LETS FALL IN LOVE-ch.10pg.87-21 jane - Page 6

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gd update...
nice promo bt update soon n want long update...
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hey mahi...after chapter one scene 3...you have written chapter two scene 2... Edited by vrshn - 12 years ago
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mahi where r u???
update plz..
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THANKS ALOT *DEAR VRSHN* 4 ADDING INDEX. . .
as u guys voted, here iz da update. hope u like.

CHAPTER:3
SCENE:1

aftr returning home, luv deep told her ,pathetc story of poor boy. arohi cudnt met hm ,bcoz he had slept b4. aftr dinner ,she changd in her night dress, orange ptyala shalwar,and orange sleeveles top. she fall on bed. call shefali 2 told her da morning incident. bt she calmly replied : arohi mere sath bhi aisa hi hota, jb bhi men ksi handsm larke ko milti hun, wo mujhe hr jga dikhai deta he. . .arohi: shutup, pagal. she cuts da call.
' handsm aur wo luchcha, aur wo jo bhi ho mere bed ki neche kese aa skta.' she pull da blankt,closd her eyes, sinkng into sleep. bt hr eyes opnd wide. she jumpd out of bed, and went straight 2 da nxt room door. she cud hear da loud volume of t.v. she knockd da door, bt no response. she knockd again and again. she rush back 2 her room, jump into hs room 4rm wndow. infrnt of her ,a tall muscular boy, jeans and black vast, peeping through da key hole. as her eyes fall on his tattoo, she hardly pull hm back. he turnd around shockd. arohi: mujhe pta tha, ye tum hi hoge. cheap,gnde,ghtya aadmi, tum ne meri famly se jhut bola, abhi sb tumhe dkhe mar k yahan se nkal denge.men abhi ja kr sb ko btadungi. .she turn,bt he hold her arm tightly.
arohi: hw dare u?
arjun pointd fngr 2 her: u shudnt dare 2 talk me like dis. tum janti nhi ho ,men kon hun aur kya kr skta hu? han mene jhut bola aur hazar bar bulun ga, tum kya btao gi? sach ? ye k un ki sharif beti club jati he ya phr sur ka affair he.. mere sch k sath tumhara sch bhi samne aayga, soch lo nuksan tumhara. she lukd hm eyes full of anger,nw dat * is blackmailng her.. arjun: aur sb se pehle, tum itni rat ko ek strnger k sath,us k lockd room men ho, mujhe lgta he shor mcha kr tum apne lye prblm brhao gi. dekho men koi terrist,ya chor to hun nhi, wese bhi(stare her head 2 toe) yahan churane layk kuch he bhi nhi.. 3,4 days me khud chla jaunga. tum bhi chup rho aur men bhi.
he lay on bed : rat buht ho gai he, gud night baby, dream me. well if u want 2 stay here so u cud. . . arohi rolld her eyes in disgust. she jump out 4rm da wndw. arjun shoutd: wndw kholi he,agar irada bdl jay to aa jana (laugh)
precap: dy wer lost into each other eyes,dr lips were inch apart.
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ladke waloko arjun ne kiya welcome??
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last post pg.9
CHAPTER:3
SCENE:1 cntnue

