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FunnyFF:*AbhIya-Shaadi Ke Baad*updated-part28pg.68 (Page 57)

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Posted: 28 October 2011 at 1:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Deepi20

Awesome update! Thanks for the flashback, it helps in connecting the present with the past. Abhiya's anniversary and Nirbhay in trouble is something I'm looking forward to! Tongue Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon Smile


Thnx dear. ya, flashback was defo needed 2 connect present 2 past. I din't write it before as i wanted 2 add some drama.LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.Abhiya's anniversary is gonna b a mess.LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.

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Thnx a lot dears 4 liking this part.Hug

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awsome update.
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                                                       PART-24

 

In the school

 

Nirbhay is unable 2 control himself. He has never felt like this before. He always gets whatever he wants. But 4 this girl, 2day his ego is insulted. He is not going 2 leave this girl so easily. He decides 2 teach the girl a lesson. He notices that teacher has left the class n all of the students r giggling n enjoying. The girl beside him is also laughing with another girl. He can't tolerate her more. He intentionally steps on the girl's long frock n tears it off from the lower part with his shoes..

 

The girl is astonished with nirbhay's behavior. But Nirbhay didn't notice that there were fire in the girl's eyes which is enough 2 burn him. Nirbhay was grinning n very happy . Suddenly the girl screams-"Josh...".

 

Hearing the name , the boy who is seated beside Ria looks at the girl n says " Kya hua Nirali??"

 

Nirali: Bhai, iss ladke ne meri frock phad dia.

Josh: Iska toh main...

 

Josh is going 2 attack nirbhay but at that moment teacher comes into the class.

Josh: wait Nirali. Isko toh hum baadmein dekh lenge.

 

Hearing this, there comes a smirk in Nirbhay's face, which means as if he cares.

 

In the raichand mansion

Abhay is talking 2 pia-

 

A: Pia, Aaj humare 7th anniversary ke liye toh grand celebration hona chahiye. Hai na?Embarrassed

P: Of course. Aaj toh grand party hogi. Par itni jaldi saare arrangements kaise honge?Confused

A: Main aapna P.A Mallika ko kehta hun, woh saara arrangement kar degi.Tongue

 Hearing Mallika's name, Pia becomes furious.Angry

 

P(Shouting)Angry: Bilkul nahi. Woh Mallika meri ghar mein nahi ayegi. kabhi nahi.

A: Come on pia. Tum itna gussa kyun ho rahi ho. Mallika is very hardworking n efficient.Tongue

 

P: I don't care, what is she. Woh ladki sirf choti choti kapde pehenti hai.Dead

A: Tum to aise bol rahi ho jaise ki 7yrs. pehle tum kabhi choti kapde pehenti nahi!!!LOL

P: Lekin, woh Mallika toh tumpe lattoo hai.Angry

A: Jaise ki 7yrs.pehle koi mujhpe lattoo nahi tha!!!Wink

P: Lekin, aab tum shaadishudah ho, aur tumahara do bacchein bhi hai.Angry

A: Jaise ki 7yrs. pehle main shaadishudah nahi tha aur mera becchein nahi tha!!!Confused

 

Saying this abhay stops n looks that color of pia's face has been changed. Her eyes r becoming full of tears . She is looking at him with furious looks. Abhay doesn't understand what has made pia so angry!!!!

 

AShocked: Pia, tum aisi kyun behave kar rahi ho? Maine aisa kya bol dia?!!

PAngry: Itna bada dhokha!! Maine tumse itna pyaar kia , tumse shaadi ki, tumpe bharosa kia, humarai 2 bacchein hain, lekin tumne mujhe itna bada dhokha dia. Ek pal mein tumne humare ghar uzad dia...

AConfused: Yeh sab kya bol rahi ho? aabhi aabhi daily soap dekhke aayi ho kya?

PCry: Tumne sab kuch khatam kar dia.

AConfused: Lekin maine kia kya hai??

P(crying)Cry: Tum pehle se hi shaadishudah ho!!!! Tumhara bacchein bhi hai!!! Phir tumne mujhse kyun shaadi ki, haan , bolo, bolo. I want answers.

