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FF - Mystery of Mrs.MSK Thread#1 | Part 1 to 27 (Page 13)

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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 6:44am | IP Logged
awesome updates.

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Amazing FF.. curious to knw more abt maneet.. continue soon

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wow buddy...I'm sooo happy to see you back with a new ff...And our super commentators Teju,naamteeg,maansee and others...Its gonna be another wonderful journey with everyone here..hehe
Although this one started on a serious note,commentators are doing a great job in making this a hilarious one..

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 1:11am | IP Logged
hi buddies... sorry for the late update... rotten eggs and tomatoes are welcomed...
actually, i was too scared to post this one because it is lil bit serious. please please don't be mad on me. in few days lets go back to our funny scenes. hope you would support me as always.
 
 
 
 

Part 7

Maan comes out of the trance, becomes angry and he turns his gaze away from geet who is still in deep sleep

M:(st) ye geet kahan se aayi? what is she doing in my room? why dadima didn't send her out?

he makes up his mind to send geet out of his room. so he tries to wake up her

M:geet

G:...

M:geet

G:...

maan rolls his eyes, he sits on d bed next to geet and he raises his voice a lil bit

M:geet! now wake up

G:...

M:geet! tumne suna nai maine kya kaha? now wake up (OMG...how can one hear while in deep sleep? ufff...MSK and his unlimited attitude..lol)

G:...

M:geet! ab tumari ye natak ban karo. get up

G:...

Maan has lost his patience and he pats geet's shoulder. now geet is in semi sleep. maan is still patting her shoulder. geet eyes are still closed and she catches maan's index finger and pulls it towards her mouth. maan is confused.

M: geet! ab mera haath chodo

but she didn't hear him properly. she takes his finger into her mouth. maan is annoyed.

M:(st) is she going to kiss my finger or what?

maan is terrified @ his own thought. he tries to pull his finger back from geet's mouth. but before he could do anything, geet bites his finger. maan screams in pain

M:ouch!!!

out of reflex, he immediately pulls back his finger from geet's teeth grip. geet wakes up with a jerk and shocked to see maan so close to her. maan is looking @ his index finger anxiously

M:ye ladki sach me pagal hai. she has bitten my finger

geet realises what she just did n she is more shocked. she gets up and sits on d bed.

G:(says loudly) hey babaji! ye maine kya kardiya? i have bitten the great Maan Singh Khurana's index finger

maan gives geet a murderous look. geet ignores his look and she again grasps and pulls his finger towards her mouth to blow into it so as to soothe his pain. but maan misunderstands that geet is going to bite his finger once again. he pulls back his finger from her grip and shouts

M:ye tum kya kar rahi ho? are you going to eat my finger? ab mera haath chodo

G: chup bilkul chup

maan is dumbstruck.. geet again takes his finger near her mouth and she gently blows into it. maan feels that something strange is happening to him and he goes into a trance. after few seconds, he comes out of d trance and goes back to MSK mode. geet is still blowing into his finger. maan pulls his finger from her grip forcibly

M:(shouts) bas. bohat hogaya

geet is shocked and she starts to stumble nonstop...

G:maan! kya ye aapka ungli hai?

M:(confused)

G: ufff...mera matlab hai...mujhe nai patata ki ye aap ka ungli hai

maan is more confused

G: haan maan! i thought it was my finger

geet herself couldn't understand what she is saying.

G:(st)geet! what are you saying? it doesn't make any sense. koi bath nai. now maintain this track and save yourself

maan is silently watching her changing expressions.

G: maan! trust me. really i didn't know that it was your finger. had i known that, at least i would have asked for your permission before biting it

M:(sarcastically) permission?

G:ji

M:to bite my finger?

G: ji

maan rolls his eyes

G:wo kya hena? mom has taught me that we should not use other's property without their permission

Hearing what she just said, maan goes silent and he is lost somewhere. geet notices it. but she continues her bak bak

G: maan! haven't you heard of a thing called thimble?

maan comes out of this thoughts by her question. geet smiles to herself.