she chekd all da locks of room,fall on bed helplessly. she though all night, wht 2 do ? she is nt going 2 bare dat charcterless in any cost. atlast at 4 in da morning she mk decision : men chup rahun gi , kisi ko kuch nhi btaungi. men sur ki life k sath risk nhi le skti. she stood up. : pehle men mkrand ko dhund kr sur ka matter sort out krti hun ,aur is ka sch samne aa jay ga jb is ki family khud is ko lene aa jay gi. . .
2 days has passed, da worst day of her life. mkrnd ran away 4rm town whn she try 2 cntact hm. arjun, by praising her mom eww food, by listning dj old stories ,by gvng her dad silly busnes technique, by admirng bua designs ,being raj best 4rnd he got da place in dere heart. infact got arohi dining seat, her tea cup and many more...and if she got out of cntrl,brust a single bad word, her all family scold her. on whch arjun alwys gv her a cheap smile.. her all family bcm blind, specialy bua. bcoz arjun helps raj in study. . .
raj while studying: india men itni mehngai kyn he ?
arjun busy wid i phn: kynki tumhari arohi dii pure(cmplt) kpre pehnti hen. .
raj: cheunti(ant) ,hathi ko kese mar skti he ?
arjun: ye keh kr k ,men tumhare bche ki man bne wali hun...
its gettng on her nerve. she was wandring in her room waitng 4 shefali... shefali bump wid arjun on stairs. he gv hr a flattery smile. arohi ran and cm btwn dm,accordng 2 her protect her 4rnd.
arjun: u lukd nice in red. .
shefali: mene to yellow pehna he.
arjun lukd arohi, who was gvng hm a killng look. arjun: i m talkng about ur cheeks colour. .he winkd her,chewing he rush to hs room..
shefali: wow, he is so. . .
arohi angrly: kut** ,kam***
in her room, arohi got ready,wear a sky blue jar trouser wid slvls shrt,rechng her kness. she wrapd da dupata around her neck. chl shefali, i m ready.
shefali: hm ja kahan rhe hen?
arohi: unvrsty ja rhe hen,mkrnd ka aur arjun ka adress lene.. ek bar mkrnd ko cnvnce kr lun, phr is ki famly ko mil kr sb bta dungi.. phr dekhun gi ye kese jhut bole ga...
a ball hit arohi, she rubd her arm and mv 2 wndw angrily. raj wid 4rnds, cheering.
shefali: chor na , galti se lg gai.
arohi angrly: galti? arjun k kehne pr mujh pr batng krte hen. mujhe hit kya to 10 run. men nhi chorungi, is raj ki kher nhi. she rushd angrily, raj seeing her ran on stairs, he reachd arjuns room, arjun try 2 cvr raj 4rm arohi,dy ran in whole room,jumpng on bed,couch. arohi tripd wid arjun and dy both fall on bed. raj ran out and shefali behnd hm. arohi on top of hm,dere lips wr inches apart. dy opnd dere eyes and lost into each other. hs chclt deep flaming eyes staring her shny innocent eyes. hs muscular arm around her waist made her breathng fast. da way her perfectly lips wr trmblng ,made hm sure,dy r still untochd. raj,shefali shoutng brought dm 2 senses. she jumpd out rush out of room. she was tryng 2 hold her breath, reachd dwn stair. da words of dj made her 4gt evrythng.
she reachd 2 da car.shefali: kya hua?
arohi: kal larke wale mujhe dekhne aa rhe hen.
shefali: wow,dats great
arohi: kya great,mujhe nhi krni shadi.
shefali: mujhe to shadi k nam se hi kuch,kuch hota he.
arohi: mujhe kuch nhi hota, a flashback of a bed incidnt cm into hr mind, she drank water,mumrd, mujhe kuch nhi ho skta.
arjun tkng shower, bt da view of her face is wndrng in frnt of hs eyes. her blush cheeks,stammrng eyes,shvr lips. . .no, i cnt thnk about a psyco behnji.. he grab da towel ,dry hs hair.. bcoz of hs bsness, he met alot of beautiful models, grls. bt no 1 evr effct hm like dis,he nvr felt week. bt 2dy, dat rosy pink lips arouse a desire in hm,a desire whch is strong dn hm. . .
precap: rudr: agar arjun sudhr skta he to mujhe arjun aur gauri k rishte se koi aitraz nhi. will updt both precap in nxt post.

hope u like. i want a little help of urs. . .
in whch way u want arohi 2 chnge arjun ?
1. emotional, full of feelings.,dramatc way
2. cool , latest century style. .
and ya u all votd 4 wrkng 2gethr ,instead of marriage. sure naa ?
COMMENT ON DA UPDATE AND VOTE. waitng:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mujhe emo wala change chahiye wid a litl cool style.
Fir se gauri,us drakula ko mar dalo koi. Aur shadi arjun se..dats imposbl. Superb update.luv it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
me agree with madhu..
suprb update...
n ya i want dem to work together...
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want dem to wrk together bt no shaadi btw arjun n dat chudail !!
den i wd pefer emo change
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emotional yet latest n cuuulll style...plz post asap..its gettin jst sooo interestin...me very excited...ya dat stupid gauri is also here bt who cares...thnx 4 d update...tc