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FunnyFF:*AbhIya-Shaadi Ke Baad*updated-part28pg.68 (Page 49)

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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 10:59am | IP Logged
 hi, its good to read  ur ff  after a long timeSmile
...my god u really cracked me upROFLROFLROFL
luved each dialogues LOLLOL...for heavens sake i can't stop laughing yaar LOLLOLLOL..n abhay n jeh's convo was AWESOME...ROFL
 god !!!!!!! ur ideas LOLLOL u made my day ..thnx 4 the pm and do continue soonSmile...

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Posted: 20 August 2011 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Gals_11

Gosh dis was rocking yaar.. too funny.. loved it.. continue soon.. thanx for d pm..lol.


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Originally posted by madhuri16

 hi, its good to read  ur ff  after a long timeSmile
...my god u really cracked me upROFLROFLROFL
luved each dialogues LOLLOL...for heavens sake i can't stop laughing yaar LOLLOLLOL..n abhay n jeh's convo was AWESOME...ROFL
 god !!!!!!! ur ideas LOLLOL u made my day ..thnx 4 the pm and do continue soonSmile...


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Posted: 09 September 2011 at 4:09am | IP Logged
hey nice ff
add me to ur pm list...
 

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Posted: 09 September 2011 at 4:17am | IP Logged
part 3 was so funny..
pumpkin..haha...
loved reading it.
wil read other parts soon...
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Posted: 09 September 2011 at 5:25am | IP Logged
read all the parts n it was so funny...
i loved it
pls continue soon
waiting for ur next update
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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
When will u update the ff?
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PART-21

 

After taking money from abhay jay goes after metz who is inside a shop n seeing a gown. Metz is talking 2 the shopkeeper-

M: i like this gown. Pack it 4 me.

The shopkeeper is a little bit astonished coz he kept this gown 4  fancy dress competition/party as a sample of Victorian age.  he never thought that, now-a-days  this gown can b liked by any1 for another occassion!! He tries 2 talk with metz –

Shopkeeper: X'cuse me ma'm. u told me that u r on ur wedding shopping , so why u r choosing this gown? this is so old fashioned. if u want then i can show u better modern gowns than that.

M: Ahhh!!! I've chosen that means i've chosen that. I'll take that. Who d hell u r 2 stop me from buying that?? Moreover, in my wedding i want 2 maintain my custom of wearing this type of dress.

Shop.k: Custom!! How can u wear that usually ? It was used 2 b worn a long time ago!!!

 

Meanwhile jay enters the shop n sees that metz is quarrelling with the shopkeeper 4 that gown. Then jay steps into the convo n tells metz –

J: Kya metz, tumne ek ghatiya gown choice kiya. Kitna old fashioned hai, bilkul tumhari tarah.

M: Haan , haan, main toh old fashioned hi hun. tumhara uss pia ki tarah main chote chote kapde jo nahi pehnti.

J: har baat ke Beech mein pia ko kyun laati ho?    

M: Kyun? Bura lagta hai? Besharam aadmi kahika. aapni honewali biwi ka saamne khare hoke aapni premika ka side le raha hai..

J(covering his ears): Chi. Chi. kya gandi baatein bol rahi ho. aur kehti ho ke tum rajkumari ho!!!Rajkumari aise baatein bolti hai???

M: Tumne kabhi rajkumari dekhi hai pehle? Tumhara kismat aachi hai ke , meri jaisi sharif rajkumari mili hai .

J: Abhay was r8. this metz is an atom bomb. yeh mujhe zaroor uda degi.

M(Shouting):Kya bola tumne????

 

The shopkeeper is getting annoyed with this quarrel. He shouts n tells-

"Plz can u both keep quiet? this is a shop , not ur bedroom , where u people will start fighting. Plz choose whatever u want 2 buy n give chance 2 other customers also "

 

Metz n jay get embarrassed n shut their mouth. then  jay spokes softly 2 metz-

J: Metz, dear. plz choose that white modern gown. u'll look very beautiful in it. In white u'll look like a white goose.     

 M(Going 2 shout but controls herself n speaks softly):What?? U r comparing me with a goose?? U didn't find anything in this world 2 compare with me??

 

Jay understands that he has used a wrong word n he quickly says sorry 2 metz.

