LETS FALL IN LOVE-ch.10pg.87-21 jane - Page 2

Posted: 12 years ago
arjun ka charcter dheela hai we want this ff
Posted: 12 years ago
we definite;y want this ff but luv is impossible ko bhi plz plz ignore mat karna..I just love that one
Posted: 12 years ago
mahi continue it yar bt lv impossible ko mat bhool jana...
umm...u r d writer so jaise tumhe thik lage continue kro...bt jaldi..

Posted: 12 years ago
Oye!what a start. Jst super luvd. Cntinue kar yaar. Bt bt bt,pehle wala zaldi update kar. N ya we r all possesive wives of dat ff. Edited by moonkmh - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
ya plzzz dun forget that 1 n start like 1 meet 2nd... like that cool ha but not so much twist like impossible 1 so much suspense but plzzz make it extreme romantic dear and plzz in impossible 1 clear all the past so we can understand it betta

Posted: 12 years ago
plz, cont would love to know how arjun will be as seems so different to the arjun we are used to. love to see how the two of them will fall in love as they both seem poles apart as the saying goes. but yes deff cont.
 
ps: please pm me when you cont
Posted: 12 years ago
mahi update to kar na yaar...do FF hai lekin update nahi...wish I could just call you at my office aur computer de deti aur bolti ki kal sunday hai...just write FF and nuthing else...lekin tere exams bhi hai na yaa risliye tujhe zyada force bhi nahi kar sakti FF update karne ko...
Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER:1

arohi was sitting on da centre of bed, weeping continuously. her dad sudheer,her mom amrit, bua luv deep, her cousin raj, and dj got tired 2 console her.
dad: evrythng is ok beta, stop crying.
arohi: is it ok? crying again.
mom: beta koi bat nhi, nxt time.
arohi: nxt time. . sobs, mene itna hardwork kyaa... and just got 96.47 %, agar raj ne mujhe force kr k icecream na khilai hoti, mujhe flu na hota, meri english k ppr men speling mistake na hoti. . .mere 97%. . .crying again.
sudheer wsper 2 amrit: shefali ko call kro whi use handle kre gi.
dj angry: chup kr. ache marks hen, aise marks to kbhi tere bap ne bhi nhi lye. . .larkyn wale kam kr, kitchen men ja kr cookng sikh, koi acha sa larka dekh kr, shadi ki tyari kro.
arohi: mujhe nhi krni shadi
lvdeep: aur nhi to kya? shadi men kya rkha he ?
dj: tu chup kr, khud to 5 yrs se apne husbnd se jhgra kr k bethi he , is ka bhi dmag khrab kr rhi he. chal uth, kya hal bna rkha he.
AT SINGHANIA HOUSE
purvi 2 dk,savita(her parents)and salil(her husband): arjun ka result aagya he.
dk woriedly: rudr ghr pr to nhi he naa ?
just dn arjun cm dwn stair rubbing his eyes : gud morning evry1, hey purvi salil tum kb aay.
salil: its 2 pm arjun, subha ho chuki.
arjun: ok no problem gud afternoon.
purvi pull arjun ear: prblm he, tu 3 subjects men fail he.
arjun got out of her grip,rubbng hs ear : kya ? only 3?realy men baki subjects men pass kese hua ?
all lukd hm wid open mouth.
savita: beta kyn apne dad ko tng krte ho. rudr bhai sahab kitne preshan he tumhare lye.
arjun: mere lye nhi , apne hair style k lye preshan he.(eatng apple)
dadi: theek ho jayga , achi si larki dekh kr is ki shadi krdo.
arjun while eatng noded in no.
saleel: han salle sahb aap tbhi sudren ge.
arjun: yar ye shadi men kya rkha he, wspr 2 dadi: bache to wese hi hojate hen,chuckld. dadi slapd hm.
arjun: ok guyz ,bye me gettng late.
salil: uncle arjun ki waja se kitna preshan hen.
dk: bger maa k bche aese hi hote hen, bt mujhe umeed he wo bdal jayga.
arohi: kya he shefali ? tu mujhe corner men kyn lai he ?
shefali: sur ne suicide atempt ki he. . .
precap: arjun met arohi

hope u like. kindly press da like button and comment, if u want me 2 continue.
   ~mahi~
Posted: 12 years ago
why did you hve to stop? please continue...would love to read more!
i'm loving the careless arjun and focused arohi!! :D
Posted: 12 years ago
That was great start mahi. Loved both arjuhi. Continue soon. U know we are always waiting for u.

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