So finally realization kicked in...i loved the way you put in the excerpts from the time they were to take that decision...and how you wrote about all the emotions that they felt! Amazing job Payal :) You wrote it really well!
Teri meri teri meri kahaani
Ik daastan nayi purani
Chori chori yeh kahani chali hai
Theheri thi jo tere aa jaane tak
Teri meri teri meri kahaani
Ek daastan nayi purani
Chori chori yeh kahani chali hai
Theheri thi jo tere aa jaane tak
Tere aane se maine jaana ke
Tu hi jeenay ka hai bahana
And I dont know why
But I feel good
Tere aane se maine jaana ke
Har safar ho gaya suhana
And I dont know why
But I feel good
Har disha rastaa naya
Har kahin raahein nayi nayi
Meri raahein tujhe paake
Tujhpe hi tham gayi
Humsafar thi magar tu hi
Manzil ban gayi
Teri meri teri meri kahaani
Yeh raastein likhte jaaye bas
Tere aane se maine jaana ke
Tu hi jeenay ka hai bahana
And I dont know why
But I feel good
Tere aane se maine jaana ke
Har safar ho gaya suhana
And I dont know why
But I feel good
Roshni aisi mili
Raat ka chehra khila yahaan
Andhero se gile the jo
Maaf woh ho gaye
The jo maile sheeshein dil ke
Saaf woh ho gaye
Teri meri teri meri kahaani
Jaise raat ko subah mil jaaye bas
Tere aane se maine jaana ke
Tu hi jeenay ka hai bahana
And I dont know why
But I feel good
Tere aane se maine jaana ke
Har safar ho gaya suhana
And I dont know why
But I feel good
Mann yeh saahib ji, jaane hai sab ji
Phir bhi banaye bahaane
Naina nawaabi ji, dekhe hain sab ji
Phir bhi na samjhe ishaare
Mann yeh saahib ji haan karta bahaane
Naina nawaabi ji na samjhe ishaare
(na samjhe ishaare)
Dheere dheere, nainon ko dheere dheere
Jiya ko dheere dheere bhaayo re Saibo
Dheere dheere, begaana dheere dheere
Apna sa dheere dheere lage re Saibo
Surkhhiyaan hain hawaaon mein, do dilon ke milne ki
Ho! Arziyaan hain nazaaron mein, lamha yeh tham jaane ki
Kaisi huzoori ji yeh lab dikhlaaye
Chuppi laga ke bhi ghazab hai yeh dhaaye
Dheere dheere, nainon ko dheere dheere
Jiya ko dheere dheere bhaayo re Saibo
Dheere dheere, begaana dheere dheere
Apna sa dheere dheere lage re Saibo
Saibo... Saibo...
Dheere Dheere... Dheere Dheere...
Payal. I read from part 24 till ur 36 and was I getting happier by the update or what!! hayye...bahara bahaara..hua ye pehli pehli baar ve π ///// dheere se hole se pyaar ho jaayega...sorry for randomly juxtaposing songs, the whole set of updates have put me on a high. I loved it to put it lightly...infact i felt all their changes in emotions...sigh...how perfect is that ..now π
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