J: Oh i m soo sorry. i din't mean that. i was trying 2 make u understand that u'll look angelic on that white gown rather than that oldie victorian gown.

M(hesitantly): Ok. then i'll take that white 1.

J: That's like a good wify.

Then jay asks the price of the white gown n he remains speechless after hearing the price. The shopkeeper tells that it's a designer dress , so it will definitely cost a lot.

Jay isn't feeling any interest 2 buy that costly dress, moreover 4 metz, who has already swept off his bank account by shopping. He takes the shopkeeper in a side n asks the price of that victorian gown . He gets 2 know that this victorian gown is cheaper than that white 1. So, He tries 2 do something n tells metz-

J: Baby, look. My choice is so rubbish that i've chosen such a cheap white gown 4 u. I m feeling ashamed of myself. I shud have supported u on ur choice. Ur chosen gown is so costly n it'll show ur royal class. I'll buy that 4 u.

M: Maine pehle hi kaha tha. Meri baat maan lete toh itna der nahi hota. Mujhe aabhi beauty parlour bhi jaana hai.

J: Of course. u go, i m coming with ur dress.

metz lefts the shop n jay does the payment n coming out from the shop singing"OO lala laa."

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Abhay was watching all these events outside from the shop. He is shivering by thinking that jay has learned 2 manage his wud b wife very well. Now all of the game will b won by jay after marriage. He won't let metz 2 dominate over him!!! Abhay bangs his head on a wall , n thinks that " I m the world's stupidest husband who doesn't know how manage his wife. i wish i cud  rule over pia but it's my bad luck that i love her so much n this prevents me from playing tricks over her. Chalo koi baat nahi, sabka kismat accha thodi na hote hai. Aab main jaisa hun, waisa hi sahi."  

 

Then abhay goes near pia n heard that shopkeeper is telling pia that "Maam , aab hum shop close karenge. U've 2 leave now."

P: what the hell. maine toh thik tarah se kuch kharidi bhi nahi aab tak.

Shopkeeper: kya??!!! aapne humari aadhe se bhi zyada dukaan saaf kardi, aur kehti hai ke kuch kharidi nahi!!!!

P: Come on, yeh sab toh mera starter tha.

Hearing this abhay is feeling that he will faint r8 now. He goes inside the shop n tells pia-

A: Pia, tum thodi aur time logi toh main mar jaunga. Mera nervous system breakdown ho raha hai. Main faint honewala hun. Mujhe ghar jana hai. Agar tumne mujhse kabhi pyaar kia hai toh, mujhe bachalo.

P: Of course , i love u. Ya, we'll go home r8 now. But before that plz call a van 2 carry my shopping bags ...

Abhay starts feeling pain in his chest where his dead heart is situated.

 

Then abhiya return home.

                                              

In Raichand mansion

Abhay is lying down on the bed . pia brings a boiling  hot water bag n puts it on abhay's head .

abhay screams-

A: yeh kya kar rahi ho?

P: arre darling, jab insaan ke sar garam ho jata hai, tab insan cold –water bag rakhta aapna sarr ke upad. isse aaram milta hai. lekin, tum vampire ho, tumhara blood cool hai,toh tumhare sarr ke upad hot –water bag rakhne se tumhe aaram milega.Buddhu kahin ka. kuch bhi samajhte.

Abhay can't take more pain. he just faints really this time. Pia understands that abhay has been faint . so, she puts her hair near abhay's nose n abhay comes into sense by screaming..

A: yeh kya badboo tha! Kya badboo tha!!

Piya becomes very happy n shouts-

P: Yay!!i knew it, yeh zaroor kam karega. maine thodi der pehle hi hairpack lagaya tha baalon mein.

A: plz, zaldi se nahake aao. aur aachi tarah se shampoo bhi karna.

P: Haan, main aabhi nahane jaa rahi hun . phir mujhe tyaar bhi toh hona hai.

A: kis liye?

P: Bhool gaye? kaal metz n jay ki shaadi hai. aur mujhe aaj raat se hi tyaar hona shuru karna padega i mean manicure, pedicure,hair care etc.

A: Kya? aaj se hi!!!

P: Yes. now i m going 2 bath...bye .

