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~ ZINDAGI ~ Maaneet ff~part 8-pg 22 ~11 july (Page 9)

ambbiha IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 5:49pm | IP Logged
nice update

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avani_9 Goldie

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
1st of all sry sis last update me comment kiya bt edit ni...sry dekho kaan b pakad liye...n sis u r gr8 dear...awesome part...eagrly waiting 4 precap...lub ew mera bachcha

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Tyro IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 1:16am | IP Logged
awesome update partner...
yeeyyy...meri entry ho gaye...Party
n mujhe itne dialogues bhi mile...LOL
loved the way they were fighting...
mahi was crying coz she missed sweetu...aww...his dad is really the best in the world...
update next part soon...

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maan-ki-sanjana IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Nice update Hinal!!! Very cute Big smile

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SahSah IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 10:15am | IP Logged
OMG...That was so beautiful...really loved the update as always
 Mahi is such a sweetheart...isnt she...awww
and there is something to waiting for the updates

Edited by ansah - 15 May 2011 at 10:16am

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muskaan_cute19 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 2:30pm | IP Logged
Hey dear today finally I manged to get time for your ff too as keeping all the assignments aside,I thought of giving all my time to you people in form of ff.The best part it was a complete worth darling I enjoyed reading it so much.
The story,the characters all were just great darling,although the parts were short but still it was completely deserving.The way it started with her wedding seems to be quite perfect for the ff start as still I am a bit confused what will you show in
the ff ahead that's what is making me more curious and curious.
All the couples were amazing perfectly they fit with each other,I loved shilpa I always loved her with armaan rather than any other ridzy.I just loved the way maan treated her daughter that was so adorable,loved it so much the way they all called her shona.Their bond seems to be strong yet pure and divine.The mutual understanding they held for each other was really great,completely in love with the love they hold for each other.
Well one thing I would love to share with you,that is reading your ff today reminded me something very close to my heart nothing other than that rakhi's Memorable moments because in that also their daughter name was mahi as soon as I read the characters outline I was reminded of that yet again.So loving it more but don't get offend han just the name has its impact but the other all its your story for which I will read and to be honest i love those ff in which maneet are married already atleast I have to cry less as I am very senti person and the way you people write can't resist fromletting them to drop.I am sure you will
not make me cry but happy atleast.And as by the ff will call you shona from now onwards.
Love you shona so much for starting a beautiful ff and making me too a part of it, that too when I wasn't even present to priase you.So I am really sorry for commenting os late I know but still made it worth for you too shona by giving you a long comment as you too deserved it.
Keep writing dear
Thanks for all the pmz,now will try to be regular
God bless you

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preethia IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 3:44am | IP Logged
nice one

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..hinal.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 12:46am | IP Logged
part 5

After the Bidaai finished all returned to the hotel as they had to return early the next morning.

Geet n Meera bid goodbye to all the Maaneet Express friends.

Then later Maan,Geet,Mahi,Yash,Meera,Shriya,Sameer along with Armaan n Shilpaleft for the airport.

Then Armaan n Shilpa boarded the flight to Shimla for their honeymoon n the others left for Delhi.

Geet remembered the first time she had come to Delhi to find a job after comlpleting her architecture course in Bangalore.

Geet was very nervous in the flight as she was going away from home like this alone for the first time but calmed down as Shilpa was accompaning her for a few days as she had holidays.

They were staying in a flat which was Geet's uncle's but now was in Geet's name as he had passed away.

They reached the flat n then freshened up n then they went to Akshardham Mandir to get blessings for her new life.

There Shilpa had gone inside the temple but Geet was outside buying some items for the puja.There she saw a pregnant lady who was having difficulty in holding the puja ki thal so Geet went to her n asked her:"Excuse me,kya mein aapki koi madat kar sakti hu?"

Lady:"Can u plz help me to climb the stairs n carry this puja ki thal.Actually my husband has gone to attend a important call so can u help me n sorry for the trouble" n smiled at Geet.

Geet:"Surely" n she takes the puja ki thal n helps the lady to climb the stairs.

