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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 7:55am | IP Logged
Good updates...

And very nicely done.

Even so, I think it would have been better if u had stretched the story by just 1 or 2 more parts.

This FF had lot of passion, emotions, angry sex and making love.

Such things can't be ended abruptly. I mean, yeah, you've made a great ending but it feels very compressed.

Like too much chocolate in a banana split, you know? No, no.. Like gas compression in gas cycllinders or syringe, you know.

I hope I'm making sense and I await more of your FFs and pls update more of SMP.

And don't make a hurried ending but you are more than welcome to make many hurried updates. LOL  LOL


Edited by yam29 - 13 June 2011 at 7:57am

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Read part 9...such a lame mother...hate geet's mom! UGH!Angry

OMG! No wonder she didn't call Maan or pick up his calls (I caught that BTW...lizzy you're such a smartie)!

And he came...he so found them...more angry love making please! Missing that so much!!!

Awww...Anji is a cutie! Okay time to read the next part! Love it!


Edited by sweet coco - 13 June 2011 at 8:31am

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 8:08am | IP Logged
part 9
knew it Maan will find his Geet and baby Anjali this time...
oh so when Geet and her mom came to know about Geet's pregnancy, hell broke...
poor Geet...

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 8:15am | IP Logged
loved it...it was an awesome SS...loved how geet fought 4 her child...enjoyed evey part of this ss...thanx 4 the wonderful ss...ur an awesome writer

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 8:18am | IP Logged
Loved the ending!!

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 8:20am | IP Logged
part 10
what is Maan DOING?
whats wrong with him?
nice part...

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 8:31am | IP Logged
OMG!!! Part 10 was so sad and yet hot and seductive...love their conversation and he still cares!


But he's being too harsh! And he's still engaged...WTH?! OMG...the ending was so WHOA! Hot, but he's such a Censored!

I love him and hate him at the same time!!!!


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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 8:34am | IP Logged
part 11
oh all this while Geet knew about his whereabouts and also kept news about him...
nice part...

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