Abhay is thinking that " 2day i won't b able 2  sleep coz pia will keep the light on whole night  n she'll keep torturing me by asking after every 5min that "how i m looking"!!!"*Sigh*

 

The next day

Abhay is waiting 4 pia in the hall. but pia isn't coming down. She is doing her make-up which she started from last night!! Abhay tried 2 go near dressing table before coming in the hall but pia shouted at him n said " Don't u dare. Tumhe kya zaroorat hai yahan aane ka? Tum thik hi lag rahe ho. Saaj sawarke ladkiyon ko charm karne ka idea bhool jao. aur agar tumne shaadi mein jake kisi bhi ladki ko dekha ya kisi ladki ke saath baat karne ki kaushish bhi ki toh dekh lena.Yeh mat bhulo ke tum married ho". Abhay was feeling so sad as usual n though he was trying again 2 ask pia that "then why u r doing make-up?U r also married".But he cudn't as usual.

After 1hour pia comes in the hall n says "Lets go". Abhay looks at her n feels that who's this lady? Does he know her? He remembers that he saw this lady in a shop but she was a mannequin!!! Pia is in hurry n starts telling-

P: kitni der laga di tumne!!! Main kab tyaar ho gayi lekin tum bas late kar rahe ho!!

Abhay comes back from his thought n  recognizes that "Oh ya!! It's pia. my wife."

Then he wants 2 say that " Maine kab late kia?"but he thinks that it can again create a collision. so, he keeps quiet n says-

A: haan chalo.

 

In wedding venue

Abhiya get down from the car n see that metz n jay r standing  outside. Abhiya r surprised. They quickly come near 2 jay n metz n ask-

A: what r u doing outside? U shud b inside. ur marriage shud b going on.

 Jeh replies-

J: tum dono aab aye ho? Shaadi ko khatam ho chuka 1ghanta ho gaya hai.Time dekhi hai tum dono ne?

Abhiya r shocked 2 hear that. Abhay looks at the watch n finds that they r really very late.

Abhay gives an angry look at pia. pia seems shocked.

J: actually abhay, we were waiting 4 u. I want 2 give u back the money which u lent me.

A: Come on, formalities ka kya zaroorat hai. Woh paise tum logon ka shaadi ka taufa samajh ke rakh lo .Kyunki hum zaldi mein taufa lana hi bhul gaye..

J: Nahi. Phir bhi.

A: Plz. Hum waisi bhi late ho gaye. Humein aur sharminda mat karo.

J: Ok. Actually me n metz want 2 tell u something very important.

A: What?

J: We r going abroad r8 now. I've an urgent work there n for that i had a call from there. n this work may take a few years 2 b completed. Then may b we'll come back in this town.

A: What r u talking? u r going?

Metz: Ya, we have 2 go.We wanted 2 take ur leave , that's why we were waiting 4 u. Now, we shud leave. Hope we'll meet sooner or later.

 

Then abhay shakes hand with jay n metz hugs pia. Then they both leave the place.

 

Pia isn't telling a single word. abhay understands that pia is very sad as she has prepared a lot 4 the wedding n she missed the chance. Abhay comes near 2 pia n puts his hand on pia's shoulder n says-

A: it's ok. pia.Lets go back  home.

Suddenly pia starts throwing her jewelleries inside the car  in anger. She opens her hair. then she starts crying sitting on the road. All of a sudden it starts raining also. Pia's make-up washes away with the rain water. With his most wonder abhay sees that now there is no mannequin sitting on the road rather a beautiful angel is sitting there n her hairs r blowing with the wind. He feels the same love again 4 pia which he used 2 feel before marriage. He slowly comes near pia, sits beside her n tells-

A: pia, u know u r looking the most beautiful angel now. i haven't  seen such beauty ever in my life. Those jewelleries n make-up were snatching ur real beauty.I cudn't connect myself with that mannequin pia. But now i feel that my real angel pia is back 2 me.

P: Really?

A: Really. I m telling the truth.

Pia is looking at him with her big beautiful eyes n there r a lot of happiness in her eyes just same as used 2 b before marriage.  

Then abhay kisses pia passionately n carries her in his arms n go back home.Blushing

       

 

~~PRECAP: A new beginning~~

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