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Posted: 11 years ago
till part10

Awesome story..
Loved Maneet's childhood..
Sad to see Maan on the verge of moving on..


EDITED:
till part 32

Loved to see Maneet bonding...
Their emotions were very well penned down..
Geet is still not all-free..Something is binding her down n only Maan can completely release her..

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Finished

Nice story..
Emotions well portrayed..
I got a little confused with the babies being born and then a shock- that Geet had 4 of them..
Nicely written..
Edited by pearl_warrior - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
nice story 
really 4 kids!!!!😆
Posted: 11 years ago
@smj1977.shruthi: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊
Posted: 10 years ago
jus completed this
really wonderful
the storyline nthe way u shaped up the characters dii
rano is soo disgusting
luved maaneet to core
last but not least the ending its awesome
fantabulous!! dat only four!! ohh cracked me up 🤣
Posted: 10 years ago
Its a beautiful story...


Just awsm...:) :)
Posted: 10 years ago
❤️   ❤️   ❤️   ❤️   ❤️ loved it a lot 🤗 very beautiful ff. Fabulous concept 😃
Posted: 10 years ago
superb👏 story

love it
Posted: 10 years ago
Superbbb nd Beautiful story...i just read it in one go...it's beautifully written...loved it each nd every part...
Posted: 9 years ago
read entire again in one go 
enjoyed fully reading it ..

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