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RainDazzle.AR.Part3 Pg 13. (Page 14)

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
Awsm part frnd.
Rocking part.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
great update.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
RESERVEDDD!

Minzyyy!!! of first of all, i loved how you described Armaan's concert. the choice of words were fab! and OMG i just lovee Rahul and Muskaan! ahh i love you for bringing them in hehe <33 and WHAT THE FUDGE CAKE?!? Riddhima can't be dead! i mean come on! LOL...ahh Minzy tu mujhe pagal kardegii! jaldi post the next partt! <33

PS. i love the tune haha..its so spookyyy! and yess it suits the situation perfectly! 


Edited by NomaLuvsKSG - 13 June 2011 at 12:31pm

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
Awesome part. Ridhima is dead. Update soon and thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 9:02pm | IP Logged
Heya Lovely Minzyyy...

I READ IT...I READ IT...LMFFFAOOO...ok first of all...YOU ARE AN AMAZINGG WRITER...no serioulsy...this is not bcaz i love u (ok, maybe a bit of it IS...lol) but seriously dude...this FF is awesummm...the storyline, characters, emotions...everyfing was sooo amazing girl!!!!! 
i simply loved the whole concept...

PROLOGUE n PART 1:
the prologue itself got me hooked...Ammy dreaming abt AR's magical kiss...ahhh...n then their lovey dovey moments...Ammy's emotional ride thru his past was sooo touching Disapprove Disapprove

PART 2:
Ammy's a LONELY Singer Cry i felt sooo bad for him...oh btw...the BEST scene here was the dream sequence...it was jus sooo perfectly written...i cud actually imagine Ridz in tht tranquil place...my fave. was

"she was sitting on a white swing'holding a flower in the most delicate way he had ever seen'swinging back and forth slowly'She looked Beautiful'he walked up to her slowly and sat beside her''Armaan'.stop staring at me''..she turned her face around to face him and smiled''I can't help myself'I want to look at you for as long as I can'because'because'. I won't be able to have this moment when I wake up''he whispered''I promise to visit you tomorrow'' 
she leaned forward and placed her head on his shoulder''Promise'?''Yes Armaan'I promise''
Heart

dis part made me SADDDDisapproveDisapproveDisapprove they love each other with such passion / / he can actually see her in his dreams weneva he wants...such PURE love...
Awww...Muskii understands him sooo well...true frnds Smile 
n i love WOH LAMHE...its sucha romantic yet sad song...LOVEEE IT!!!!! it portrayed Ammy's emotions soo well!!!!!

PART 3:
Rahul n Muski are sooo cute...Awww, they'r helping him out of his sufferings...
they'r true frndship reminds me of a lil poem...well not exactly a poem but yuh...LOL

True friends are those,
Who care without hesitation,
Who remember without limitation,
Who forgive without explanation &
Who trust without communication. Heart

n the PIANO MUSIC...*thud* dude did i ever tell u tht m a CRAZYYY piano player...i totally loved the GOTH music, ermmm i kinda hunt for such creepy haunting n dreamy kinda piano notes...LMAOOO, thanks for sharing lol

OK, n now..the part where i literally had tears in my eyes...u made me cry Miniii...RIDDHIMA IS DEAD...as in DEAD!!!!! 
GOD how can u do this to us...
(lol, sorry fro being sucha drama queen)
but why'd u turn the romantic AR into DEADLY ARLOL 

u know when i read the whole graveyard scene...i was like...W*FFF!!!!! my Ridzi's DEADCry Cry i honestly cried -______________- 
BAD BAD MINZYYY LOL 
now u HAVE to cover up the story quickly...n NOT with a SAD ending *warns*  m sooo f**kING hooked to this story man, wanna read MORE abt Riddhima's death...n will she ever cum back? :| :| :| :|  LMAOOO...
i know stupid question...but m a SUCKER for happy endings dude, i want 2 see AR happily married in the end, since DMG cudn't make it up to us...i want YOU to get them togethr now... 
IDC if u turn into EKTA MAI for a while...ROFLLL...JK...
ok plzzz continue sooonishhh...i know u hav other priorities as well...but its YOUR FF tht compels me to read MORE, so imma blame YOU for itLOL 
ok now enough of ma gibbering...Cont. sooonn<33  
oh n thanks ALOT for all the PMs sweetheart...
tc...ILYYY<333
JIAEmbarrassed

PS: this is my FIRST EVER long comment on any FF, pheww, hope this makes up for the delay LOL ConfusedLOLmwwaahhh<33



Edited by pinkss - 12 June 2011 at 9:10pm

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
hey
gud one...
armaan's emotions were so amazingly written...luvd it
cont soon
tc
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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 12:01am | IP Logged
omg riddhima is deadShocked
i'm cryingCry
feeling sad fo armaan
glad rahul n muski are there for him
they are such great friendsSmile
can't wait for next part
plz update soon
take care
 
dear u forgot to pm me plz next time do pm me
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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 12:25am | IP Logged
Thats a fab fab part :| I love the concept Minaz ! The dreams Armaan gets bring tears to ones eyes, Riddhima comes in his dreams telling him she shall meet him there everyday , and he would probably want to sleep for a bit longer only to have her closer to him .
Armaan trying to be happy because he knows Riddhima shall be happy that way is immensely touching.

Minaz I love the flow in your writing, you write beautifullyyy and the bonds these friends share makes me smile wide !!!
ILY and cant wait for the next update <3

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