M: kya kaha tumne?

G: thimble

M: kya?

G:ufff...itna bada business man hai. par ye simple cheese bhi aap ne nai janthe

M:geeettt!

G:teek hai. if you don't know what a thimble is, just say it plainly. but why are you getting angry on your poor wife

M:stop it geet

G: oh! that means you really don't know what a thimble is. let me explain it to you. a thimble is a small cap like thing which is worn on fingers to protect them from injuries. had you worn a thimble, you could have avoided this damage to your finger.

maan is too bored at her class on precautionary measures.

M:(shouts) chup bilkul chup

G: maan!sab kuch aap ke vaja se hua. y r u shouting @me?

M:(sarcastically) mere vaja se?

G: haan! why did you put your index finger inside my mouth?

maam is dumbstruck

M:(st) she is being impossible

G: boliyena maan! why did you do like that? do you want to play with your wife?

maan is annoyed and lost his cool

M:(shouts) who are you?

G: maan! i'm the one who bit your finger just now. have you forgotten it that soon

maan understands that geet is trying to evade his question

M: now stop your lies

but geet tries to avoid the serious discussion about their shaadi, atleast for today. so she again talks about the finger bite issue to divert maan

G: nai maan! mein sach mein sach keh rahi hu. i only bit your index finger. now see my teeth impressions on your finger

geet points to his index finger which was bitten by her.

maan doesn't realise what he is doing. so he blindly follows geet's instructions and looks at his poor finger.

G: maan! do you believe me now?

maan stares @ her angrily

G: teek hai. if you can't believe it, now have a look on my strong teeth that bit your finger.

she closes her eyes and opens her mouth widely and shows to him all her 36 teeth, as if Maan Singh Khurana is a dentist.

maan is amused by her act. he is lost in her baby face. after few seconds he comes out of d trance and shouts

M:ab tumari muv ban karo

geet opens her eyes and smirks @ him

G: kyun? are you scared that i'll bite your finger again?

M: stop it

G: teek hai. i'll stop. hereafter i won't bite you

M: geeettt!!

G:trust me maan. i won't bite you again. it is my promise

Maan is tired of geet's bak bak. he lost his patience. he pulls her towards him and covers her mouth with his palm. (hey buddies! at this point of story MSK can't use AKs to shut geet's mouth. so be patient n wait for AKs...lol...OMG!!! i'm not sure, in this FF when we will get to see an AK. oh man...is this ff also going to starve off AKs just like our GHSP. don't worry buddies...let's tr y few alternatives like some dream sequences...sounds great...haha...enough of my bak bak... lol)

geet is shocked by maan's act and looks into his eyes. maan also looks into her eyes. now comes the Mahiii!!! Mahiii!!! eyelock moment. both lost in each others eyes. after few minutes maan comes out of the trance first. he immediately pulls his palm away from geet's mouth. now geet also comes out of the trance.

M:(st)ye mujhe kya horah hai? ye mein kya kar raha hu?

geet is silently thinking something.

maan composes himself and asks in a cold voice

M: geet! who are you? (OMG!!...what a brilliant question...lol..)

G: geet

M:geet! who are you? (oye MSK...phir se...koi hearing problem hai kya?...lol)

G: Geet Maan

M: phir?

G: Singh Khurana

M:(confused) kya?

G: mein Geet Maan Singh Khurana hu

her words "mein Geet Maan Singh Khurana hu" echoes in his ears repeatedly. he is not sure if he likes it or not. he curses his ears for its malfunctioning.

Maan grinds his teeth. but geet is calm and composed.

M:geet! don't test my patience. who are you?

G: Geet Maan Singh Khurana

M:(annoyed) geeettt!!!

G:(adds) Maan Singh Khurana

Maan calls dadi's mobile

dadi: maan

M: dadima! is ghar me kya horah hai? what is she doing in my room?

dadi: maan! i've decided to give her sometime

maan is hurt that dadima didn't trust him

M:iska matlab...you don't trust me. hena dadima?

dadi: yesa nai hai beta...

