M/G OS ~Geet's mission~ (Completed)replies p.16 &> - Page 9

awesome and great.. now i have to read the previous one and edit my comment..sorry mona di...

babe ur anything but a novice writer. that was fantastic and definitely worth the wait!

Hey dear...hot n passionate last update!! Loved the update...wonderful end to ur OS! Looking forward to anything tha u write...do pm wen u do. 😊 U r a brilliant writer! Please do write something soon.

It was a fitting end to the stunning OS that u wrote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!U hardly seem a novice writer,i was amazed to hear it,do warite some other things now that this is over🤗

mona it was sooo awesome and hottt. omg geet accomplished her mission but poor maan had to go through alot of toruture😉😉😆. hayeee my  dil goes for him but finally she made him relize that what he said😆.

thanks for pm.

it was brilliantly written and was reallly really good👏

hey...uve yet again done a great job...😊...well i find nothing to critisize as uve really written well and reading ur os was very enjoyable...ya i can tell u wat was diff in ur os and wat i liked most about it...well i liked the fact that we got to see geets passion as usually we get to see maan in a passionate mood and geet responding to him.this time geet initiating it was really nice .then ireally really love to see a jealous maan  and i got to see it.so i guess ur mission of writing an awesome os has been accomplished.u should try many more missions like this and i would always love to be a part of them.😛

awesome and great..

hmmm mona...wat can i say yaar??im bowled over by ur writing...i dnt hve anythng 2 criticize..it was mre than perfect!!i really enjoyed reading ur OS as i got 2 visualize how wud geet be as a seductress...n i loved each n every dialogue tat u had penned 4 her...she was bold n passionate completely the opposite of geet vich v see...i liked her bold talk of not wearing the underw...tat also made my mind go blank 4 a sec..  jus like MAAN ...😆 i didnt xpect tat coming...😉 n had 2 read tat line thrice 2 swallow it hard, let it sink in my mind...the whole OS had the detailed lovemaking vich i dnt get  2 read in any SS..tat makes it stand apart  4 me ...

Mona di🤗