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Desire - [Maaneet] - [Chapter 22 - Page 144] (Page 99)

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
thanx 4 d update.
Its amazing.

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 3:26pm | IP Logged
wowww loved it
hope maan helps geet get that dev arrested or even worst punishment

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 3:49pm | IP Logged

awesome

poor geet why maan didnt kill that devilAngry

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 4:19pm | IP Logged
Been waiting for you For well 3 days i think??
glad you upddated...
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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
great update dear
loved it.
cont soon

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 2:51am | IP Logged
Hai Sameeha. I just found dis FF.. Wonder how i got this missed. Really an awesome concept.  I cant believe u are just 12 years old. I really got shocked, u write so beautiful. It doesnt sounds like an 12 years old gal's story. Turly impressive. Loved the way u narrated each part of ur story with everyone POV. Everything was so perfect in ur story till the entry of Dev.  He was such an jerk. I was so scared thinking of Geet's situaion all alone in Manali. Thank god u made them found Geet. I still cant digest the fact that Geet been raped. Poor soul. But why did Dev raped her. What was his motive. Maan is really heartbroken seeing his lady loved been tortured and he wasnt there to help her. And now plz dont make geet pregnant with dev's child. Then tat would be same like in serial. I had already sent buddy request. plz accept it.. thz.. n plz keep writing.. would love to read more.
 

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 9:15am | IP Logged
part 15
thank goodness they found her...
that Dev is a bas****...
poor Geet...
but Maan still loves her...
cont soon...

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