General Discussion # 10 - Page 69

Late to notice and late to congratulate ...

Anyways ... Hearty congrats Saadrita ... Nice to see ya name in the dazzling 'dazzler' colour !!! Congrats again !!!

I hate not being able to add emoticons while replying via cell :( ... Anyways congrats again !!

👏CongratS Saadrita for becoming a dazzler👏

its my FIRST try to write a POEM in ENGLISH... i m very bad in ENG n HINDI both... but today sumone reminds me... that i m a POET too... so bear it... 😉 


ACP Sir entered and called DUO at his cabin
tell ABHIJEET be there and DAYA move for a mission;

DAYA feel sad but flew to the town
ABHIJEET felt himself totally alone;

missin accomplished but DAYA did not come back
ACP told ABHIJEET that DAYA vanished from the deck;

ABHIJEET turned tensed and left the place
he wanted DAYA back at any cost n chance;

he reached to the spot and completly shocked
when heard echo of BOSS all over rocked;

he turned his back and stunned to see
nothing behind him except his best buddy;

he comes in anger after watching wink n smile
but knew a SWEET HEART behind that gaint mile;

DAYA told him that in mission he much missed ABHI
so making sum fun with him grant permission by ACP;

ABHIJEET put down all his weapons of tension
he never let down DAYA when having sum fun;

its a small chip of DUO lovely vacation
sumtime ACP gives them stress buster without any hesitation...

thanx alot SUNNY n DEBA...

I want to share my great feeling with all you people.
Actually before being a registered member i was a silent reader of this forum.I was so surprised to see that there are so many
amazing member,there are plenty of beautiful poetry,stories,siggy's.Its terrific.I was surprised by seeing such dedicated and
true fans.CID and this forum is so lucky to have these kind of Fabulous followers.😃
Sorry for writing such long post (I am trying to become fan like you all)😉
This is for u all👏
Edited by maggi.masala - 12 years ago

First of all don't be sorry and secondly apna talent bahar nikalo.

OK Tomorrow is my exam and I am here because I am tired of studying same things again and again. Desperately Waiting for 25th
Edited by sunnyp1414 - 12 years ago

I am not so talented like you people😊

Hi Maggi.Masala thanx for sharing ur feelings...& dnt say sorry ur post is not too much long...& u r right in these forum so much talented people r present...

All the best for your exam and wish that you will shine like a star

I tell you one thing  I also felt the same and truth is I haven't read any book except text books and I straight way wrote a story and realized hum itne bhi bure nahi hai although need lot of improvement. For fun you can write poem, story or anything you like.