AShocked: Kya?!!! Main pehle se married tha!! Mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha. Tumhe kaise pata chala?

 

PCry: Aabhi aabhi tumne bola...

Abhay is totally confused. What is happening ? What's all this rubbish pia saying!!! He tries 2 remember what he has said n he remembers his  last line "jaisi ki 7yrs. ...nahi tha." He understands that pia has misunderstood him. He tries 2 clarify-

 

ABig smile: Oh , that word!! Come on pia, I said it unintentionally. I didn't mean it. Mera muh se bas nikal gaya. Actually main bas ek type ke words use kar raha tha ,toh sab ulta ho gaya.Plz don't cry. Main tumhari kasam khake kehta hun ke main pehle se shaadishudah nahi hu, yaar. Aaab maan bhi jao. it was just rubbish.

PEmbarrassed: I know, tum meri jhooti kasam nahi khaoge. Par main kya karun mujhe shak ho jata hai.

 

ASmile: It's ok. Mood mat kharab karo. Aaj khushi ka din hai.

 

Then they hug each other n abhay says in his mind" Buddhi ho jaogi lekin shak karna nahi chodogi!!!!Angry"n Pia in her mind" Tumhare harkatein hi aisa hai ke mujhe shak karna hi padta haiAngry".

 

Haseena comes at this moment n says-

 

HSleepy: Tum dono yahan ho!!! I was thinking that party ki preparation shuru kar dena chahiye. Aur iss liye maine Mallika ko bulaya hai. Woh saari tyaari kar legi. She is best at this job.

 

Pia makes a face hearing this. But no1 notices that.

 

H: Tum dono bacchon ko pick up karne nahi jaoge?? school chutti ho gaya hoga aab tak.

 

A n P: Ya, we both r going. bye.

 

In the school

 

Abhay n pia reach at school n just then the bell rings. Children r coming out of their classes. Nirbhay n Ria also coming 2wards their car. Ria runs qickly n hugs her mom.

 

PBig smile: aww, Ria. Kaisa tha school?

RTongue: Bahut hi accha. I wish main thodi der aur yahan rukh sakti.

Abhay(making a shocked face)Shocked: Aaj ke liye itna hi kaafi hai. kaal phir aana school mein. Pata nahin saare bacchon ka kya haal kia hoga tum dono ne milke.

ROuch: maine kuch nahi kia , dad. Sacchi.

 

ASmile: Thik hai. Aab jaldi se car mein baitho. Ghar jaana hai.

 

Ria sits in the car n abhay n pia r waiting 4 nirbhay. He is walking too slowly.

 

AD'oh: Aab nirbhay ko kya ho gaya? Yeh aisa kyun behave kar raha hai? zaroor kuch bhayanak shaitani kia hoga. Pata nahi mujhe iske wajah se kya kya sunna padega. Pia , tum aapna beta ko samjhati kyun nahi?

 

PAngry: Arre waah!!! Aab nirbhay sirf mera beta ho gaya, haan? Jaise hi tumhe lag raha hai ke nirbhay ne kuch galat kia hai, tumne usse sidha meri akeleka beta bana dia. Matlab saare musibaat meri sar par!!

 

AErmm: ohho!! Maine aisa kab kaha!! Tumse toh aab batein karna bhi mushkil ho gaya hai. Har waqt sirf ulta matlab nikalti ho. Woh dekho, nirbhay aa gaya. Aab ghar chalte hain.

 

They all were going 2 sit in the car , suddenly Nirali comes running there n shouts 4 pia-

 

NUnhappy: Wait Aunty. Mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai.

Abhay starts laughing. Pia gets irritated with abhay's laugther.

 

PAngry: Abhay, Why r u laughing?

ALOL: Aab pia , tum sabka aunty ban gayi. Sounds good na" Pia aunty". n abhay continues his laughing.

 

Pia was going 2 give him a proper reply but Nirali says-

 

NAngry: Dekhiye , uncle. aap bhi meri baat  suniye.Bekaar hasna bandh kijiye.

 

Abhay stops his laughing with wonder but it's pia's turn 2 laugh.

PLOL: He he he. Aab tum bhi sabka uncle hi ho...

