Chaand Chupa Badal Mein


Chaand Chupa Badal Mein
Chaand Chupa Badal Mein

Nivren's baby- Part 1

chandmeinchupi Goldie

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 12:27am | IP Logged
Hi! I'm the newbie but have had a scene in my for so long that now I wanted to post it. Hope you like it! Divya is still alive here and this was a scene during the leap.

WinkViren was getting ready to go to office. Nivi was not coming today and she was not feeling well since morning. He wanted to stay behind  and take care of her but there was an important meeting at the site and he needed to go but either way he had made sure that she was in bed relaxing and has all the things she need and if anything was the problem then she should call and let him know. He sat beside her on the bed and he smiled his ever innocent smile. "Mein Jaoo" Viren asked slowly. "Haan Haan Jaoo mein teek hoon viren" replied Nivi with the sweet smile. "Apna khayaal rakna aur khabardaar kitchen ke tharaf gayi tho" he said as he was leaving. Nivi smiled very half heartedly. She had woken up with a very bad headache and then when she was waking up Viren she felt an uneasiness and Viren had made her feel a lot better with some tablets but still she knew that she was not her 100%.

An hour had passed and she could no longer roll around in bed so she slowly climbed down the stairs and went to the kitchen. She laughed remembering Viren's words. Vandana saw her and refused for her to work but Nivi was Nivi and she said she can do it and she was fine. She had kept the vegetables to boil and suddenly her head started spinning. Vandana noticed and said whats wrong. Nivi replied, "nahi bus kuch chakkar sa aa raha hai". Vandna quickly gave her a glass of water to drink. "Tumhe doctor ko dikhana chahiye" she said. Nive reluctantly agreed and decided to go to the nearby clinic. 

Vandana wanted to accompany her in this condition but Nivi had refused saying that she could manage. She waited in the waiting line for a long while and then the nurse called her name. After a few tests and check up's Niv was getting worried and she asked the doctor, "Gee woh kuch problme hai kya" The doctor smiled at her frustation and replied " Gee nahin Congratulations Mrs Sood aap maa banne wali hain. Niveditha was shocked and surprised at the same time. She thanked the doctor and hurried out. A quick phone call to Viren, "hello Viren", "haan bolo niveditha" "woh kya aaj tum ghar jaldi aa sakthe ho" "haan par kuch problem hai kya" "nahi aisi kyuch nahi bas tum aao" and she cut the line. 

Viren thought that something was wrong and rushed to his car. On the other side Nivi returned from the doctor. She was shying already on how she was going to tell Viren this. But she did have a plan in mind. She slowly told Yashodra and Vandana and Chanchal that she was pregnant. They all were elated even the normally arrogant Chanchal was happy on becoming a grandparent, She told then to not tell Viren and that she would tell him but when he arrives to tell him that since she had returned from the doctor she has been in her room and not spoken evn when someone went to see her. They aggreed and gave her the blessings.

Yashodra had told the remaining members of the family apart from Viren and they were all happy. Even Sid was happy for them. Viren came in a hurry and saw the family gathered in the hall and asked everything was fine and they told him what niveditha had told them to say. 

There were millions of questions running in his mind. Is she alright? Did something happen? When he reached their room he saw Niveditha had slept off on the bed. He came round and touched her forehead to see if she was ok. But she seemed alright. Then his eyes fell on the medicine on the dressing table. There was a lot of packets and the reciept from the doctor. Now he was panicking when he heard Niveditha call his name. 

"Niveditha, tumhe kya hua he, tumhe itni dawaayi kis liye di gayi hai" she shyed and took his hand and placed in on her stomach but he still didn't understand or notice the signal as he continued, "tum chup kyo ho bataao mujhe kyi kya hua hai", again she help his hand firm around the stomach and she looked at it. He noticed now! His mind was racing.

Suddenly everything fitted together. Her headache, uneasiness, visit to the doctor, medicine, hand on stomach. this could all mean one thing, She was pregnant. "such" was all he said and she replied with a nod. He lifted her and turned her around before she commanded him to  put her down cuz it wasn't good for the baby. He was elated and she was very happy too. 

Toh mein papa banne wala hoon aur mere dil ub do jaanon ke liye hai. They embraced each other and the final piece of our Nivren Jodi has come together.

Excuse me about the spelling errors and Hope you like it

Edited by chandmeinchupi - 14 May 2011 at 12:57am

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roops82 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 12:39am | IP Logged
Its beautiful dear..Smile

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Starktastic IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 12:50am | IP Logged
me lovin it sweetie Day Dreaming Day Dreaming

let's hope CVs give us some happiness too!!!!!!

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daffodils06 Goldie

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 2:40am | IP Logged
dat was so sweet...
ash_nivren Senior Member

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 7:26am | IP Logged
wow...really nice scene...please do write more nivren scenes...
Honey_berries Senior Member

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 7:37am | IP Logged
Wow dear this is so awesome. I wish we get to see something like this in CCBM. But alas we are setting expectations from the wrong folks. I wish you, Abidah, milee and other great writers of this forum were the creatives this show would have been much better..keep up the good work :-)
anjubala IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 8:50am | IP Logged
wow..beautiful scene..
..Dreamer.. IF-Addictz

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 11:02am | IP Logged
so beautiful dear

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