Standing on the edge forever..

Hola people! 😊 Wanna post a poem of mine, I had written some ages ago. 😆

                                            Standing on the edge forever...

Standing on the edge forever,
Hearing echoes like NO NEVER.

At a distance from the pedantic crowd,
When your heart cries aloud.

That feel tears you apart,
The pain again comes to a start.

You are rife with sorrow,
Left without even a singe tear to borrow.

No matter how bold you are,
This time, your fear reaches afar.

The tenability is all gone,
You feel why I were born.

Your soul says there's still a hope,
But the 'past' ties you in a rope.

Shadows of past give ebon blues,
You rewind them and cry hearty hues.

You know the pain is inevitable,
Still, you strive to make it stable.

Though, you find there's nothing to impeach,
Your hands stretch for a reach.

Standing on the edge forever,
When you fall  as just a souvenir. . .

It comes to an end! Comment and/or hit the like tab. 😳 Criticism is heartily welcomed.. 😊

woww... i really liked it chandana... 🤗

keep it up hun...!!!!! 👍🏼

My knowledge of your writing has been scanty, lately. Never got a chance to read much from you, you see. I like this, though and given you wrote it long back, it intrigues me, as I ask you now to write more. This was crisp and well-rhymed and eloquent, well done. Edited by -Kanky- - 12 years ago

This is just beautiful. The implication of each woven word seems to be an individual of its own but at the end it comes together as a whole..

WOW..!! chandana you are too good dear..!🤗
amazing poem😃
keep it up..!!👏

love
tasfia

Hello! 

Amazing poem...loved it..

The most important thing is...you know how to rhyme...and i loved that thing...

Do write more

-Mahi :)

Awesome poem Candy!
You've written it brilliantly!... Do keep posting more of your work here! :D

Originally posted by: itstheclimb

This is just beautiful. The implication of each woven word seems to be an individual of its own but at the end it comes together as a whole..

Thank you.. 😊

Originally posted by: Angel-Pebby

Hello! 

Such lovely words! I kinda love the feel of it. It's like you can a feel someone standing at the edge of a cliff, ow, my poor imagination!, nevertheless...thankyou for sharing it. 

Waiting to hear more from you! 

Thank you for the PM. 

Heylo! :)
Em flattered, thank you ! 😳