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[Maaneet FF] Karmas of Love Update New Thrd (Page 8)

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 11:23pm | IP Logged


That was SUPERB Clap

Although my heart went out for Maan seeing his pain Ouch ; this was undoubtedly 1 of the best one to one convo I've read by far Clap
Geet's firm determination & Maan's heartbreak @ the revelation that too on his wedding day from his love was written brilliantly Clap

Loved it RedFlower

& thanks for pm  ...

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 12:31am | IP Logged
Madhu  Hug...Congratulations for the new SS...loved the concept...glad Geet is determined to reach her goal but felt bad for Maan...what a shock on his wedding day...hmmm they are going to live together for Dadima...that too in the outhouse...so much scope for Maaneet moments Day Dreaming...have full faith in u...plz continue my dear...thank u for the PM...TC Smile

Thank You

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 1:36am | IP Logged
till part 2
so Geet got married to Maan...
nice start...
wonder how Maan will react...
cont soon dear...

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 1:52am | IP Logged
wow thats awsome yaar...its so sad to see them like this 

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 2:05am | IP Logged
madhuuu...AngryAngryAngry

how can maan agree for divorce...??? hope unka divorce nahi hua ho...nahi to u r ...Dead.Dead...samjhi...

maan fell in love with her when he saw her,...awww...,...so sweet...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

maan ka toh dil hi toot gaya when geet said all that...feel bad for him...CryCry

geet ne jo kaha ...sahi kaha...but she also felt something...hopefully jab wo saath rahen kuch accha ho...

do write the next part soon...

best line -- Maan didn't want to see his beloved's tears, thus he ignored the stabbing pain in his heart to agree with her demands.

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 3:03am | IP Logged
My  mood is totally off after reading Maan's state,Madhu I hate u for doing this...Angry

before commenting on update,come up soon with an update,

as this is ur punishment kyu ki

meine kitni baar kaha tumne don't put Maan in pain!!!

Beautiful part... loved it!!!

awesome!!!

Beautifully narrated Maan's pain.

The last part of the update was really wonderful.

aww...Maan fall for her at first sight itself,...so cuteHeart

He really loves her,ll she realize that love or ignore it to attain her aim.

well Geet is not to blamed,coz what she said is true for she want to fulfill her mother's dream.

At the end she decided to stay with him that too all alone with him,

now lets she how her heart-beats reach the peak,(like we experience sometimesLOL)and control herself for she is unaware how irresistible is her husbandWink

she herself ll stop this divorce procedures,

or ll they b divorced???Confused

wonderful update...Tongue

update soon...

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 3:13am | IP Logged
part 3
OMG poor Maan...
he was completely heart broken...
hope the next part is a happy one...
cont soon...

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 3:54am | IP Logged
Loved it. . . . But poor i hope he'll manage to convice her not to take revenge. . . . But first he need to be her frnd

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