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awesome start ... when are the remaining parts coming?

OMG Lizzz!! How could you end it like that?!?! :O

Originally posted by: bhakbhartifan

wow.. really nice.. so let me summarize that I understood correct.. Maan and geet got separated bcos he went away for studies.. he has no idea that he has a daughter.. Geetanjali n Anjali are same.. and on account of mother's day, Geetanjali finds her father so that her mother can meet him.. wow.. Is this really for Mother's day?

Is it bad? Yes it is for mothers day and there is more to come . . .

Originally posted by: luvabbybaby

Is it bad? Yes it is for mothers day and there is more to come . . .

No.. not at all.. I really liked it, but to enjoy it fully I need to clear my misunderstandings.. I read the whole part like 5 times already.. waiting for next part.. 😊
And for Mother's day it is such a cure gesture on Anjali's part to try to find Maan.. I loved it totally..

U seriosuly confused me..I mean past present..then again past..woha that was a roller coaster..and this has more???????..i mean u love leaving us confused..dont u...hehe

Oh my god lizzy!!exceptionally beautiful.i can't believe u wrote an os for mother's day!all the 3parts were so much magnificent.
I think maan wanted to tell somethng else to her and ended up making luv to her.
Pls do cont dear,it was such a mindblowing surprise!!

wonderful OS...wonder why it is an OS

Loved it!!! Pm me please and omg update soon!!!!!

Originally posted by: muskanp

wonderful OS...wonder why it is an OS

loved it!!!

brillaint

Thanks di and LOL I changed it to ss since I realized I had 1-2 parts more 😆

Awesome... Geetanjali and Anjali is same person ... Right?... ... Poor geet ... I hope mother's day bring happiness to her life