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~*~Part:04~*~

He just touched the door

Ahem:good night….papa,mamma loves u a lot..

 

Next morning was as usual..

There was no change ..

Ahem went to office even before time as he been doing this for past 2 years…

Only differences was his mind was occupied wit work…so he could divert his mind…

In modi bhavan..

Koki was getting ready to back to hospital..

Hetal:kokila..tumhari tabiyat thik nahi..thodi aaram karlo ..main hospital  chali jaungi..

Koki:nahi motababhi..meri dikri wahan takleef main hai main aaram karoon..

Hetal:wo meri bhi dikri hai na..aur wo yeh kabhi nahi chahegi tumhe takleef ho….

Rashi is running behind a cute little boy..

Boy:nai…nai ..muje doodh nai peena..

Raashi:agar doodh nahi piyoge toh main chocolate nah doongi..

Boy:mujhe toh mill gayi hai..do do..

And show two chocolates in his hand..

Raashi:aww..tumhe ye kisne di??

Boy:dad ne…

Raashi:dekha…mujhe pata tha…par beta..chocolates khane se toh daant kharab hojayenge na..

Boy:nai nai….dad ne kaha..kharab nai honge..

Jigar comes down with a cute little girl in his hands..

Raashi:jigar..aap baccho ko bigaad rahe ho…inke daant kharab hojayenge agar aap inhe aise hi bigaadoge toh..

Girl:mom…chilll

Raashi:aww..yeah kya keh rahi hai….mummyji..kaakiji dekhiye na..jigarji ne in dono ko bigaad rakha hai..koi meri baat nahi sunta…

Hetal and koki gives a faded smile to these four people..

Raashi:main door chali jaungi na..tab pata chale ga inhe..koi meri baat nahi sunte.main toh kuch hoon hi nahi na..

Both kids come running to raashi and hugs her..

Boy&girl:mom..plomise hum choshlate nahi khaenge..aul..doodh bhi piyenge..aap bhi math jaana…

Raashi:alley mela baccha..mom ki baat sunoge na..

Boy&girl:haan..

Raashi:toh chup chap aap ye doodh peelo..aur ahana..aap ne ye dress kyun pehna

Ahana:mom ..ye waali dless papa ne bed pal lakha aul aaana ko yehi pasand hai..

Raashi:oho papa ki choice ki dress..

Ahana:yeshh

Raashi:ab bahut baatein ho gayi hai..chup chap doodh peelo..fir aarti bhi karni hai na..mom ka accha baacha dono dono..

Boy:aaj krishhh aarti gayega..aanaa nahi..

Ahana:mom..klish bad boy..aana gud gal..

And gives hi5 to jigar..

Jigar:meri angel….par krish bhi toh superboy ab wo bhi jaldi jaldi doodh khatam kardega..phir dad dono ko bahar lejayenge..

They all does the aarti

After aarti, krish nd ahaana are arguing over something..

Raashi was busy in kitchen..jigar was trying too figure out the reason behind these little peoples argument

Aha:noo!! aana ,baa ko keh degi..klish is a bad boy

Jigar:oho aap dono jhagda kar rahey ho..aur kyun??

Krish:dad ahana is bad..wo keh lahi hai papa love me not

Raashi:doesnt love me baby..(raashi corrects krish)

Jigar:raashi..wo dono jhagad rahey ahi aur tum krish ko correct kar arhi ho..

Raashi:jigarji inki jhagde sirf thodi waqt k liye hotey hai par galthi hamesha k liye..

Jigar:ahana aapne aisa kyun kaha?? Papa loves u both..

Aha:no!! dad..*nods her head*mom..

Goes crying to raashi and hugs her..

Raashi:ahana baby kya hua mera baccha aise nahi rotey..

Aha:dad ne kaha papa loves us both..

Raashi:haan toh sahi kaha dad ne..jaise mumma loves u both waise papa also loves u both.. hai na..

Raashi wipes ahana's tears..

Krish comes running to raashi

Krish:krish not meet papa last night also..

Raashi smiles: krish didn't meet papa last night…

Krish:oho mom..same..

Raashi:wo isliye baccha kyunki aap jald se sogaye tahy aur papa office mein  busy hotey hai na…par papa ne aap dono k liye aaj dresses to choose kiye thay hai na..

Ahana & krish nods smiling ..

Jigar:aur papa ne aap dono k liye chocolates bhi diye hai..

Raashi:jigarji…..

Jigar:go baccha run..baa aur badi baa ko bula lao.. breakfast k liye

They both run

Raashi:ye dono kitna miss karte hai apne mumma aur papa ko..*tears pricking her eyes* galthi kisi ki bhi nahi par suffer ye chaaro karte hai..ye dono apne mumma papa ko dekh nahi sakte..ahem jiju inke itne kareeb hote hue bhi kabhi inse nahi milte..aur gopi..usne to apne bacchon ko kabhi dekha bhi nahi…tears roll down her cheeks

Jigar:raashi..ye toh kanha ji ki marzi hum isse fight nahi kar sakte

Raashi:aisi kaisi marzi kanha ji ki jo apno ko apno se door karde…gopi toh inki kitni badi bhakth hai fir kanha ji unsab ko paas rakhkar bhi door kar diya…in cote bacchon main apne mumma papa se milne ki chaah dekhi hai maine..har din hum inse jhooth kehte haai papa apke liye dresses choose kiye chocolate diye..mumma ne call kiya..par aisa kuch nahi hota hai..ye inke papa mumma k bina adhure hai jigarji

Baa: nahi raashi bahu..ye adhure nahi inhe maa baap ka pyaar toh milta hi hai tum dono se….inhe ahem gopi se milne ki ichcha hai kyunki tum dono ne inhe kaha hai inke mata pita ke baarey warna toh ye dono tumhe hi apna mata pita mante hai………………Bhagwaan bhi jante tum dono ne koi kami nahi chodi inki palan poshan..apne sage bacchon ki tarah..main toh kahungi sage bacchon se bhi badhkar pyaar diya tum dono ne inhe..ab bhagwaan ki lila hi toh hai Krishna ko dobara yashoda aur nand ki palan poshan mil rahi hai..

