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AVITA FF : ETERNALLY BOUND Uptd Chptr22 Pg39 (Page 36)

UmIbrahim IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 October 2011 at 9:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by danno

good job ji good job
maza aa gaya
just love it
keep it up

Thank you Danno...
Despite giving depressing updates, I am glad you liked it

UmIbrahim IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 8334

Posted: 12 October 2011 at 9:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Gkdlover

OMG...!!!! its amazing, mindblowing. brilliant..!!!! love it...!!! lov the way u update n most of all AvIta's charcters...!!! hope Arpi xcept him as bhaiyajiii btw i really luv avi wen he is in bhaiyajii avatrar..;) jaan avi in prblms..:( hpe everythin get well sooon n AvIta unite..:) awsomeee FF on AvIta...luv thm n miss thm sooo mucchh...hope cv's get an idea 4m ur FF n think 2 make GKD 2..:) update it sooon..:)
Thank you dear...
Avdesh's bhaiyyaji avatar is sure hot
But Arpita being a pure soul finds all this killing, bloodshed and all a little hard to digest...
I am sure most girls out there will share her views...
If you just search the FF Mansion you will find lot many interesting worksEmbarrassed
I also would love to see AvIta back in action
UmIbrahim IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 8334

Posted: 12 October 2011 at 10:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MuktaJaiswal

Uh ! so finally Bauji is back,OuchOuch with her chamcha PJ AngryAngry , n nw her evil plans will cm in action , poor Avadesh, UnhappyArpita is angry n hurt,Cry m pray tht she n Avadesh once again join hands.Wink
Waiting fr next UD Day Dreaming
Thank you Mukta...
Bauji is EVIL to the T...
AvIta will face time hard times ahead but lets hope for the best
UmIbrahim IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 October 2011 at 10:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by newfoundlove

hey nidha! Im so glad that i have so many updates to look forward after my break from IF.
Ill be catching up on ur ffs soon.
Thank you dear...
Missed you around here...
Do come as and when you can
UmIbrahim IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 October 2011 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Chapter 21

Anu was walking down the street immersed in thoughts. She was finding this hard to digest this side of her brother.
She knew that what he did to Siddarth had a justification, but what happened on the streets the other day didn't have any justification.
Avdesh hadn't even listened to the guy. He seemed to believe blindly in Bauji.
I would really like to meet this Bauji Anu thought frowning.

Darkness was gathering slowly. She hurried forward knowing that RV would throw a fit if he knew that she had ventured out without telling him. Her Dad had gone back to Mumbai due to some unavoidable reasons. But he called and checked with RV every two hour. She hated being cared for like this. If anything it was Simple bhabhi who needed care now. She had delivered a baby girl yesterday at a local hospital. All were worried sick  because of the recent events. They were worried that it would take a toll on Simple's health but miraculously the baby was born healthy and Simple was also well off. 
Arpita always said that her bhabhi was a strong woman and Anu understood that now.

Suddenly out of nowhere a hand pulled her into a darkened ally. Anu struggled against the strong arms with all force possible and managed to free herself.

She ran with as much speed as possible. She ran headlong into a vehicle which stopped at the right moment.
Anu was breathing heavily with a hand on her chest.
She felt some one touch her shoulder and immediately jerked back.
"Anu relax its me" Avdesh said, in an unsure tone. He was gearing up to be assaulted by words.
Arpita's had torn his heart apart, his sisters would just add salt to the wounds.
"Are you okay?" he asked moving a little closer to inspect her face "You shouldn't be running about"
"That man" Anu said looking around.
"What man? Did some one chase you?" Avdesh said, his tone evidently showing anger.
Anu regretted speaking out. She didn't want another man dead.
"Bhaiyya please, don't kill that guy" she blurted out.
Avdesh felt like some one had slapped him.
Great now his beloved ones considered him as a mad serial killer.
"Anu I don't just kill anyone and everyone" he said evidently stricken "I do have my reasons for it"
"I hope you explained that to Arpita" Anu said
"I did but she says that everyone has a choice'.she doesn't understand that I was born into this legacy" Avdesh said quietly.
"Everyone has a choice bhaiyya, Arpi is right" Anu said firmly "If we didn't then most of the earth would be leading a life dictated by others"
Avdesh looked sadly at Anu. He knew that he had a choice but he could never bring himself to desert his Bauji. If he left this then Bauji would take it upon herself to do the dirty work and he couldn't risk her getting harmed.
"Come one I will drop you home" Avdesh said opening the passenger seat for her.
Anu knew that there was no use protesting. This town seemed to be filled with goons. Somewhere her heart said that she was safe with Avdesh. His eyes had clearly shown that he regretted this life some what.
They drove to Anu's home silently.
Avdesh opened the door for her and watched her walk away silently. RV came rushing out of the house and caught Anu by her arms.
"Are you raving mad Ananya?" he shouted not bothering to see if anyone was listening "Do you know how worried sick we were?" he said.
Arpita was watching from the door. She had seen Avdesh and didn't want to come out. Avdesh could sense her distress even from the distance. She turned her gaze away when she saw him looking.

"I am fine RV" Anu said with a smile "Bhaiyya" she began but stopped
RV looked up and saw Avdesh.

"Go in and have the dinner, I will come in now" RV said to Anu
She caught his hand looked into his eyes indicating that everything was fine and Avi just helped her. 
"I know don't worry" RV said with a slight smile.Anu walked to the house and went in taking Arpita with her.

He moved towards his best friend.
The guys gazed at each other for a while.
"You okay?" Avdesh asked to break the silence.
"We never really had to ask each other that" RV said with a wistful smile.
Avi smiled back equally wistful.

"RV you do understand why I did this right?" Avdesh blurted out. RV was the only person, in whom Avdesh dared to hope.
"Avi I have known you for long, you have always done things which will benefit other" RV said.

"But the things you are doing here who or what is it beneficial for Avi" RV asked looking equally sad.

"With Siddarth I can understand, I would have done the same where it Anu in Arpi's place'.but on the streets the other day and all the other incidents I have heard from the people here, they show me a different Avdesh. Some of those stories might be false but all of them? It can't be right" RV stopped.

"Avdesh more than that what has hurt us is that you never told us this matter" RV said. He raised a hand to stall Avdesh's protest "I know'.I know it was for our benefit, but do you honestly think that we would have been any worse off than we are now? We would have been angry, sad and all, but finally we may have come together to figure a way out of this"

Avdesh looked at his friend unable to speak.

"Avdesh you are still my best buddy and with all the rights of a friend I am telling you there is still time to redeem'.still time to change''Arpita will never stop loving you neither will Anu's love decrease'.but you have to make yourself worth that" RV finished, gazing into his friends black eyes which showed a myriad of emotions.

Edited by Eowyn - 12 October 2011 at 10:12am

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yoga23priya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 October 2011 at 10:52am | IP Logged
res as usual 

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joliefille Goldie

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Posted: 12 October 2011 at 10:22pm | IP Logged
Hey Nidhs dear
nice Update dearClap
but i hav a complaint ,
very short part yaar, Avita to samne hi nahi aayeCry
huun someone tried to kidnap Anu haanShocked
I'm sure its PJ , BJ's BF heheLOL
Anu to BJ ki band baja degi heheWink
Update soon dear
want to see our Avita together asapEmbarrassed

Edited by joliefille - 13 October 2011 at 11:24pm

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smile.sara IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 October 2011 at 7:07am | IP Logged
Vey good yaarClap...but seriously after so long waitEmbarrassed... its tooo shortErmm...wat sayTongue...
but its getng intrstng in ery epi  Thumbs UpDay Dreaming

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