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[Maaneet FF] Karmas of Love Update New Thrd (Page 24)

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 8:46am | IP Logged
wonderful update madhu...Star

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 1:56pm | IP Logged
awesome update...

loved it...

ye panditji kahan se aa gaye...uff,,...ye daadi bhi naa...D'oh

but i was glad ki maaneet ki saaari baatein i mean gun milte hain...Embarrassed

maan is also very clever,...he understood geet getting uncomfortable n immediately found out a solution...

n wo pandit...usko yaad tha ki 500 nahi pehle 5000 bole...kya pandit hai...LOL

lol...me imagining maan doing a victory dance...too cute...LOL

geet hugged him...chalo kuch shuruat to hui...

lets c what happens next,,,,,

continue soon...

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 3:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyoti_l

awesome update...

loved it...

ye panditji kahan se aa gaye...uff,,...ye daadi bhi naa...D'oh

but i was glad ki maaneet ki saaari baatein i mean gun milte hain...Embarrassed

maan is also very clever,...he understood geet getting uncomfortable n immediately found out a solution...

n wo pandit...usko yaad tha ki 500 nahi pehle 5000 bole...kya pandit hai...LOL

lol...me imagining maan doing a victory dance...too cute...LOL

geet hugged him...chalo kuch shuruat to hui...

lets c what happens next,,,,,

continue soon...
aawww darling kya comment maara hai tune Wink lovely lovely like my very own maan (shh dia ko mat kehna ki maine my own man kaha warna mujhe maar dalegi OuchLOL) geet ne sirf hug kiya tume pata hai mere maan ko (vahi humare feast of love maan) ke saath main kya kya kia Embarrassed uff badmash hai vo Wink
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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 9:44pm | IP Logged
hey everyone!
so here is my dilemma. well i always send every single one of my works to my best friend to read before or usually right after i update. she is my guide, critic, my everything. she is in fact a non-mannetian but thats okay she reads my work LOL. anyway the point i am introducing u to her is because the latest i sent her was karmas of love chapters. although she usually critiques my writing (which i badly need coz i get carried away easily Ouch) she really loved this SS. n i always discuss my upcoming story line with her. n like always i did with this one too saying i would be ending it in 1 or 2 chapters from the last update. she was very upset i was ending it n wanted few more chapters included. she wanted to extend it little more to see how geet is reacting, how maan is handling things.
so here is the real reason of my note (sry for too much bak bak LOL) so i would like to know whether you guys want to prolong the story a few more chapters with more maaneet moments. showing geet's reaction to maan's presence, n vice versa before i wrap the flashback as well as the story too. please please do let me know if u are bored with the pace of the story so that i can wrap it up in a 1 or 2 more updates. u r definitely free to give ur own honest opinion, no hard feelings taken or given Smile u have to let me know else i wont be able to update this Cry

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 9:56pm | IP Logged
I want u to add on few more chapters ...Smile

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 9:56pm | IP Logged
i lik to read more...

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 10:00pm | IP Logged
Beautiful part ...loved it!!!

One month ...all alone in out-house LOL long way to go ...Embarrassed

Sach mein Maan bangaya Joru ka Gulaam hai kya???

Btw mujhe sirf Chocolate wala chahiye not the ordinary oneLOL




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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 10:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Maaneet_09

hey everyone!
so here is my dilemma. well i always send every single one of my works to my best friend to read before or usually right after i update. she is my guide, critic, my everything. she is in fact a non-mannetian but thats okay she reads my work LOL. anyway the point i am introducing u to her is because the latest i sent her was karmas of love chapters. although she usually critiques my writing (which i badly need coz i get carried away easily Ouch) she really loved this SS. n i always discuss my upcoming story line with her. n like always i did with this one too saying i would be ending it in 1 or 2 chapters from the last update. she was very upset i was ending it n wanted few more chapters included. she wanted to extend it little more to see how geet is reacting, how maan is handling things.
so here is the real reason of my note (sry for too much bak bak LOL) so i would like to know whether you guys want to prolong the story a few more chapters with more maaneet moments. showing geet's reaction to maan's presence, n vice versa before i wrap the flashback as well as the story too. please please do let me know if u are bored with the pace of the story so that i can wrap it up in a 1 or 2 more updates. u r definitely free to give ur own honest opinion, no hard feelings taken or given Smile u have to let me know else i wont be able to update this Cry

Carry on ...Pleasure is all our'sWink


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