Just then ahana and krish comes running..raashi wipes her tears..

Raashi:arrey daudo nahi chot lag jayegi.. and runs after them..

Jigar n baa smiles at raashi..

Jigar:yashoda mayya.. and smiles again

After breakfast jigar drops koki at the hospital..

At hospital

Jigar:kaki ji doctor ne kuch medicines k liye kaha hai..main le aata hoon..

Koki:theek che

Koi moves towards gopi's room and yet again finds a flower bouquet at the door..

Ahem never fails to leave a bouquet of gopi's fav flowers at her door..she ignores the bouquet and quietly walk to meet her daughter..

Koki:jay shree krishna gopi dikra….aaj toh tum har roz se zyada sundar lag rahi ho….and put a flower on her forehead….aaj bacche tumhe bahut yaad kar rahey thay….kab unki mumma aayegi..ahana toh badi hi shaitaan hai..usne aaj motabhabhi ko bahut daudaya kyunki use motabhabhi ki saree pasand nhai aayi..ye bacche bhi na..

It was koki ' daily attempt to make gopi break her silence….

At office..

After giving all the necessary medicines jigar reaches office..

Jigar:ahem bhai..

Ahem who was trying to keep himself busy with loads of work..was distracted at his brothers voice

Ahem:haan jigar..

Jigar:bhai wo Singapore wala project k liye aapki kuch signatures chahiye …mr.inhua yong ne aapko Singapore bulaya hai..

Ahem:jigar tumhe toh pata hai main india se to kya Rajkot se bahar ek pal k liye nahi jaa paunga..

Jigar:par bhai wo..maine.

Ahem:koi aur option dekho ya cancel the project

Jigar:bhai wo..maine dhawal ji se keh diya..kyunki wo humare saare international projects dekhte hai wohi Singapore jayenge..

Ahem:hmm thik hai..

Jigar:bhai..signatures..

Ahem:jigar..tumbhi kar sakte ho tumhari bhi hai ye company….and again goes back doing his impending work

Jigar leaves his cabin

Jigar:POV: bhai aap pehle ki tarah kyun nahi ho..mujhe meri galthi par daanta..hamesha mere saath hona..mujhe wo bana jo main aaj hoon..bhabhii aap kyun nahi ho..our lives changed…...nd ahem bhai 's life stopped where it was..

Night:

After office ahem went straight to his favorite place..cliff

Past:

After knowing about gopi's pregnancy..Happiness surrounded modi's….der was no place for any gloom in their life..

No one let gopi do any work..raashi was being the good sister taking gopis utter care

Ahem was taking care too..but in his own non expressing way..

Few weeks later gopi  had to visit doctor for her regular checkup

Now her baby bump is showing up

Gopi was accompanied by ahem and koki….

Ahem and koki were waiting in doc cabin..as gopi was being examined..

For the first time ahem was nervous..the ahem modi was nervous and that too for her wife's checkup wow!! This was incredible….ahem modi who wasn't nervous even at the worst of situation..as he was now!! Few things brings its own magic same was the matter with ahem..his baby..the bundle of joy even before his arrival was giving him such a pleasure….ahem smiled at his own act…

After the doctor examined gopi..

She came back smiling..

Doc:growth is normal..she needs to be careful as her BP is fluctuating..this can be harmful for her as well as for the baby..

Ahem was scared now..he looked at gopi who gave him back a assuring smile..he was relaxed ..but somewhere in his heart he was still worried..

After the checkup they went back to modi bhavan

Koki:gopi vau abse koi kaam nahi karogi samjhigayo..

Gopi:par maaji aap mujhe koi kaam dete bhi nahi ho..

Hetal:denge na..tumhe ab sirf aaram karna hai..agar tum ye nahi karogi toh hum dono bahut naraz hojayenge..

Raashi:sahi kaha mummyji aapne..gopi abse meri mana kar..

Gopi had to take rest whole day..now ahem was bossing over her..taking extra care..

How she loved being taken cared by him..

At night..while sleeping

Gopi was restless..

Ahem:gopi kya hua?? Tum thik toh ho na??

Gopi:haan ahem ji main thik hoon..bas tazi hawa chahiye..

Ahem took  gopi to terrace to getsome fresh air

Ahem:gopi tum thik hona..main mom ko bulata hoon..

Gopi:ahem ji its very late..aur main bilkul thik hoon..they were walking in silence ..gopi broke the silence

Gopi:ahem ji agar hume beta huwa toh hum uska naam Krishna rakhte hai..

Ahem:haan par hume beti hi hogi aur uska naam aahana hoga..

Gopi:ahemji beta hoga….

Ahem:nahi gopi beti..meri angel..bilkul apni mumma jaise cute si….

Gopi was more than happy..with ahem being happy ..and his plans for his baby..she thanked kanhaji umpteenth time..

Ahem:gopi ab tumhe aaram karna chahiye…u need a good sleep..

Gopi looked at him questioning

Ahem:wo maine internet par pada hai..

Gopi though how he was busy in laptop all the time..now she got to know he hav been reading about pregnancy…ahemji kitne khush hai she chuckled at her thought

They walked back to room gopi caressing her belly and ahem helping her walk

 

Present

He smiled at the old days..which vanished in a blink he stared into the space…

Ahem: please laut aao gopi..please

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