur Rey ne takeover kar liya. Vishal just like you entered St. Louis in Degree College and as a surprise he quickly gained entry into the Dazzlers team simply on merit basis, the only one till now. That was last year when all of us were in last year of our junior college aur Shalini last year degree me. Since Dev had already passed out a year back, Vishal turned into the vice-captain of the team. But is year ke starting me jab Shalini aur baaki poori original Dazzler team passout ho gayi, Vishal was the only one left when Sharon and Rey took over. It was expected ki Vishal would take over the captain's post aur Rey would become the vice-captain, but surprisingly Shalini gave the captaincy rights to Rey aur usne Sharon ko vice-captain bana diya. Vishal was stripped off his post and his respect in the team." Vishakha said as if nostalgic.

"For a few months that continued, aur Vishal simply us team ke saath raha and took everything because he loved to dance." Swayam continued. "But things were reaching beyond the limit. Mid semester exams ke baad out of protest, Vishal left the team."

"Aur maine bhi uske saath vo team chod di. I was fed up of acting like Sharon's housemaid." Vishakha said.

"Vishal tried making his own dance team, but before he could, uske team chodne ke ek mahine baad uska accident ho gaya. His right leg was badly hurt, five fractures. Vo theek to ho gaya but he couldn't dance again. Right after our semester end exams uski leg me kuch complications aani shuru ho gayi and he went to Delhi to get a surgery done. Now he's back after the surgery walking with a stick with his leg in a cast." Swayam ended looking at the grim expressions on all the faces ' Vishakha had a mixed look of contempt and loss on her face; Neha and Bharat just looked sad, they had all been their when it was happening; while Kria she couldn't help the tear that trickled down her cheek, she couldn't say anything anymore.

 

"We're seriously sorry Kria but we should be leaving." Vishakha said her voice dropping into a whisper as they looked at the watch, it was 7, one more hour before the library closed but Kria's project was nowhere near completion.

"It's ok guys." She said as all of them got out of the library, Kria to call her mother and the others ready to leave.

"No worry Kria, you complete project Neha knows." Neha put a reassuring hand on Kria's shoulder.

"Thanks Neha." Kria said with a smile.

 

Rey was tapping the steering wheel of his car impateintly looking at the watch every two minutes. She hadn't left college yet, he was sure, he had been keeping an eye on Neha all day. Well even if it hadn't bore a good enough fruit, he had come close to getting a confession out Vicky. He smiled as he remembered his conversation with his stuttering friend that evening.

He sat there in the corridor opposite to the library. Their lecture was free and he had seen her whole gang go inside the library around half an hour back. When Sharon had insisted on using that time to practice their routine, he had faked a severe headache and had said he'd be going home leaving the group in the rehearsal hall to practice. Munching on a packet of wafers he kept his eyes fixed at the door of the library, but she hadn't emerged. He had wanted to talk to her about the interaction she saw in the morning between him and Vishal. He was sure, she'd have dug out the past by now and he wanted to clear out any misunderstandings in her head before they began settling in, and he knew Vishal would do an amazing job taking care that it happened. He had no idea what he'd say to her, but he knew the words will flow once he saw her.

"Hey Rey! Tu yahan kya kar raha hai?" Vicky said as he saw Rey eating wafers with his eyes glued at the library door. Both the corridors were empty, since most of the first years had gone back home and the second and third year students still had their lectures going on. Suddenly they heard someone giggle, it was Neha, as she chuckled at something Vishakha said both of them walking towards the library. Rey smiled, if both of them were still here Kria for sure would be.

"Oye teri wali to yahan hai nahi, tu meri wali ko dekh kar kyu muskura raha hai?" Vicky said fuming as both of their gazes followed the girls until they entered the library.

"Teri wali?" Rey jumped up from the bench as he heard Vicky.

"V' Vo mai' mai'" Vicky stuttered as he kept on backing while Rey kept on walking towards him with his hands on his waist nodding along with Vicky's stutters. "Mujhe jaana hai, bye!" Vicky said and ran from there. Rey smiled nodding his head, Vicky had been acting strange ever since RDX's party last month, now he knew why. That was the last Rey saw of Vicky that day.

"Vishakha hume Kria ko akele library me nahi chodna chahiye tha." Swayam said as they walked out of the college crossing the parking lot. Rey's thoughts came to an abrupt halt when he heard their voices and he became more alert when he heard her name.

"But Swayam agar mai ek ghante me ghar nahi pahunchi, to tum logon ko nayi team mate dhundhni padegi. My mom would kill me!" Vishakha said. Since it was still early February, the nightfall was around the corner.

"Neha having also same problem." Neha said with a pout.

"Thach me yaal, ghal jaake Batla thal ka ploject pula kalna hai." Amar said.

"I think I should stay back." Swayam said stopping in his tracks.

"To garage me jo cars aayi hai unhe theek karne me meri madat kaun karega, RDX?" Bharat said to Swayam rolling his eyes.

"Hey, my RDX sir not saying anything about! Samjhe?! Varna!" Neha showed him a finger.

"Varna kya kar legi?" Bharat said coming forward making Neha take a step back.

"Neha will..." Neha took an angy stance but Swayam butted in.

"Shant gadha dhari bheem shant!" Vishakha said getting a hold of Neha as Swayam backed Bharat off.

"Vaise bhi Kria ka project aadha to ho hi gaya hai, she'll do it." Swayam said changing the topic. Neha and Bharat glared at each other as they left. As soon as they left, Rey came out of his car with a library book, he was supposed to return it that day but he was saving it till the time he could catch Kria alone incase it happened to be in the library.

 

"Ma bas thoda sa bacha hai." Kria said to her mother who kept on scolding her. "Bas ek ghanta!"

"Okay fine, fir main tumhe lene aa rahi hu."

