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M/G OS ~Geet's mission~ (Completed)replies p.16 &> (Page 16)

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 3:47am | IP Logged
awesome update mona auntHug..i am spellbound...truly magicalDay DreamingDay Dreaming.. that was a very passionate and torrid updateBlushingBlushingBlushingi am hyperventilatingWinkomg... u have virtually killed me with this one...DeadDeadDeadso at last the mission is accomplished...loved the naughty and dominating geet unlike what we see everydayLOLLOLpoor maan dunno how did he control himself??Evil Smile

you have described each moment and emotion so distinctly that i seem to be visualizing itEmbarrassedEmbarrassedi am still out of breath...LOLi will better take sum rest to regain my senses and read the update again thoroughly...Blushingi hope there was still a continuation...but alas!!!it came to an endOuch

please do write an ff because you are truly capable of that.Embarrassedi wish to read more and more updates from your side.

p.s: aunt now you can't call me a child..because you yourself have pmed me this updateLOLLOLLOLso at last i am free from this baccha thing and allLOLLOL


Edited by mansi95 - 26 May 2011 at 12:01am

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
A novice Writer? R U mad?Confused
That was amazing!!!!!
U write better than anyone i know nd hus FF's i've read nd i've read ALOTEmbarrassed
I thot i was pretty gud but u completely floored me wid this!!!EmbarrassedClapClap
U shud Defo Write FF'sSmile
Im still BlushingEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
It was soo Sweeet,Romantic,Passionate,What we expect 4m MaaneetLOLWink
I wish this is shown in RealSmileTongue
Sara xxSmile

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 5:51am | IP Logged
awsome OS...:))

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 5:02pm | IP Logged
hiii
awesome os
loved it
loved maaneet
geet sooo different
loved da ending
sooo hottt
plz do pm me if u write more
thanksss

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 3:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by riza792

Dead...I'm breathless , almost dead after that explosive session!
I love Sherni Geet and Helpless Maan!Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
That was soooBlushing...Day DreamingDeadDead

You want negative points?? I cant find any!Confused
I always told you that you'll turn out to be an awesome writerClap...and you are..much more than we expected! Muuuaaah!!
Write more!!Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
OMG! I almost killed you! LOL Yay!!!!  Do you know how difficult it is to please you? No no no not 'that way'...ShockedROFL...I mean with the writing. LOL Your tolerance level is quite high in certain areas. BlushingLOL
 
I would like thank you extra much as you have been one of my biggest supporter all the way through. First pushing me to write more and then always beimg the first one to write your comments after every update. Hug  Love you darling!

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 3:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mechantefille

babe ur anything but a novice writer. that was fantastic and definitely worth the wait!
Thanks Amruta! Embarrassed
I'm so happy that you found the update worth the wait. Hug

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 3:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by khwaishfan

Hey dear...hot n passionate last update!! Loved the update...wonderful end to ur OS! Looking forward to anything tha u write...do pm wen u do. Smile U r a brilliant writer! Please do write something soon.
I'm a brilliant writer?! Shocked And this is only my second OS. Stern Smile Wow! Thanks for saying that. Embarrassed
 
So pleased to know that you liked the ending and yes whenever I write more I will try to remember to pm you. But don't hope to much for it...I have a terrible memory so sorry in advance. LOL

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 4:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by babygurl10

Speechless!Clap
Aww, thanks! Hug
Never knew I could actually make people speachless. Embarrassed

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