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M/G OS ~Geet's mission~ (Completed)replies p.16 &> (Page 14)

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 5:34am | IP Logged
omg,,,,,wht a sensual hot end,u r just fab.very well written,,,,me half dead here,u r too gud writer.keep writing sch os...god bless u.

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 5:56am | IP Logged
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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 6:46am | IP Logged

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i loved the grand finale!!!!!!!!!!...that jet was awesome...and the ride was even betterWink...you did a fantastic job writing that love making scene...i know you were thinking it over in your favorite place to come up with ideas...and let me tell you...it worked...you wrote it all out perfectly...i could visualize it ...as if you had painted a picture...mona i hope to read a lot more from youEmbarrassed

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 7:54am | IP Logged
OMG...Great. Loved it, cannot imagine Maan being helpless...lol

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 7:56am | IP Logged
WOW!!! What a hot and passionate update!! Loved it!! Thanks for the PM!!

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 8:02am | IP Logged
very hot and awesomeBlushing...
congo on completing your first os...
tnx 4 pm and if u write more dont forget 2 pm me!!!!!!!!!!!!!11 

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 10:11am | IP Logged
oh my god Mona...i was right the climax was an explosion...Geet was one hell of Sherni here...poor Maan.or should i say lucky Maan...lol...u did a fantastic job...i loved the fact that it was short and sweet...and ur way of writing is also very neat although is naughty...horse riding in jet...very interesting...btw so happy that u didn't give up on the english dialogues...pls don't in future also,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,waiting for ur next OS

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oh my word...that was Day Dreaming Blushing
loved it, do continue writing soon.

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