AbhayAngry: Kya hi hi hi. Bacchi ki baat suno. Bolo beta, kya kehna hai tumhe?

NiraliAngry: Aap logon ka beta matlab @#%#%#% Nirbhay ,usne meri kapde phad dala hai.Yeh dekhiye. Aap logon ne usse yeh sab sikhaya hai? aise ladkiyon ke saath behave karta hai? Kapde phadke?

 

Hearing this, Abhay's mouth remains opened n pia's eyes seem that they will come out. Nirbhay is also stunned coz he isn't understanding that how a girl of his own age can talk like a mature person though nirbhay is a vampire but she is a normal girl!!! n moreover, he understands that 2day is his doomsday. n all this is happening bcoz of this girl.Disapprove

 

Then abhay looks at nirbhay n says-

 

AAngry: Yeh sach bol rahi hai?

NSmile: Haan.

Abhay is surprised 2 hear nirbhay's clear cut answers. Abhay thinks " Nirbhay toh mujhe bhi piche chod jayega. Main toh bas ladkiyon ke saath flirt kia karta tha, lekin isne shuru hi kia hai  ladki ki kapde phad ke!!! Baap re, isse abhi se control karna padega. warna pata nahi aur kya kya kar dalega bada hoke.Wacko"

 

Piya controls herself n asks nirbhay in a calm tone-

 

PStern Smile: Tumne aisa kyun kia?

NEvil Smile: I can't answer u.

PEmbarrassed: Tum bilkul aapne dad pe gaye ho. Saare utpatang harkat karne ke baad jab pucha jaye ke tumne aisa kyun kia toh ek hi reply " Main tumhe bata nahi sakta."

NEvil Smile: Dad ka beta hun toh dad par hi jaunga na.

 

Abhay(angrily)Angry: Tumhe toh iska saaza ghar jake milega. Aab Nirali se sorry bolo, aabhi.  

 

NirbhayEvil Smile: Sorry , ni..ra..li. Mujhe tumhari dress phadna nahi chahiye tha . infact dress ke saath saath tumhari baal bhi noch lena chahiye tha.AngryWink

 

Hearing this Abhay puts his hand on nirbhay's mouth, then  picks up Nirbhay n throws him in the car n says 2 pia-

AShocked: Pia, jaldi car mein baitho. Yeh pagal ho gaya hai. Kya kya bol raha hai. Oh no...aab kya hoga.

PConfused: aa rahi hun. Dekho nirali beta, nirbhay ke taraf se main maafi mangti hun. Tum plz usse maaf kar dena.Woh dobara aisa nahi karega. Aur main tumhe naya frock kharid dungi. Promise.

 

n then Pia sits in the car fast n they leave from there.   Nirali is giving a calm but dangerous look n says " Maafi toh usse hi mangna chahiye , jisne galat kaam kia hai. n i swear nirbhay hi mujhese maafi mangega, warna meri naam nirali nahi.Angry" Then Josh comes there n smiles at nirali. Nirali says " Chalo bhai. Ghar chaltein hai." 

 

PRECAP: Abhay gives punishment 2 nirbhay . Nirbhay wants 2 take revenge from abhay bcoz of punishment n in the party nirbhay creates a mess. 

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yipee me first.Party.Dancing...well it was sooo funny..fabulous update.Clap...m cent percent sure they both r maithali n jeh's childrenApproveLOL.LOL...abhay piya fight was funny.LOL..that mind voice part made me ROFLROFLROFL...omg!!nirabhay tho abhay ke record thoddhungeShockedLOL...l..n d precap seems intrestingLOL...m waiting 4 nirabhay's revengeROFL.ROFL...continue soon..

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Originally posted by madhuri16

yipee me first.Party.Dancing...well it was sooo funny..fabulous update.Clap...m cent percent sure they both r maithali n jeh's childrenApproveLOL.LOL...abhay piya fight was funny.LOL..that mind voice part made me ROFLROFLROFL...omg!!nirabhay tho abhay ke record thoddhungeShockedLOL...l..n d precap seems intrestingLOL...m waiting 4 nirabhay's revengeROFL.ROFL...continue soon..


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