"Okay Ma, bye!" Kria said as she cut the call and went back inside. As she reached the table within the economics section which had been occupied by her and her friends till some time back and saw it littered with her project work. She growled as she cleaned the table and sat down to write the derivation of her demonstration. Six scrapped pages and numerous attempts later, she banged her head on the table and didn't realize when she fell asleep.

 

"Sir." Rey said to the librarian who was busy photocopying something. "Sir mujhe ye book lautani thi."

"Oh yes yes, Reyaansh!" The librarian said finally recognizing the face he saw once in a blue moon. As he dutifully checked the whole book and gave Rey back his library card, Rey kept on searching the whole room for Kria. "Here you go."

"Thank you sir." Rey plastered a fake smile on his face, as he'd have to go right when the librarian stopped him.

"Beta, I have to do something, I'll be back in ten minutes. Kya ye papers tum kisi ko de sakte ho?"

"Ya sure sir."

"Vo ek ladki hai, first year student, economics section me baithi hai." The old librarian gave the papers to him and left. Rey beamed, he'd get time to talk to her. As he went to the economics section he saw her sleeping peacefully with her head down on her book. He couldn't bring his heart to wake her up as he stealthily sat opposite her and kept watching her. Right when his eyes caught the papers under Kria's head. Slowly trying not to wake her up he took them. He smirked at what he saw; she was trying the wrong approach. This was one secret no one apart from Vicky knew ' Rey loved economics. He picked up her papers and wrote down the derivation shortest and longest both ways. He kept all the papers ' the photocopies, her demonstration and his derivations next to her head and left.

Five minutes after he left the librarian came to tell her it was time to close the library. Sleepy and dejected she dragged herself out of the library with her things.

"Hey." Vishal said as he came and stood next to her in the college's driveway as she yawned. "Kya hua? Tired?"

"Yup! Badly!" Kria said with a smile. "Tum itni late college me kya kar rahe the?"

"Missed one month worth classes, was sitting in the library and studying."

"Mai bhi vahi thi but I didn't see you." Kria asked scrunting her eyes.

"Tum Economics section me thi aur main Accounts section me." Vishal smiled right when a car stopped in front of them. "Do you want me to drop you somewhere?" He said opening the door of his car.

"Nahi mom mujhe pick karne aa rahi hai."

"Alright then, see you later." Vishal said as he slid into the backseat of his car with osme help from his driver and left. Suddenly Kria's phone rang.

"Kria I'm stuck in a traffic jam right next to our building. I don't think main abhi yahan se nikal paungi." Kria's mom said as she rolled the window of her car so that Kria could hear her properly.

"It's okay Ma, aap vapas chale jao."

"Lekin fir tum'?"

"Ma mere saath ek dost hai. I'll come with them."

"You sure?"

"Ya mom."

"Alright." Her mom said as she cut the call. She looked around ' she was doomed. There was no way anyone could appear to give her a lift. She started walking, she'd have to take the bus. She looked up, it was about to get dark. Suddenly a car stopped next to her and the passenger seat's window slid down.

"Hey Ms. Dehradun? Lift chahiye?" She saw Rey beaming from the driver's seat leaning so that he could see her.

"Nahi main apne aap chali jaungi." She said and kept on walking. Rey moved forward too.

"It's late and it's not safe to travel on your own." He said but she kept on walking. "Mere saath travel karma atleast bus se to safe hi hoga Ms. Baat-Cutter." He said when Kria stopped. She slid her hand inside her bag, the pepper spray bottle her mother had given her a few weeks back was there. It couldn't be that unsafe to go with him, could it be, she thought. Giving up she got in beside him in the car and put on her seat belt as Rey drove out of the college.


...to be continued. Heart



Edited by Sheherzade - 13 June 2011 at 12:39pm

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
@ Sheherzade... awww my sweetsss. Hug omg im loving this, i was so much lost in the story and it ended... ur tooo good... and the story line is going just perfect... i hope D3 team finds your story and make it the real story line of D3... Wink This is the best story ever... love u for this wonderful writing...Heart

Love the idea of Library section. n Vishal's story is really cool... The senior Dazzlers and all... I love the scene where Rey remembers Vicky.. All the dialogues are too good.. specially Neha n Amar's. Love when Reyaansh use those words, Ms. Dheheradun n Baat-cutter.. No words can describe how good you are..  Hmmm soo Vishal is an important character.. so we need a good dancer for Vishal's role... yup sidhesh can be pretty good... how about Prince?



Edited by yummoBB - 27 May 2011 at 12:22pm

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
superb update pree... liked the backdrop..Clap
Rey is good in Eco???Shocked (sorry but I personally hate ecoDead)
So sweet of him to help KriaEmbarrassed
ViHa story beginning haan!!Wink.. keep it up!!Thumbs Up
continue soonBig smile
thnx for the pmBig smile

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P.S. - I would like to see Siddhesh as the face of VishalEmbarrassed

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
"It's late and it's not safe to travel on your own." dat is deff. wt Rey would say 2 Kria as we saw in d last epi..Embarrassed hez so caring 2wards herDay Dreaming..

btw i luv it... especially the rey giving lift to kria idea..Big smileDay Dreaming

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
What about Puneet from DID 2 as Vishal...he is good looking and he can dance and he has the personality as well.

Awww I loved the part where Rey solved those Eco derivations. But I hope Kria finds out soon...and not when its too late.

One last thing, it is really nice that you are writing it and not the tv channels as you wont betray Rey and Kria or pair them with the wrong people. All those sad tracks, misunderstandings that TV people can think of...I love happy happy stories and you make it a point to bring Rey and Kria together in the story.

PS. - D3 people should be careful from you and Annamika...both you guys are doing such good work that the two of you are giving a stiff competition to D3.

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