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kuttu

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I am new to this forum. Lately I have been following this serial and must say I got to see a good crossover between twilight and Vampire diaries in an 'Indi' version. It is taking an interesting turn now I should say. And defiantly it's quite different from Ekta's "saas bahu" serials.

I used to be an avid fan of her serials like "Kasam Se" and all. But somehow in-between   I feel the plots takes too much of twists and turns that I stop watching them altogether for a while. I hope to watch this one regularly and I have begun to read some very good vampire stories on this forum. I need to comment on them but I haven't actually caught up with the entire chapters. Hoping that you all would also like mine too. Do comment if you would like me to continue.  I may not be regular in my updates like daily definitely try to do an update every week.

Timeless Love

Chapter 1

                Today was a new beginning. Another city new people will this be the place finally she can make a home. It seemed to have worn out by being read over and over. This is all that was left now in her life. She put it aside in the velvet box and with her cup of coffee she moved to lookout at the morning sun from her window. It was beautiful and peaceful but still it made her unsettled was it the place.  

The place wasn't new actually speaking. She had some very good memories and some painful ones related to this city. She never thought in her wildest dream that she would be again back here. It was like completing a cycle. She had left this place with her mother as every person whom they held close to her heart had turned their back on them. And all for what just because her mum fell in love with the wrong person. It was the price she paid and a heavy price too. She was lonely and now dead and gone for over twelve years. Will she ever come across those familiar faces? But there is a face which she would never want to see again in her life. It reminds her of the heart aches, the guilt and brings back the feeling of being abandoned and left with no one. Yes she has come a long way from t hat little girl who looked up in the sky and believed that angels existed among those stars watching out for her. She has moved over cities and places. She has seen life and lived on her terms. Strived hard to reach where she was today with her own merit. But still in the corner of her heart there was an empty space which no one could fill. And she never got close with anyone for the fear of losing them. As all the people she held close to her heart has left her at some point. First her father, mums family, Mother who loved her to death and who fought for her up to the last breath.  Then her guide and mentor the mother superior (whom she addresses as 'mother') at the orphanage. She too just left without even a good bye. Hope this place would help her forget the tragedy that took place three months back and overcome the feeling of guilt though it was no fault of hers.

                Still every morning she opens her eyes and thinks God why'. If she had known that her 'mother' would end up dying as she wanted to fulfill her wish of seeing her graduate. She would have never called 'mother'. She could never forget how excited she was to know that 'mother' would be coming to her graduation ceremony and she was the topper of the college. She wanted to dedicate it to her she had prepared a little speech too for that night. But alas she never came to hear any of it. While the name of Piyashree Jaiswal was called out and she was being applauded the one and only person who stood by her side for twelve long years breathed her last on the way in freaking accident. All she got to see later was a lifeless body who had brought hope to so many children lying in the hospital bed. She had gone into depression for a while that the sisters at the orphanage sisters feared for her. But then again she had a reason to live. A letter left



Edited by kuttu - 25 January 2012 at 9:21am

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AH-mah-zing. LOL I just hope MishKa become friends with her later...this really pulled me in...and left me wanting for more. LOL Plz plz..continue..oh and yeah I suggest separating those paragraphs and adding speech marks..otherwise it will be a bit confusing...Smile

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hey..its really nice..:)seems interesting..simple and beautifully written:)do countinue soon..:)

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good start.continue soon.

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hey gud FF

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Wndrful..do cntinue & add me 2 ur pm list..

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hey its a wonderfull ff... a gr8 idea ... loved it , continue soonHeart

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