It Just Took Time |AR OS| Removed |

Posted: 12 years ago
Due to personal reasons, the author has removed this piece.  Edited by kajenkashkriya - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
loved it
awesome OS 😊

Posted: 12 years ago
awww this was sooo goodo i loved it and i think you should write more OS's your a very good writer and this was very very cute loved it :D
Posted: 12 years ago
oh my god that was sooo good... good is not even a word to describe this it was too cute, too adorable and oh my god... i was actually blushing when i was reading this :) it was wonderful.. pls make a second part for this hehehehe
Posted: 12 years ago
One word. Beautiful.
Loveddd it. Plz plz write some more. It was really really good. Realistic. Natural and taking place with time. Just like real relationships
Posted: 12 years ago
hey kriya,
luvly prt.. way u explained d transaction from stranf=gers to best freinds to nwly wed couple  n finally becmng one..
wen u started d story i thogt ridz was preganant.. d way u mentioned her dng yoga nt likng d orange juice..😆😆😆
luvly os.. thnx 4 d pm
Posted: 12 years ago
love the os
 should write another one
Posted: 12 years ago
luved the OS!
it was too cute!
 
Posted: 12 years ago
hey
awesome one...luvd it
n it felt so real...d emotions dey shared
totally adorable
tc
shaaz

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