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part 12

18th dec 2008,VNIT
she had brought a gift as usual a pen for him, and made a card and wrote a letter telling her where abouts, today was her viva she would come back and in the evening she would go to the town to post it, she was happy jaise hi unko yeh milega wo aa jaenge mujhse milne, she was blushin hard... Geet tu itni laal laal kyo ho rahi hain... kuch nahin Angali chal tera to roll number 4 hain na... chal chal

they reached the college Geet was roll no. 10... after her viva she was sitting in the corridor with rest of her class mates ... Vicky was boosting... Angali you know she, the external Sameera Kapoor is my bro's girl... your bro... yes, I will definately get god marks... why, she won't favor ... why not I am Vikrant Singh Khurana... that made Geet look at him, she hardly noticed any boys in the class, she was tagged perfect behenji she mentained a low profile... brother of Maan Singh Khurana you know even bro studied here and he was a perfect student bestam best... Geet was not able to listen more she hid behind the pillar OMG MK moved on he did not wait for me... and later she excused herself, Anjali I am not feeling well tu aa jaana main hostel jaati hoan...

she cried her heart out... she took the parcel and kept it in the cupboard.. I hope MK never gets that parcel that I send him, if he wants to move on he can, I will not force myself on him

21st Dec 2008, KM
Maan was in a stale mood it was their 12th anniversary, and still no news... he mustered courage to open the parcel she had sent... and what he found was cards, gifts and letters... each and every one dated a card and a gift for each of the 3 days Vday Bday and MAday... he looked at them in awe... he slowly opened them one by one... they were all intially very sweet ones, then as years went they became a little bolder... the last one had a couple kissing and when you open the card they were in their b'day suit... OMG Geetu where are you... he immediately took his cell and buzzed few numbers and within 15mins he had Rano's number

hello... is it Mrs. rano... its Ms. Rano... can I talk to Geet... she does not live here... can I know where she is... IDK she went just after her 18th B'day... kahan gayi hogi... look mister I am not her secretary and don't ever call again asking for her, though if you want something else I have one more daughter... he cut the call bloody woman... ab Geetu tum kahan ho

he took the letters and arranged them chronologically and started reading them... with each word his heart stabbed... she had poured her pain inthose letters... all those years she had no one for her, his Geetu his Rani was all alone... fighting to meet her basic needs... in her letter dated 21st Augut 2000, she wrote MK how I want to post these letters I even got enough money but stupid me I liked thid gold plated pen and brought it for you and look I again wnet penniless, this card will also have to wait till I get enough funds to buy a parcel ticket

dated 21st dec 2004, the parcel is getting thicker every year I had this money and I went to the post office but they said I will need more money to sent it overseas, last year they needed this much money but this year as the parcel got heavier and plus rates alos shot up, so MK you have to wait for yet another year
 
(next part some time in late afternoon)


Edited by smj1977 - 16 May 2011 at 8:41pm

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Dimaag naa ho na bandye ke paas toh chalna nahi chahiye. . . . Aur maan toh jarurt sey jyada chala raha hai.

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Originally posted by aditiwalia56

Dimaag naa ho na bandye ke paas toh chalna nahi chahiye. . . . Aur maan toh jarurt sey jyada chala raha hai.
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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 8:39pm | IP Logged
nice part...luvd it...Keep writing...

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Haan par uski girl frnd toh hai naa. . . . Where is her father woh apne father key pass kyun nahi gayi. . . . I know uski pass koi contact nahi hai par brij key pass toh hoga father ka nahi toh HP ka hoga.

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
wow..amazing updte

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 9:31pm | IP Logged
beautiful parts.
loved it.
 arrh i hate sameera , I want to kill her.
uske wajay se saare mus,
pehele maan ko ulta samjahya aab uske naam ko leke geet thinks like that.
this vicky ko toh maan ki sirf geet hain.
thank god maan open the percel and read those letter, know about geet's pain.
 hope maan try to find out geet and don't listen that sameera.
 continue soon.

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loved all the parts

glad maan read the parcel.. wow it will be wonderfl to see how they meet & get back together...
thanxs a lot di



Edited by muskanp - 16 May 2011 at 9:55pm

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