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-aparichit- THREAD 1 pt11 pg141 6JUNE (Page 109)


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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 3:22am | IP Logged
i am big fan of your writing. . . What a stories deas. . .always waiting 4 next part. . . Truly magic and aparichit. . . Plz send , its sunday yar plz post more than one ply

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seemamary IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 3:29am | IP Logged
Amazing update. continue soon.

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blueopal IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 3:33am | IP Logged
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  that  was  chooo  cute  maaneet  scenes...nice...
looking  fwd...

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 3:46am | IP Logged
nice update...di! you didn't PM me! PM me next time please!!!

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 3:59am | IP Logged
hey... awesome update... loved the part when msk told missed you... 

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pawandeepk001 Senior Member

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 4:00am | IP Logged
Nice part.. Luvd their sweet convo n ofcourse d word 'jaan'..

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 4:09am | IP Logged
awesome part...

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muskaan_cute19 IF-Dazzler

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Hey dear read all the parts and just loved them as by the name was very confused as what it is about but then got to knew what actually it means and from the very first part I found it so interesting k I just loved it.
As the two innocent angels met to get bound into a relation for all their life,They knew not the consequences but the fear surrounded them.They were nervous more of anxious as this was big for both of them,A different emotion building up in them.They had their own demands their own expectations as every one have they were waiting if they got their supply according to the demand(lol economics ka asar hai).People say marriage is not less than gambling its your luck that if you win or loose, as for everyone it doesn't come with all good things or welcome them with a perfect life,for some it is different,for some nothing could be greater than this it seems to be larger than life but some it brings up only problems and trouble and creating a fuss about it.For them it was yet to discover what will this bring into their life either happiness or sadness!!!!!!!!!!!
The confrontation took place they met it wasn't like the moon shined or some stars twinkled really ordinary for the most ordinary people they met their eyes met and the magic happened they both found each other suitable or shall I say more than appropriate.They were left alone to mingle much more comfortably, but somewhere deep within their heart they already made their decisions firm and strong.Although the oral communication too had it effect on them.He found her loquacious but still sweet in her act and she found him completely free from
evasiveness or obscurity he was too simple in his talks rather that was different that she didn't let hm but that a different case as he himself wanted to hear her all his Life the thought came to his mind to get her for ever and ever!!!!!!!!!!!!
The conversation was very short lived soon it ended but with the glimpse of promises to meet again to talk again to be with each other again.As they found the way to be with each other ,a solution to transmit their speech at a safe distance.All this seem to be so new to them at times they were nervous or scared of what???what they were dying for at another moment but to take an initiative was a real big task for both, neither their partners helped them all they needed was nearly a push finally got one but still they were left confused more of amused!!!!!!!!!
The best they could talk was indirectly not to let other know their real intentions or the emotions all these days.Started twisting the conversation as much as they can rather hiding their desperate feelings or those deadly thoughts to hear that sweet or the macho voice.As she started with him getting into but the table got turn and as she being known as naive she started putting volitions on him and with all her innocence she drive him to the edge making him all crazy and making him to blurt out the truth that he was out of control just to listen to her melodious voice.She too tried to continue a verbal conversation with him but all in vain
all she could have courage of doing was actions and make him understand all with her shyness,ooo just wonder how he still managed to understand!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
As nothing could be the best end to their conversation as they fixed up a casual arrange gathering.Both were excited or shall say they were stimulated with the feelings or emotions they never felt ever in their life but this was it.Every second seem to be century
for them but still it was nothing as the thought of meeting itself make them energized with enthusiasm.They were so so much anticipated that the world seem to be turning around them and the steps are not coming where they should actually come but as they were going to be one they already depended on each other support.he made her feel easy as it was nothing to hurry it doesn't mattered how much he had to wait as the whole waiting was worth.The feeling was new, they were completely unaware about the whole thing what is correct?what is wrong all was so confusing.What they want?what the other one like they had no idea complicating things more n more.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Their thoughts were getting perplexed with assuming things about their companion.They didn't knew much about each other but the anticipation was so much to do the unexpected.He being getting angry and her being getting upset didn't help it out but made it worse.But then eventually the mystified point got clear as they both opened it up about their actions and intentions,everything got clear like a crystal but still some images were blurred and yet to be work hard to make them clear!!!!!!!!!!
