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Mayur FF- Love will find a way#2 Epilogue Pg 80 (Page 10)

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 9:50pm | IP Logged
loved the update PayalDay Dreaming
sorry for the short n late commentEmbarrassed

thnx for the pm

~jiya~

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 6:10am | IP Logged
awesum...Hug

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 8:51am | IP Logged
Lovly part.

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 3:48am | IP Logged
awww... payal!
such an beautiful update!!
i sooo luvd it...
finally dey got 2 knw each other's feelings!!!
just fab!!!
luvd it!

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 5:17am | IP Logged

Teri meri teri meri kahaani
Ik daastan nayi purani
Chori chori yeh kahani chali hai
Theheri thi jo tere aa jaane tak

Teri meri teri meri kahaani
Ek daastan nayi purani
Chori chori yeh kahani chali hai
Theheri thi jo tere aa jaane tak

Tere aane se maine jaana ke
Tu hi jeenay ka hai bahana
And I dont know why
But I feel good
Tere aane se maine jaana ke
Har safar ho gaya suhana
And I dont know why
But I feel good

Har disha rastaa naya
Har kahin raahein nayi nayi
Meri raahein tujhe paake
Tujhpe hi tham gayi
Humsafar thi magar tu hi
Manzil ban gayi
Teri meri teri meri kahaani
Yeh raastein likhte jaaye bas

Tere aane se maine jaana ke
Tu hi jeenay ka hai bahana
And I dont know why
But I feel good
Tere aane se maine jaana ke
Har safar ho gaya suhana
And I dont know why
But I feel good

Roshni aisi mili
Raat ka chehra khila yahaan
Andhero se gile the jo
Maaf woh ho gaye
The jo maile sheeshein dil ke
Saaf woh ho gaye
Teri meri teri meri kahaani
Jaise raat ko subah mil jaaye bas


Tere aane se maine jaana ke
Tu hi jeenay ka hai bahana
And I dont know why
But I feel good
Tere aane se maine jaana ke
Har safar ho gaya suhana
And I dont know why
But I feel good

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 6:22am | IP Logged

Mann yeh saahib ji, jaane hai sab ji
Phir bhi banaye bahaane
Naina nawaabi ji, dekhe hain sab ji
Phir bhi na samjhe ishaare
Mann yeh saahib ji haan karta bahaane
Naina nawaabi ji na samjhe ishaare
(na samjhe ishaare)

Dheere dheere, nainon ko dheere dheere
Jiya ko dheere dheere bhaayo re Saibo
Dheere dheere, begaana dheere dheere
Apna sa dheere dheere lage re Saibo

Surkhhiyaan hain hawaaon mein, do dilon ke milne ki
Ho! Arziyaan hain nazaaron mein, lamha yeh tham jaane ki
Kaisi huzoori ji yeh lab dikhlaaye
Chuppi laga ke bhi ghazab hai yeh dhaaye
Dheere dheere, nainon ko dheere dheere
Jiya ko dheere dheere bhaayo re Saibo
Dheere dheere, begaana dheere dheere
Apna sa dheere dheere lage re Saibo

Saibo... Saibo...
Dheere Dheere... Dheere Dheere...

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 12:56am | IP Logged

Payal. I read from part 24 till ur 36 and was I getting happier by the update or what!! hayye...bahara bahaara..hua ye pehli pehli baar ve Big smile ///// dheere se hole se pyaar ho jaayega...sorry for randomly juxtaposing songs, the whole set of updates have put me on a high. I loved it to put it lightly...infact i felt all their changes in emotions...sigh...how perfect is that ..now Day Dreaming

Some of my fav parts in all these 12 updates i read are the sudden hugs of nupur (thrice) once in the construction site, then when they missed each other..and the third needless to say fanaa style full on emotional.
That update with all radio songs was classy!! and I was so darned touched and impressed and moved by the last 2 high on emotion updates..just fab!! :)
Glad u r writing this payal ...MN Day Dreaming

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 1:25am | IP Logged
wow really well written payal...
 
continue soon...
please PM me the next time you update...please

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