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MG OS - Unfinished Journey (Page 11)

princess163 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 5:51am | IP Logged

hey, finally edited my space on PAGE 1-THE FIRST COMMENT AFTER THE OS!

please read...
Swati

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 8:41am | IP Logged
it was heart touching...
n painful to read n imagine things tht way too..
in the middle some where i felt like not to read it anymore but somehow read it completely...
few things were just mind blowing...
tight hugz...
as u mentioned abt ur personal experience of ur dad...
i just can say may God protect u nur family...
stay blessed n happy
count me in for next story of love too...


Edited by rabia04ful - 14 May 2011 at 8:42am

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rabia04ful

it was heart touching...
n painful to read n imagine things tht way too..
in the middle some where i felt like not to read it anymore but somehow read it completely...
few things were just mind blowing...
tight hugz...
as u mentioned abt ur personal experience of ur dad...
i just can say may God protect u nur family...
stay blessed n happy
count me in for next story of love too...



Well, thank you so much loving my work ! It really matters to me and my next one coming very soon ! Smile





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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 5:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by princess163

add me in!

will leave a longer one later!
EDITED--------------------------------
oh my god!
I so wanna kill youAngryAngry
why did you have to make it a sad one? why?
Wait, there is no doubt that it was a great piece, but still, it could have been a happy oneCry
You broke my heartDead
Well, beautifully written!
the depth of their love, portrayed in a flawless way...i mean, its just impossible to even imagine what must have gone through her when she heard that news...to see your world shatter in front of
 your eyes...
i can't find words suitable enough to appreciate tis great piece, but please a happy one next!
 
The title track of the show TERE LIYE is perfect for this one-
 
Iss duniya mein jaan gawa, tujhe uss duniya mein haasil kar loon...
khushiyaan hazaar tere liye, jannat nisaar tere liye...
tere liye, tere liye...
 
Love
swati


Okay ! So, here i'm again back ! Big smile

Haila ! You just did something which i was looking for, but little late ! When i was writing this piece, i was looking for some nice and suitable title and just coz i did not find it, i put it on hold for two days ! If i would have slightest idea that you would just simply give it a nice title, i would ask you ! Embarrassed

But, anyways, again so sorry for writing such sad OS ! Smile

But, the thing is that, everyone has their own comfort zone in writing, someone can write funny thing best, someone can romance, happy thing, and mine is, totally sad and dark love storys ! I never find it difficult to write dark and blue endings ! Please do not blame me for my insanity ! LOL

But, the next one, i know i have kept it happy happy, but what i love is dark storys only ! ( You may consider me downright mad and fool ! Wink )

Coming to this one, as usual, you caught the crux ! What i felt and what i wanted to convey, you said it ! Smile

Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and sparing your important time for me and my works ! Hug

Thanks a ton ! Hug



Love,


MaddySmile







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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 6:26pm | IP Logged
omg amazing os...
all thro i was wondering how she is gonna tell but the climax i was shell shocked...
not sure if his wish was granted or hers where she didnt hv to tell him...
but that was a cruel joke played by god on her...
i feel sorry for them both...
loved it...

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 12:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by preethia

omg amazing os...
all thro i was wondering how she is gonna tell but the climax i was shell shocked...
not sure if his wish was granted or hers where she didnt hv to tell him...
but that was a cruel joke played by god on her...
i feel sorry for them both...
loved it...


Thank you ! Well, that was shocked ending ! I got too many complaints for that ! LOL
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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 5:05am | IP Logged
I loved the OS :) It was poignantly beautiful <3

Keep writing!

xoxo
Aanya

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 5:55am | IP Logged
itni dukhi story!! OMG...

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