aik dil keh do tukhre premeer ff (Discontinued ) - Page 2

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hey great chapter :)))...do continue soon...precap sounds interestin...
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Nice part ... looking forward to read the entry of prem and heer.. gayatri relly need to get the hatred for her doings...

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Great part heer

nice concept

Originally posted by: angelina_angel

nice concept

waiting for more

just writing the next chap and i will update it today. 😳

Chapter 2

after showing so much hatred to gay3 preet goes to a room and locked the door from inside and stand infront of heer's picture which was with a garland.he removed that garland and replaced it with a new one.he stared at heer pic for sometimes and then breakdown infront of his bhabhi picture.kyun bhabhi aap hum sab ko chodh keh kyun chali gain,aur woh bhi itni door keh jahaan se koi insaan nahi lut sakta.aakir apne bhaiya ,veera aur maa ki saza hum sab ko kyun di ,bataye mujhe kyun di apne humme itni badhi saza.aapke jaane keh baad sab kuch badal gaya hai bhabhi sab kuch,aik tarah se mujhe to maa se nafrat hogai hai ,unho ne jo kuch aapke saath kiya uske liye mein unko kabhi maaf nahi karsaktha bhabhi kabhi nahi.mein janta hoon keh aapki maut aik hadsa thi magar agar mom ki wajahse pb ne aapko ghar se nahi nikala hota to shayad woh accident khabhi nahi hua hota mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai bhabhi aapki maut ne hum sab ko hila kar rakh diya tha kyunke uss accident mein aapka chehra poori tarah se jal gaya tha aur pb to aik zinda lash bangaye the.naa woh kisi se baat karte aur na hi kuch bolte bas apki tarweer ko dekhte rehte par maa ko kuch farq nahi pardhta tha unne bas maya bhabhi aur veera se dilchaspi thi.mere dil mein jo unke liye pyaar tha woh aapki maut ke saath hi mar gaya bhabhi.jis din is ghar ne apni bahu ko koya us din maa ne mujhe bhi ko diya bhabhi,wapis aajao bhabhi hum sab ko aap ki buhat zaroorat hai kaskar pb aur meher ko.preet cried and went to open the door when he saw PREM standing there.preet just stared at prem and went away.prem slowly entered and looked the door and goes towards heer photo.he took out heer's photo from the wall and sat down on the bed.
tumko bhi hai khabar
mujhko bhi hai pata
horaha hai juda
dono ka raasta
door jaakar bhi mujhse
tum meri yaadon mein rehna
khabhi alvida naa kehana
khabhi alvida naa kehna
prem remembered all their moments.first one was the soap scene,then the mandap scene in which he stood up for his heer,then when they became one i.e their suhag raat and lastly heer's death.kyun chodhke chali gai tum mujhe heer pata hai mein tumhare bagair kitna akela hogaya hoon.6 saal hogaye hain tumhe koye hue aur in 6 saalon mein maa ne buhat koshish ki mein kisi aur se shadi karlon magar sach to yeh hai keh prem sirf aur sirf heer ka hai aur heer sirf aur sirf prem ki hai.aagar  aaj tum mere saath nahi ho to sirf mere hi wajahse nahi ho kyunke 6 saal phele meine tumhe apni zindagi se nikala tha,is ghar se nikala tha aur agar meine aisa nahi kiya hota tu aaj shayad tum zinda hoti.prem cries bitterly remembering heer and her memories 😭 😭 and hugged her photo and says meine maa ko sirf isliye maaf kiya kyunke agar mein unko maaf na karta to tumhari aatama ko takleef hoti jo mein nahi chahta tha aur preet to mujhse buhat door hogaya hai.hum aik ghar mein rehte hue bhi itne door hogaye.heer yeh sab kyun hua.plzz wapis aajao.
Edited by heer_varsha - 12 years ago

wht the heck! heer is dead???

thanks for the pm...
wonderful update...
heer is alive right?????with chahat...
update the next part soon...

WHAT?!?! OMG!?!?!? Heer's dead😲, Nooo...I'm sure they misunderstood as her whole face was burnt