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hopehot thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
hii!!!
 
i m back again
 
lizzy how much longer?!?!?!?!
 
BTW how much have u written 10%, ...70%...50%...99% ...
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
LIZZY
i just realized
i might me kind of annoying with the spamming and all
 
so tell me if i get a bit to much annoying
kay????
 
 
waiting
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Hope!! I really hope Liz doesnt mind our spamming but i think she doesnt lol!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow
bloody good update liz
loved it to the core
it pinched my heart when i read how geets mother
treated her and that too when shes preggy
ufff why the hell is maan being soo mean
does he even know what kinda torture geet has been through
and now he suddenly shows up and takes anjali away without
any explaination
man this is how misunderstandings start
why cant both of them just clear what happened and move on with their
life like a happy family for something
alteast they can do it for their baby
i cant believe maan will start a custody battle now
i understand he has a right since he is her biological father but what stumped me
was where was he in all the nine years
common he's a fregging powerful rich businessman
if he actually did have some thought about geet and how she was he couldve atleast
tried to find her with his private detectives and all
btw is geet really getting married and is maan really engaged?????
dude me confused
hopefully the next update will sort everything out
looking forward to it
cont soon please liz!! xD 
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: hopehot

LIZZY

i just realized
i might me kind of annoying with the spamming and all
 
so tell me if i get a bit to much annoying
kay????
 
 
waiting
 



I don't mind, and umm I think 25% done LOL
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: serenelove

<font color="#0000ff"><font size="2">Not hating U</font></font>😛<font color="#0000ff"><font size="2"> cause everybody has different reasons & believes but we don't know complete story yet. may be something happened & that turn the things different way. (she was 16 & not everyone is mature at this age) Yes she is wrong in keeping a daughter from her father
but she has her own insecurities like if Maan marry someone else & that women don't accept the child.
children psychology is way too different than adults & it leaves the eternal
marks
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thank u for not hating me on this issue. I totally agree with all the harsh things she may had to go
through coz she thought maan is not faithful . She has all the rights to judge him for whatevr she thought he did to her but then again she is only the mother of the girl. It takes two to tango, no girl
is the sole bearer of a child. She is no God to inflict her judgement on her daughter or her father. She can say it any lingo but she kept a father daughter away from eachother ...evn criminals sitting behind bars have a right to know that they have a child. Chances r we r only dealing wih heartaches of geet and nothing more. I'm glad this is a fiction but the only problem is it's written by Liz so u ought to go crazy thinking about it :)
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<font color="#0000ff"><font size="2">agree Maan is right, she tricked him & that was wrong. She definitely want him but it's all hazy 4 them</font></font>

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: smj1977

hi

 
pls dont mind my interference
but I think you are moving way to slow
 
why? are you doing this is out of my understanding
 
I have been waiting long for things to turn up in some direction
 
why are you not making them talk?
 
why is that you are not making Maan think as to why he was not told?
 
why will his Geet who trusted him blindly not tell him about Anjali?
 
and if she opts not to have him in her life why will she tell Anjali about him?
 
some questions that need answers
 
as it seems Maan is an intelligent man, then why is he not seeing loop holes in the situations?
 
I am rather confused, or say while reading and re reading I have been missing some facts
 
your works, as I am a regular reader of yours, are perfect
 
I do not feel that there is any need to ask questions when they arise as I know they will be answered in coming updates
 
but now I have lost pateince I want answers as to
 
why Geet did not tell Maan? she knew where is was?
 
is her mother really a wh**e? or was the word just symbolic?
 
and why did Maan not search for her once he was back? and don't tell me he tried, because if MSK tries he gets the answers
 
Shruti
 
 



Hey babe, Alot of this has to do with the small updates since I just don't have time! I hope in the updates today I can answer all ur questions! Thanks for analyzing and giving ur feedback! I really want my readers to think and tell me . . . I wanted to lead it up to something that would make them both snap and be forced to admit their LOVE!

So it's coming . . . TY for all ur questions!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hiii
just read dis ss n its really awesome.
Posted: 12 years ago
CLOSED
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
 
LOVED IT
WAITING FOR 1 MORE PART
Edited by hopehot - 12 years ago