The day has come they both were waiting eagerly for today they will bind each other into a relation
,for others as for them they already were adhered to each other.He couldn't constrained his feelings anymore as he just took her away from the world and took her to the magical world of their,where he proven her that as he possessed her.He showed his authority over her that now she is his only his and he have all the rights to claim her.As he squeezed her in his embrace just to show close affectionate and protective acceptance.She too drawn herself into the whirlpool of emotions and let goo all other thoughts.As they were confined into each other closely yet tightly totally unaware about the surroundings as it least mattered to them,all what mattered at that moment is just to be in each others arm,the only thought lingering in their mind was to be like this forever and ever!!!!!!!!!!
When a girl is about to start her life or about to step into a new phase of life many thoughts drive her to insanity.She is covered with thousands of insecurities,same was with her she was hovered with so many things about him about them, she was confused with every thought,as she wasn't aware about everything infact anything.She opened up got sorted out her baffled mind and relaxed herself but still as this all was new that insecurity just piled up within her,she so much attached to him that she feared now loosing him.When some one never falls in Love when they does that get very particular about it same was the case with her,she was struck with the thoughts that what if he left her
,which she feared the most !!!!!!!!!!!!
The relation was moving with smooth pace,all was good they were happy although they never communicated but somewhere they didn't just felt.He was so much into the effect of allurement
of her that he couldn't resist towards the temptation he had for her.He could just found himself lost in her beauty and drink it up as much possible as he could,she was an open invitation at least for him,she didn't even mind either it was far way different from her normal ordinary boring life.As she got to discover some new emotions rather sensation along with him yet beside him or within him.Everything felt just so special when they were beside each other,nothing seemed to be bother much as they were lost into each others spell,the magic that they could felt only with each other into each others embrace!!!!!!!!!!!!
All was perfect until he thought of doing something different for her this time rather thinking more of from her point of view.He thought of doing by her way this time as she always wanted that they should talk it but his bad luck he never expected as if it could turn up like this,she was feeling great what he always treated her with but got offended with his sudden change those insecurities piled up within her just got stimulation with these actions of his and she blurted out all the nonsense as possible she could,although shooting up his brain too.As nothing helped at all and the misunderstandings kept up on building resulting into parting their ways!!!!!!!!!
She made a fuss out of it as she was angry more than that she was upset came with her broken heart and broken dream which wasn't even visualize completely till now but all seemed to be devastated now.Both kept on thinking what could went wrong when everything was perfect between them but it was just lack of communication and a lil misunderstanding shoot up and played like a fuel on her small sparks and fired up their relation.The family got sorted out with it but they were still not.It was still as a mess between them,none took the initiative,both had different norms,and got stick to them making other more complexed!!!!!!!!!!
But the destiny already had written their names together and wasn't approving it like this so made them confront each other.As always she only had her complains about him.She could just express her misery in those words but he couldn't let waste few more moments in those baseless quetches so without anymore hesitation he sealed her lips with the perfect and best way to let her know the craving wasn't even less here,he too was on his death bed all these days without her.All was said through his action and by her giving into it,that how much they Missed each other, with all their heart!!!!!!!!!!
Finally the patch up took place and misinterpretation of the words that took place between them was now cleared.They more than happy,amused about each other but all got sorted out and she was once again gone to 7th heaven with that heavenly kiss of his,as nothing could be better than this,it all felt so enchanting for both.They were yet again excited with moving forward together into these new sensations of theirs.All her insecurities were washed away and he could now more easily make it up to her as he knew her more as she was not less than a kid filled with shyness, but the more they came close by heart falling in Love more n more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jab dabbe honthon ko hai,labon ki pyaas
Waise sukhe patton ko hai, barsaat ki pyaas
Jaise amavas ko hai, chandni ki pyaas
Waise humari rooh ko hai, tumhari rroh ki pyaas

Muski darling beautiful ff started yet again by you it was wonderful to read at start wasn't aware about this term but now could understand its depth.the way you write ooo its impossible to explain how we all felt its really so enchanting all seem to be so true and lovey dovey,loving this journey too with you!!!!!!!!!
Thanks or all the pm
Keep writing
God bless you

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