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JAANE PEHCHAANE-AR ff (Page 2)

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 10:40pm | IP Logged
part 1 was good hun! aww they are shoo cute tehe...keep it up <3

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 3:16pm | IP Logged
hey everyone thnk u for ur lovely comments
i reali appreciate it...n im glad u like AR childhood
2days epi is all about Abhi, Niki n Anji's childhood
enjoy...

                                                   SOME NEW CHARACTERS:


Sonia Malhotra - Niki's Mom


Puneet Gupta - Anjali's Uncle


Reshab Modhi - Abhi's Dad


Lela Modhi - Abhi's Mom


In the cold and misty season in the heart of Shimla there is a small town with friendly neighbours and a group of three friends. 
A small girl, aged 9, is sitting on a wooden swing waiting for her two best friends.

Sonia: NIKKITA!!

The little girl turns around at the sound of her name being called from her house. 

Nikki: Yes mamma

Sonia comes outside to see her little girl sitting on the swing in her pretty pink dress. She walks towards her daughter and sits next to her.

Sonia: Why are you sitting here alone?

Nikki: I'm waiting for Anji and Abhi

Sonia: Oh ok'why don't you go over to Anji's to see if she's going to come out today

Nikki: ok mamma ' she stands up, hugs her mum and runs across the path to Anjali's house. 

At Anji's house

The sound of "I'm a Barbie Girl" blasts out of the stereo

Puneet: ANJALI!! TURN IT DOWN!!!!!!!

The doorbell rang and Puneet went to open the door

Puneet: hello Nikkita'how are you?
Nikki: I'm ok Puneet uncle im just here to see if Anji can come out to play

They both look up the stairs where the music was coming from and they started laughing

Puneet: you better go and check - closes the door as she came in

Nikki ran upstairs to Anji's room

Nikki open the door and saw Anji jumping around to the music, she was a very good dancer, Nikki ran to the stereo and switch off the music

Anji: turns around - Hey!

Nikki: hi are you not coming out today - she went to Anji and gave her a big friendly hug

Anji: looks at the clock - oh my gosh im soo sorry come on lets go is Abhi angry that im late?

Nikki: No have no idea where he is

They laugh and ran all the way downstairs and went to Abhi's house. Abhi's mum opened the door for the two girls.

Lela: Hi girls are you here for Abhi? - looking sad and tearful

N&A: Yes aunty

Nikki: Where is Abhi?

Lela: He went to have a look at his dad's new car

Anji: Wow uncles got a new car'come on Nikki lets go and see it

Nikki: Ok bye aunty!! - Anji pulls her away

They ran down to Abhi's dad's garage and they saw the new car and a little boy's head from the back

Nikki: Who is that Anji? Over there behind the car

Anji: Barely listening to her - huh?

Nikki: Over there?

Abhi's dad came over to meet the girls.

Reshab: Hi girls what do you think?

Anji: Wow uncle this is the best car ever

Nikki: still looking at the back of the car where the person head moved - yes it's a good car uncle

The little head moved towards Nikki when she looked at Reshab and went behind her. 

Abhi: BOO!!!

Nikki: AAHH!

Everyone started laughing except Nikki, who looked scared and angry at Abhi.

Nikki: started chasing Abhi - That was not funny Abhi!

They stopped running.

Abhi: ok I'm sorry - pulling his ears

Nikki: ok you're forgiven - hitting him on the head and then hugged him

Reshab: ok kids come on get going I have to go inside now come on

Anji: Yeh come on let's go and play our game

Nikki: Yeh come on let's play Hospital 

Abhi: yeh and I am head doctor

They walked over to the shed where they normally play.

Nikki: ok I'll be a nurse and Anji will be the patient ok

Anji: ok I will pretend to have a car accident ok

Abhi: yeh and your going to be close to dying ok let's go

They prepared everything for there game and are about to start.

Abhi: ok everything is ready let's play

Anji: ok

They all took there places quickly.