As Geet enters the temple along with the lady,Shilpa comes to her n says:"Geet didi aap kaha reh gayi thi mein tabse aapka intezaar kar rahi thi"

Lady:"I'm sorry Geet ji I caused u n ur sister  trouble"

Geet:"Plz dont say sorry n u have caused us no trouble but I have felt happy by helping u"

Shilpa seeing the lady understood that her Geet didi was helping her n said:"Plz dont say sorry"

Geet:"Hey Babaji mein toh aapka naam hi puchna bhool gayi?"to the lady

Lady:"Mera naam Sammera hai"

Geet:"Sameera ji hum puja kar lete hai phir baaki bate karenge"

Sameera:"Thik hai" n they do the puja n then Shilpa n Geet help Sameera to walkdown the stairs.

They went n sat on the benches there.

Geet:"Sameera ji kya mein aapse kuch puch sakti hu?"

Sameera:"Ha pucheye na"

Geet:"Aapki age kitni hai?"

Sameera:"Geet ji mein toh 21 years ki hu par aapne ye sawal kyu pucha?"

Geet:"Woh aapko dekh kar mujhe aapni badi behen ki yaad agayi isiliye aur woh bhi 21 years ki hai aur unsko na twins hai.Ha uar aap mujhe Geet ji mat boliye.Aap mujhse badi hai toh Geet hi boliye"

Sameera:"Thik hai Geet.Acha tum Delhi mein hi rehti ho kya?"

Geet:"Nahi actually hum dono aaj hi yaha aye hai aur kya mein aapko Di bula sakti hu?"

Sameera:"Ha kyu nahi mujhe toh aaj ek choti behen mil gayi" n hugged Geet.

Shilpa:"Arre aap dono toh mujhe bhool hi gaye" n faked anger.

Geet:"Arre meri himmat ke mein apni Shilpa ko bhool jao" n hugged her.

Shilpa:"Kya Di aapne mera introduction hi nahi karvaya"

Geet:"Oh sorry Shilpa,Sameera Di yeh Shilpa hai meri choti behen"

Shilpa forwarded her hand n said:"Hi Sameera Di Im Shilpa"

Sameera shook her hand n said:"Hi Shilpa" n hugged her.

They were talking when Sameera's phone rang.She picked it up n talked for 5 mins.

Sameera:"Sorry Geet n Shilpa had to attend the call as it was my husband's call"

Geet:"Koi baat nahi Di"

Sameera:"Guys kyu na hum mere ghar chale abhi mere husband ek important meeting ke liye gaye hai aur mein akeli hu"

Geet:"Lekin Di hum kese aap ke ghar asakte hai?"

Sameera:"Arre Geet kuch nahi hoga plz chalo na"

Shilpa:"Ha Geet Didi chalte hai waise bhi hamare paas activa hai he toh ghar jane mein bhi koi pareshaani nahi hogi"

Geet:"Thik hai" n so the three left for Sameera's house.
living room
white and wood baby nursery furniture sets by Paidi 5 554x415 530x397 Blend of Pink and Red For Baby Room
Sameera ordered the servants to bring some snacks n they sat in the living room chatting.

Suddenly a black BMW Z4 stopped in the driveway n a young man got down from the car n walked into the house n as he entered the living room,the servants all became silent n then Sameera got up n went near the man n smiled at him n then hugged him.

Sameera:"Aap mandir se bina baitaye kyu chake gaye?"

Man:"Sorry Sameera woh ek important meeting agayi thi toh jana pada plz maaf kardo"

Sameera:"Thik hai.Aye mein aapko kisi se milana chati hu" n pulled the man to where Geet n Shilpa were there.

Sameera:"Geet,Shilpa inse milo yeh mere pati aur yeh [pointing towards Geet n Shilpa] inse milye yeh hai Geet aur yeh hai Shilpa jinhone aaj mandir mein meri help ki"

Man:"Hi Geet.Hi Shilpa thank u for helping my wife today.Im Maan,Maan Singh Khurana"

Geet:"Mr.Maan Singh Khurana???" n her jaws dropped open.

More about Maan,Geet n Sameera

P.S-The BLACK BMW Z4 is my sister Roops fav.
Glitter Graphics

Edited by hinal_maaneet - 09 July 2011 at 3:32pm

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