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CrazzyBusy thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow muskan you finally finished this FF it was really a true magical FF
loved it...love the ending actually the whole FF's
wow 3 girls in a row and 4th one will be geet bachan
thank u so much for writing a lovely FF and really enjoyed reading each update
hope we get to read more of FF's from u

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Posted: 12 years ago

The journey began with a hard and stern businessman,

who had forgotten how to smile;
and with a lively, sweet and cute college girl,
Who was by no means docile...πŸ˜†
The mask of ruthlessness had cracked,
In just the first meeting the angel had sneaked!
those light coloured eyes made him drown,
While she was busy in admiring the guy with a frown!
Fascinated she was, bowled over he was;
sfter they met, life didn't pause...
Meetings continued, yet she didn't know his name,
Coz she was genuine,unaffected by his fame!
Her naive nature, her innocence floored him;
His care for her and dominace blowed her!
they moved together in the different shades of life,
together they experienced their changing feelings that grew ripe!
He was crazy, yet his ego stopped held him back,
She was obsessed, nothing could stop her!
their days were spent on phone together,
till they met in flesh and person...
together they enjoyed the moods of weather,
With each passing moment the relation grew deeper!
They didn't realise when their lives got entangled,
a day away from the other none could handle!
Still not accepting in words what they felt,
Yet for the other willing to be killed!
Breathing, eating all were secondary!
Even a li'l distance left them in a quandry!
for him it was her all along,
Yet her love took a different form;
Never used the four letter word,
yet to be with him, left her dream in lurch!
Away from all, a world they made,
The six months together had ever shade...
they truly, deeply understood each other;
the depth of their love got even clearer!
different moods an situations they sailed through;
Closer and closer with time they grew!
Faith was something they never had to strive for,
each trusted the other more than their life...
No misunderstandings, no ghosts from the past;
No tensions, no worries could do them apart!
yet a few hurtful words did the impossible,
They broke the pair that was so impeccable!
through the distances the love still thrived,
Waiting for each other apart they survived!
the bodies were apart, but the souls were together;
Years did pass, the longing ony grew stronger!
Yet when it came to the other's life,
Both of them were ready to part with their own life!
Though a barrier of assumptions existed,
The love they had could never be doubted!
separated by lack of words, they had a new bond,
To their little princess they both held on!
after th painful separation, when the truth arrived,
Brought relief to him, but it couldn't thrive!
For the first time, he failed to trust her...
their love he lost fait in, he felt disgusted,
as he burnt in the flames of remorse,
The distances in their closeness made her worse!
When the truth was revealed, she was shattered;
shocked to know that the trust had been battered!
As she told him to fetch her to himself,
During that search, her pain he felt!
Places after places as he swept,
In a sea of guilt, every time he dwelt!
Yet finally when the souls came alive,
In the love of his life he merrily dived...
Her happiness was his only aim,
in comparison to her, everything was tame...
Every dream that she ever had, he woved to fulfill,
A full time husband, a father so thrilled!
A wedding ceremony straight out from her dreams,
in happiness, in pleasure she wanted to scream!
all the pain is now finally over, only happy clouds will now ever hover!
in the rains of their love, both are now drenched;
Together with them, their princesses are now entrenched!
The blue baby is now on its way,
With all those who matter, in Happiness they sway!
As this journey comes to a close,
we all are overwhelmed by love's hearty dose!
The journey has been TRULY MAGICAL so far...
this is not the end a new beginning is on the cards!
a fairytale of the prince and the princess...
Is coming to close as they live HAPPILY EVER AFTER!
 
 
 
My most prized ff has come to an end today!
yet calling it the end is not what i would like to say...
Yes, the journey for us now seems over,
yet for the two love-bound travellers, its just not over!
their destination is one, and they have each other,
so, they need none of us as they go on togetherπŸ˜‰
 
 
 
It was by-far the most different poem i have ever written, and perhaps the most difficult, as it had no particular instances...I just wanted to describe their love...their feelings...their journey which will go on!
Thanks a lot Muski di!
no doubt i am gonna miss the anticipation of TM updates, yet the journey's memories will be there to bring a smile on  my face always!
 
Love
Swati
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsum update...luvd it...
Yet another wondrful ff of urs came to an end...
Endin was really beautiful...dis journey of maanet was TRULY MAGICAL...<3
dis was da first ff i read on IF...nd da best ff i have read... it had all da emotions...
Hope u start tm seasn 2*greedy me*...lol
me feelin really emotional...:'-)
Standing ovation for dis ff olso...for da best ff writer on IF.. ^_^
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Posted: 12 years ago
ho I'm sad honey.. it ended..

Pyar ka ehsaas and Truly magical were the ones close to my heart.. will miss it honey...

how was your b'day celebration dear πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰?.. truly magical ??πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
I will miss it soo much  this was ure ff i read and i got in love wid it...Truly Magical was really close 2 my heart and will always remain there...Man 5 babies Geet had alot of strength...πŸ˜‰
will miss u TM...😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for this lovely ff...truly enjoyed it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg,...it has already ended...but i loved it to the core...n the last parrt n epilogue were awesome...i simply loved them...
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was so beautiful, loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
happy birthday dear
love every details of this
update
wow maaneet with three princess
what truly magical
it i'll be close to my heart
still cant believe truly magical end
impressive cute adorable mindblowing
stunning & outstanding
beautiful & well written
all couple happy enjoying with their
partners & fab kids
i'm overwelmed & emotional
ur reminding my last yrs
of high how so emotianal
to say good bye to friends
dont how to express how i feel
my god bless
thank yu
for making us smile
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey:))

awesome update and I loved this ff sooo much, gonna miss it:((
sooo cute they are having 4 babies:))
 
take care
love miss93
Edited by miss93 - 12 years ago