Writers Corner
Writers Corner

India-Forums

   

Chasing a dream - Part 1/Page 3 - 9/06 (Page 2)

yikes Senior Member
yikes
yikes

Joined: 11 November 2009
Posts: 277

Posted: 13 May 2011 at 3:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pixie_n

loveddd it!!!!!!!! BEAUTIFUL CONCEPT..IT WS FUN READING. CONTINUE SOON
 
thanks :)
yikes Senior Member
yikes
yikes

Joined: 11 November 2009
Posts: 277

Posted: 13 May 2011 at 3:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by night13

R! for a Dreamer!

<edit>

Is the dream chasing you or you are chasing a dream! <lol>

And if you are the one chasing a dream,  then your drive and ambition to go after something you want is a Dancer's dream!

Great Start!

ps.. I enjoyed Scenario # 5!
pss..I just love such understanding parents.. :)
 
yep, I'm the one chasing a dream, and yep again, I want to be a professional dancer. thanks for commenting! haha yes scenario 5 does happen too Tongue
yikes Senior Member
yikes
yikes

Joined: 11 November 2009
Posts: 277

Posted: 13 May 2011 at 3:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Angel-Pebby

I just hate the way the parents have the most awesome ways to put a child's life into a cliff hanger, 'We'll see..." Urgh, I hate it when my parents do that!

Right. Okay, back to the story... well, am really intrigued. Very well written. The underlying sarcasm seriously attracted me. 

You better continue soon. 
Do add me to the PM list. :)

yep, I agree! parents really know how to insert a cliffhanger in their' child's life. "maybe" - one word is enough :/
 
thankyou so much :D
Pooj@ IF-Dazzler
Pooj@
Pooj@

Joined: 10 February 2009
Posts: 3078

Posted: 17 May 2011 at 1:07am | IP Logged
Loved it!
Reminds me of the time when I flat out told my parents that I won't be an engineer. They stared at me for a minute,and then shrugged, saying "We didn't expect you to! "
Do add me to the PM list, please. :D

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

yikesScatteredCastle

MrMonster Senior Member
MrMonster
MrMonster

Joined: 02 January 2009
Posts: 376

Posted: 17 May 2011 at 1:48am | IP Logged
Oh yes, the day you wake up and realize that you have to tell your parents. The dreaded of every teenagers life. It's been centuries since I've signed on to India-Forums, and the first post I see is yours, how nice.

I did like the beginning. But it didn't really capture my attention, sort of awkward, similar to when you get struck by the seemingly best idea to have ever passed your mind and you kind of pen down with the story running through your head. It's not edited, that much I can tell, but I do like it, and I can't really say more.

I feel like a total jerk for saying that, because you are a good writer and I've seen that in your past stories. Just don't think I'm being mean, I'm just telling the truth. I will say that the story seems interesting and I would like to see how it develops overtime. I love your characters and I would like to love this one as well. Good luck.
_.serendipity._ Senior Member
_.serendipity._
_.serendipity._

Joined: 14 October 2009
Posts: 487

Posted: 18 May 2011 at 4:07pm | IP Logged
Aparajita!! Big smile Big smile
As expected, this is brilliant! Star The concept looks very promising indeed, and I am sure you will do it full justice! It's got that thing, that I loved about 'Solace' too, the fact that you write about stuff that we can so-o-ooo identify with, and just always manage to hit the nail right on the head with the captivating details you subtly weave into narrative.. I'm really, really looking forward to this!!
And as for the style of the prologue in particular, I love the stream of consciousness type thing that you have going. Your writing flows so smoothly, allowing the story to unfold in the reader's mind in such a natural way. I, for one, like the fact that it's got a feel of not having been edited, even though it most probably was. It makes for such effortless entry into the character's world.
And there, you've done it again, hooked me to your story! Big smile
Waiting, waiting, waiting...
 


Edited by _.serendipity._ - 18 May 2011 at 4:59pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

yikes

iwantitall IF-Sizzlerz
iwantitall
iwantitall

Joined: 08 February 2009
Posts: 17463

Posted: 30 May 2011 at 12:33am | IP Logged
Update. Update. Update
yikes Senior Member
yikes
yikes

Joined: 11 November 2009
Posts: 277

Posted: 09 June 2011 at 9:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pooj@

Loved it!
Reminds me of the time when I flat out told my parents that I won't be an engineer. They stared at me for a minute,and then shrugged, saying "We didn't expect you to! "
Do add me to the PM list, please. :D

hey pooja! haha did that make you feel happy? Wink LOL

okies, will do!

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Nothing like before|Page 18

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 19 20

Author: DUGGUlicious   Replies: 154   Views: 7876

DUGGUlicious 154 7876 29 August 2010 at 8:04am by DUGGUlicious
The scent of the sea- part 4, page 2

2

Author: -Eva-   Replies: 10   Views: 964

-Eva- 10 964 01 August 2010 at 8:32pm by charmyshah001
Idiots ka Jalwa - page 87

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 88 89

Author: *Nishi*   Replies: 711   Views: 18948

*Nishi* 711 18948 30 July 2010 at 9:24am by Girl_2007
Somedays - updated page 41

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 39 40

Author: *Nishi*   Replies: 319   Views: 13456

*Nishi* 319 13456 14 July 2010 at 8:02pm by *Nishi*
False Mirror - Part 3- The Final Part Pg 8

2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9

Author: -Aria-   Replies: 68   Views: 5151

-Aria- 68 5151 22 June 2010 at 2:53pm by -Aria-

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Writers Corner Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index