M: bas dadima

dadi:maan! mera bath suniye...

without waiting for dadi's reply, maan cuts the call immediately.

dadi:(st) mujhe maaf kijiyena maan! i don't know who is saying the truth. what else can i do?

dadi closes her eyes and tries to sleep

 

@maan's room

maan couldn't take the fact that dadi didn't trust him. so he is very hurt and upset. geet couldn't bear to see maan like that. tears gather in her eyes. she tries to comfort him. so she calls him softly

G:maan!

M:...

G:maan! you know very well na... dadima trusts you more than anyone in this world. please don't be upset maan

geet doesn't know what she is talking. but she wants to comfort him somehow. Maan senses the softness and concern in her voice. he looks into her eyes and notices her tears. maan's heart skips a beat.

M:(st) does she cry for me? lekhin kyun?

geet is looking into maan's eyes. tears roll down her cheeks. maan couldn't understand what her tears are doing to him. without realising what he is doing, he raises his hand to wipe her tears. geet sees his hand and again looks into his eyes. he picks a clue from geet's act and he realises what he is doing. maan curses himself.

M:(st) ye mein kya karne ke koshish kar raha hu? maan! tum pagal hogaya kya?

he pulls back his hands. geet didn't regret maan's withdrawl and she wipes her tears on her own. maan notices it and turns his gaze away from her. geet tries to lighten the situation.

G: maan! mujhe sona hai. kya mein lights off kar sakthi hu?

Maan gives her an angry look

G: when lights are on, i can't sleep maan

Maan asks in a cold voice

M: who are you?

G: Geet Maan Singh Khurana

M:(asks sternly) who are you?

G: your wife maan!

M: are you sure?

G: ji

maan says in a warning tone

M: geet! you are going to regret for your lies

G: but maan, how can you deny the truth about our marriage

M:geet! don't think that your lie will become true if you keep on repeating it

G:maan! you are my husband and i'm your wife. we both know it very well. then where is the place for a lie.

M:(shouts) bas. bohat hogaya. don't try my patience. ab chup hojao. varna...

G: varna kya hai maan? i won't keep quiet until you accept me as your wife

maan's anger has crossed d thereshold point. he pushes geet on the bed. she is startled by his sudden attck. now maan is almost on top of her. he entangles her fingers and pins her down on the bed. geet is too shocked to react. maan has completely lost his sense. he doesn't know what he is doing. he tries to kiss geet's cheek. geet starts to protest

G: maan! what are you doing?

maan tightens his grip on her hands

G:maan! chodiye mujhe

she tries to free herself from his grip. but he is too strong for her.

G:maan! please yesa math kijiyee

tears gathers in her eyes. he feels bad for her. but his anger wins over him

M:(sarcastically) kya hua geet?

G: please maan! ab chodiye mujhe

M: geet! you only told na...i am your husband. then why are you protesting it now?

G:please maan

M: geet! it is normal thing between a husband and wife. why are you protesting it? sharam aarahi hai?

geet tries to push him away. but he tightens his grip more and about to kiss her cheek. suddenly, geet stops her struggle to release her from him. she closes her eyes. maan is surprised by her sudden silence. Geet eyes are still closed, she takes a deep breath and says calmly

G: maan! I love you.

 


Edited by tonyahk - 25 May 2011 at 3:56am

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 1:15am | IP Logged

hi tonya

143 ... good u r back... omg such a long update... u never typed this in one go... loved it... confusion is still there why maaneet is doing like this ... but this is the name of your ff mustery of mrs. msk... heheheheh... so never mind we will go with it...
 
about the update ... as always well written... geeting biting his finger and the way trying to avoid his question is good...
 
chup bilkul chup kehee hui geet mughe bahut pyarri lagti hai...
 


Edited by maansee - 11 May 2011 at 1:31am

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 1:29am | IP Logged

lovely part
loved it
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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 2:02am | IP Logged

O O, he started to act like hubby, must be really embarassed later..lets see what he replies to him...

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i loved it yaar...am sure maan wont do anything ..

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