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Standing on the edge forever..

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 5:15am | IP Logged
Hola people! Smile Wanna post a poem of mine, I had written some ages ago. LOL

                                            Standing on the edge forever...

Standing on the edge forever,
Hearing echoes like NO NEVER.

At a distance from the pedantic crowd,
When your heart cries aloud.

That feel tears you apart,
The pain again comes to a start.

You are rife with sorrow,
Left without even a singe tear to borrow.

No matter how bold you are,
This time, your fear reaches afar.

The tenability is all gone,
You feel why I were born.

Your soul says there's still a hope,
But the 'past' ties you in a rope.

Shadows of past give ebon blues,
You rewind them and cry hearty hues.

You know the pain is inevitable,
Still, you strive to make it stable.

Though, you find there's nothing to impeach,
Your hands stretch for a reach.

Standing on the edge forever,
When you fall  as just a souvenir. . .

It comes to an end! Comment and/or hit the like tab. Embarrassed Criticism is heartily welcomed.. Smile

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 5:49am | IP Logged
woww... i really liked it chandana... Hug

keep it up hun...!!!!! Thumbs Up

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 7:33am | IP Logged
lovely poem!

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 8:46am | IP Logged
My knowledge of your writing has been scanty, lately. Never got a chance to read much from you, you see. I like this, though and given you wrote it long back, it intrigues me, as I ask you now to write more. This was crisp and well-rhymed and eloquent, well done. Approve

Thanks for the PM.


Edited by -Kanky- - 12 May 2011 at 8:13am

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 10:03am | IP Logged

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-Dark_Fantasy- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 10:11am | IP Logged
WOW..!! chandana you are too good dear..!Hug
amazing poemBig smile
keep it up..!!Clap


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ScatteredCastle IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 2560

Posted: 11 May 2011 at 10:27am | IP Logged

Such lovely words! I kinda love the feel of it. It's like you can a feel someone standing at the edge of a cliff, ow, my poor imagination!, nevertheless...thankyou for sharing it. 

Waiting to hear more from you! 
Thank you for the PM. 

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FragranceOfLove IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 10:38am | IP Logged
Amazing poem...loved it..

The most important thing is...you know how to rhyme...and i loved that thing...

Do write more

-Mahi :)

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