i loved how you described maan's fantasy as he is wiping the water from his back...and now what is geet thinking of?...i hope she tells him to something that makes him completly lose it😆
@rosh. Yay you were first. 😆
I knew you would like the 'arising' bit. I knew it, I knew it! 🤣 Actually I had you in mind when I wrote that bit. Rosh dear you have been a big (and bad) influence on me.
We always see Maan dominate but I wanted to see what it's like when the tables are turned. I don't expect to see Geet like this at all in the show so I thought why not write about it. I'm just happy you all like Geet this way.
Thanks for the wonderful compliments and yes I will continue to write. I still need to improve my writing skills a lot.
@sonali_N. Thanks dear!
@preethia. Yup she's almost there. But will she truly succeed? Hmm, you will found out in the next part.
@anky_1205. What bechara Maan? He deserves it. 😆 And thanks for finding the story interesting.@am_sweet_pari. Res. 😆
@zaara. You too? 😡 A big RES from me too! Humph!
@misschulbuli. I hope it gets more interesting. I don't want it to fall flat.
@t_areeb. Nope! No mercy yet. 😈 😆
@shalini. Yes! I'm killing you all softly. 😈.
@mehr. Good Lord! I'm enjoying this far too much. I love it when you all get frustrated. 🤣 And you read it 6 times?! Talk about giving my ego a big boost. Thanks! 🤗
@jas. Thanks for liking the update and for saying that I'm a good writer.
@hopehot. Thanks!
@mish. I had to look up in the dictionary to see what the word evolving meant. 🤣Shows how much I need to improve my English skills. 😕Thanks for the compliment though. 😆
@maaneetfanatic. Me like jealous Maan too. ☺️
@sergeant. You've done it again. 😲 How do you know what goes on in my brain?
@krishdgr8. Thanks for finding it nice enough!
@mansi. What a huge comment! Me likey! If you are in wonderland after reading the update then I'm in wonderland for making you feel like that. 😳 And thanks for liking me writing skills.
@fourleafclover. Yes poor Maan! 🤣 But isn't it fun to see him like this? 😆 Hmm, Geet really should get an award for this masterplan. Thanks for loving the story!
@sweet scorpio. This is nothing compare to what is yet to come. 😉
@millie_maaneet. Thanks!
@amrutha. Thanks!
@hansasma. Yup! There's a lot of begging and his patience is dearly being tested. 😆.
@EVERYONE. I'm so sorry for the late replies but thank you so much for reading and commenting. 🤗
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