Anji: AAHHH

Nikki: goes to Abhi Doctor there is an injured patient please come quickly

Abhi: ok come on

They put Anji on the bench and started to operate on her.

Abhi: Nurse Nikki we will need more tissue

Nikki: yes doctor - Gives him tissue

Abhi: oh no were losing her quickly 

He pretends to give her an electric shock and Anji burst in to giggles

Anji: oww that tickles

Abhi: oh Anji you spoiled it

Anji: sorry' but that was funny

Nikki: trying not to laugh because Abhi was angry

Abhi: ok are you finished laughing? Let's start again

Anji: wait Abhi remember you brought that new toy from that shop? Go and get it and we can use that to play

Abhi: face lit up - oh yeh! I'll just go and get it wait!

Nikki watches Abhi run all the way to his house. After a while she notices that Abhi was taking a long time to come back and he didn't usually that that long. The two girls waited and waited for him to come.

Anji: started to look worried after some time - Where is Abhi why is he taking long should we start without him?

Nikki: No! He's the head doctor'we can't start without him - she got the feeling that something was wrong
A while later they saw Abhi come out of his house. He walked very slowly and his head was down as he reached them and looked at Nikki and Anji. Before he started to say anything tears came out of his eyes.

Nikki went to him closely followed by Anji.

Nikki: What's wrong Abhi?

Abhi: he looked at her - I have to leave right now'I'm going to leave this place forever'my dad, mum and I have to go Australia'dad got a new job there'and we are leaving now

Anji and Nikki couldn't say anything they looked at each other and then at him.

Reshab: come on Abhi

Abhi hugged Nikki and Anji and ran to his dad's new car, he didn't really want to say bye to his best friends, the quicker the better.

Nikki ran after him.

Nikki: ABHI... ABHI...

The whole family got into the car and drove off. Nikki running behind the car trying to stop it at the same time she could see Abhi looking at her. Anji was behind her, she stopped when the car had started to go much faster and when Anji had finally caught up with her they both stood there looking into the distance of where the car had disappeared. They walked back slowly in silence as sat on the swing. Nikki looked at her side and saw her mum, she started to cry and she hugged her. Then she looked at Anji and saw her hugging Puneet Uncle. Anji looked at Nikki and they hugged each other letting their tears flow freely down their cheeks. Sonia and Puneet both stroked their hair and allowed them to have some time to themselves. Both the girls promised each other that they will never part and they will be best friends forever...


                                                  -~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-
                                                              *DMG*
                                                            ~KAJEN~
Hope u enjoyed it...plz let me know through ur comments :)
and if i get enough i might post another part tonight as well!!


Edited by dmg_kajen_ar - 14 May 2011 at 3:17pm

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 8:11pm | IP Logged
I just read the two parts. It's amazing. I liked the way armaan, ridz and sohan became friends. Felt bad as Abhi got separated from nikki and anji.  Update soon
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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 7:54pm | IP Logged
wow lovely ff cont soon...Smile
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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 12:06am | IP Logged
hey nice ff...continue soon
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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
awesome update i really liked it waiting to read more plzzz pm me whenever u write more. loved it.:)
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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
Starvery nice parts loved them update sooonnn nd Pm me
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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 5:37pm | IP Logged
araja1234---thnks and yeah abhi Nikki anji separation is pretty sad...but its not over yet : )

xooni---thnk u for commenting and i'll post tonight for sure : )

adorableaisha---thnk u i'll post tonight : )

Munchkin5---thnk u soo much umm i'm not sure if i can pm u but from now on i'll probably post                                   regularly : )

avantikaparth---thank u and i'll post tonight and uhh i'll post regularly now so wont need to pm : )

---Thank u sooo much for ur lovely comment it just made my day...and i m sooo srry for not posting earlier but i will post on a regular basis from now on, thnks once again and plz continue commenting  =) ---

 LOVE U GUYS...KIRAN

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