Joined: 01 August 2010
Hello every1. how r u doing all ? I m starting a new FF on abhiya but it's a funny one bcoz there r so many awesome romantic FF on the forum , so i thought 2 write a different one. Though i m not a good writer like our regular FF writers but i'll try my best 2 entertain u. Hope u all will like this.
After a lot of incidents , finally AbhIya r now happily married. But Abhay is against the word happily married bcoz he thinks that happily n married words don't sit properly with each other. He has some valid reasons too like 2day's event.
Pia was going 2 sleep at night on the bed n when abhay was lying down on the bed , pia told him...
P:Why r u lying down? I heard that vampires don't sleep . So, why do u need 2 sleep?
Hearing this abhay cudn't utter a single word.He becomes shocked. He sits in the sofa n decides 2 buy a new divan where at least he can relax. He is sitting in the sofa n sees that pia is sleeping like princess of persia in his bed. He is feeling that before marriage he was a hot vampire with a lots of attitude n he never thought himself as a dead man. But after marriage he considers himself a real dead man. He thinks himself the most ill fated husband in the world. Suddenly abhay starts laughing. no, he isn't in the phase of becoming insane. he is laughing by thinking of his elder brother sid. he is thinking that what wud b the condition of sid now when he is also married?
abhay's elder brother who is married 2 panchi.He was a casanova earlier n an evil minded man . now if u'll look at him u can see bitterness in his face . Sid was very fond of drinking blood but now he has left drinking blood. If u r thinking that he has become a saint then u r wrong. the real reason is whenever sid tries 2 bite som1 n suck blood , panchi's face come infront of him n he feels like vomiting. sid is now living at dobriyal house as a ghar-jamai . only panchi n pia know that he is a vampire n panchi always try 2 save him but her ways r unique.
Precap: next morning abhay n pia have a great fight in the issue of sleeping n haseena comes 2 stop them.
dear frnds , my 1st part got deleted while editing. I've written it again but there is still some lines n fun missing as it was before. i m really sorry but i cudn't remember all the lines properly. I m sad...
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first part was good especially sid
waiting for the next part
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