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This is so funny...keep updating 

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Nice update! Continue soon Smile
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Thank u all 4 liking it. Whenever i try 2 press like button on ur comments it shows error posting request. What the hell is this? I m annoyed with it. So, i m giving thnx 2 all in 1 post.

Again thnx. I'll update it soon.
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PART-11

Metz  is standing near the jungle. She is busy in thinking abt  the wedding pics. Suddenly some1 comes rushing from the jungle n hugs metz tightly. Metz is shocked. She pushes away the person  n tells " How dare 2 touch the princess maithli pandher? U know , if i want i can break your jaws. I seem weak but really i have the power 2 make ur life hell. U don't know u have come 2 mingle with whom !!!...". The person is more shocked after seeing metz reaction. He isn't understanding anything. He starts telling " What r u telling? Didn't u recognize me ? I m Jay . Jay Khurana." Metz replies " So, what can i do if u r jay? I have never seen u before my whole life. I don't know u!!!!". Jay seems heartbroken.  He can't digest the fact that pia cudn't recognize him!!!! Here metz is telling " I m wondering what has happened 2 this modern world!!! Whenever a boy sees a  beautiful girl , he tries 2 find way 2 touch her !!! Just look at this boy!! He is behaving like a stupid. I wish i cud bite u n teach u a lesson ". Hearing the word bite jay starts feeling doubt abt metz. He is thinking that if this girl were pia then she wud never behave like this though she is married now. So, he thinks 2 confirm his doubt n asks metz " Really u don't know me? I m Jay the werewolf." Hearing this metz tells " Eewww, werewolf!!! That furry fuzzy  creatures! Yuck! I hate them. They look so disgusting with their long hairs all over the body. Yuck, they have no style at all. In fact their face isn't even seen because of hairs. And the most important thing they sometimes don't wear clothes...". Hearing these specially abt clothes  jay starts blushing n becomes like a red tomato. He says slowly " I m  not like them. I always try 2 wear clothes. U can examine me closely n u'll find that i m handsome n not furry or fuzzy..."  Metz looks him closely n tells " Ya, u seem well mannered werewolf. now u r not seem fuzzy also rather u look decent with ur clothes. But why u hugged me? U r also in chance of touching girls like other boys. U all boys r same except my abhay." Hearing the name abhay , jay becomes curious. He asks " Do u know abhay? N why r telling my abhay? Shak hota hain". Metz replies " Tumhe shak nahi yakeen hona chahiye ke woh mera abhay hain.". Jay replies " What r u telling? Do u have any proof?" Metz replies " I can tell u everything." Then metz describes her whole story 2 jay n shows him the wedding pics. She tells " Look at these pics. These pics tells how much abhay loves me. he loves me so much that he created our these pics". Hearing this jay isn't understanding he shud laugh or cry. He is making a confused face. Metz asks him, " Why r u now quiet? Or u r feeling jealous 2 see these pics that how much abhay loves me". Jay cudn't stop his laughing. He covers his mouth with hands n starts laughing. When metz asks him abt the laughing sound jay replies " Ah, u know i m having a bad cold so, i was sneezing n as i m a werewolf my sneeze heard like laughing." N again he starts laughing. He has understood that metz is a real stupid . so, he decides 2 make fun of her. He tells "listen pandher , these pics r very nice. U r looking so beautiful. Really abhay loves u so much. u know these days making these pics is very easy with the help of photo editing softwares. Abhay is an expert in photo editing. I know him very well. Why don't u go 2 abhay's home n asks him 4 ur real marriage? It wud have been much better. " Metz says " Actu...ally i want  2 go. but there is abhay's parents also. What will i tell 2 them?" Jay gives her a mischievous plan. He says " If u want 2 marry abhay then u must have 2 please abhay's parents. At first u have 2 please ur mother in law i mean abhay's mom. Show her that u can be a ideal bahu." Metz agrees very happily with this. She decides 2 please haseena at first.

 

PRECAP: AbhIya returns from holiday. Abhay returns home n sees that Metz is sweeping floor of their house n haseena seems very happy.            

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 6:08am | IP Logged
LOL sdoll awesome update metz se pocha laga diya.Jay toh Abhay k band baja baraat nikal dega LOLLOL
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excelent update.bechara abhay will get a great shock after seeing metz in his house.pls update soon.thanks for pm.
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NIce update , maithalli has become a baiLOL
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wohoo!!metz sweeping!but did haseena thought that she is pia?and will pia also be with abhay! 
update soon.

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