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sweetshab

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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
hey all..i've been a silent member on this forum for a long tym..after reading beautiful FF's here i started a one..

hope u all like it..



~*~part 1~*~


We see ahem  jogging on lonely roads of Rajkot and it's a perfect picture of sunrise in the back

 

Maine dil se kaha, dhoond laana khushi

Nasamajh laya gum, to yeh gum hi sahi

 

He is all sad...Emotionless to be precise

 

Maine dil se kaha, dhoond laana khushi

Nasamajh laya gum, to yeh gum hi sahi

Maine dil se kaha dhoond laana khushi

 He comes back home

Gets ready for office and leave not even looking at any one..

 

Today is day when ahem was being honored as best businessman of the year..2 time in a row

 

He is at the function accompanied with his kaka chirag and jigar

He is least interest or rather  had cut off all the ties from world

Bechaara kahan jaanta tha

Khalish hai yeh kya khala hai

Shehar bhar ki khushi se

Yeh dard mera bhala hai

He was physically present there..but his mind and heart was somewhere else

 

Soon he was announced the best businessman'.he takes a the award and leaves the place without saying any word

 

People thought he got more attitude but only few people know whats the real reason behind his tough behavior or attitude

 

This was Ahem modi for everyone

Tough, emotionless and ruthless businessman

 

Jashna yeh raaz na aaye

Mazaa toh bas gam main aaya hai

 

 He walks away on the lonely roads of Rajkot just holding his trophy'.only moonlight to accompany him '..

 

Maine dil se kaha, dhoond laana khushi

Nasamajh laya gum, to yeh gum hi sahi

 He just walks  without any path  or destiny in his mind

 

He witness a happy couple on his way

Kabhi hai ishq ka ujaala

Kabhi hai maut ka andhera

He keeps looking at them and how happy they seem together

Bataao kaun bes hoga

Main jogi banu ya lutera

Kayi chehre hai is dil ke

Najaane kaunsa mera

He just walks away from their feeling pity for himself..

 

Maine dil se kaha dhoond laana khushi

Nasamajh laya gum, to yeh gum hi sahi

 

 

He walk towards the cliff the most loneliest place

Hazaaron aaise phaasle the

Jo Tai karne chale the

raahe magar chal padi thi

Aur peeche hum rah gaye the

 

He stops at end of the cliff

And takes out his wallet

And look loving at the picture in it ..

 

The picture was of our dear gopi..smiling

 

kadam Do chaar chal paaye

Kiye phere tere mann ke

 

He touch the photo and a little very little smile crept on his face..

 

Maine dil se kaha, dhoond laana khushi

Nasamajh laya gum, to yeh gum hi sahi

 

Maine dil se kaha, dhoond laana khushi

Nasamajh laya gum, to yeh gum hi sahi

 

He spend the most of evening looking at the picture..

 

Don't know for how long he kept looking at the pic


then he looks at the sky

 

ahem:hey gopi ke kanhaji..plss mujhe meri gopi lauta do..pls..main use maafi managna chahta hoon bas itni si ilteja hai..plzzz

 

a lonely tear escaped from his eye


Just then he gets a call


plzz do hit the like button


do comments




Edited by sweetshab - 11 June 2012 at 3:14am

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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
edited :
nice title
Ilteja..which means request ryt??

love start shab! loved it!
muuah!!
aww my poor ahem.. what happen to my ahem'sEmbarrassed gopi ?????????
Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue
Tongue do cont sooonnn shab!!
dont take too long plsh!

mwah!


Edited by thejazzgal.s - 11 May 2011 at 1:29am

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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
very nice enjoyable

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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
ILTEJA:

a very good start dear

loved ahem
and the song playing in the background

awww his ilteja ...

wat happend to gopi????

where she is??

many questions are running in my mind

do continue soon

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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
nyc...conti soon :)

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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 3:05pm | IP Logged
Liked the way it started and I'm curious to see where it goes

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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 3:48pm | IP Logged
nice continue

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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 7:57pm | IP Logged
very nice...plz continue...

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