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Posted: 21 July 2011 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
please update another part today...
missed your updates for this ff...
please please please x :)

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PART-66

 

 

After 4 month –

 

Ever since then he had brought all the pregnancy books which were needed and read them every night and GEET sitting beside him. MAAN read everything about how he should take care of the mother during pregnancy and how he should take care of the baby. He did indeed a very good job, in fact he was overprotective about GEET. He didn't let her do anything and used to take her for walks as it was good for both the mother and baby. During THIS LAST 4 MONTH GEET's pregnancy he pampered her even more than he used to and at the same time he took care of office work also AS THEY HAVE TO LEAVE SOON TO INDIA BY NEXT MONTH IN FIRST WEEK OR TWO. MAAN never missed any appointments GEET had with  doctor and every step of the pregnancy was like an adventure for him that he would never forget as long as he lived AS EVERY MONTH SHE HAS DIFFERENT VIEW ABOUT EVERY THING BUT THEN ALSO THEY CARED THEIR LOVLEY MOMENT WITH EACH OTHER  ANY WHERE THEY HAD ALL LOVELY EACH DAY IN LAST 4 MONTH HOW MUCH TIME THEY FIGHT ABOUT BABY GAL AND ALL ALSO BABY KICKING THEY ALL ENJOYED TOGETHER ... IN INDIA PREM AND ADI NOT ABLE TO HIDE FORM THEIR DERAST ONE'S  SO THEY TOLD THEM BUT MAAN AND GEET DON'T KNOW THAT THEY HAVE TOLD THEM ABOUT GEET PREGENCE …. …..

 

7TH MONTH …OF GEET  …PRESENT……..BABY BUMP IS SHOWING …..

 

"Mujhe khana chahiye!"

 

"GEET, main try kar raha hoon na! Tumne abhi 4 dish toh reject kar di hain! Ab time to do yaar!"

 

"MAAN!!!!!!!!! Mujhe bhook lagi hai! Aur AAP ek decent dish nahin bana sakte!"I HAVE  TOLD EVERYTHING HOW TO MAKE THEN ALSO …HMMM

 

MAAN rolled his eyes but he continued clattering the spoons and the vessels...empty vessels. After having 4 dishes being rejected consecutively he had decided to order food and had even bribed the restaurant to send the delivery guy to his kitchen window so that his dear sweet wife would not come to know - 'Tab tak khaali bartan bajao, MR. MAAN KHURANA, nahin toh GEET tumhe hi kha jaayegi aaj!', thought maan banging random utensils against the counter...

 

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GEET was getting impatient and cranky and her hormones were kicking in in the the most pleasant way at all...rubbing her stomach and letting out an angry sigh, she made her way to the kitchen and there her jaw dropped when she saw her husband dearest clanking empty utensils and gazing out of the window!

"MAANNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

 

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MAAN, upon hearing her roar, actually fell down the counter and the cooker he was playing with landed on his head! He looked up at GEET and raised the cooker so as to be able to see her face but then thought the better of it and shook it back down, not wanting to meet her murderous glare!

 

"I am sooo sorry, GEET! Main...woh...tum...woh...nahin...pizza...I mean khana...Haan!" As an idea struck his mind which would get him out of this mess, he hastily took off his crown and stared soulfully into GEET's glowering eyes - "Sab delivery wale ki galti hai! Maine kaha tha ki meri beautiful wife hungry hai toh jaldi khana lana par who idiot abhi tak aaya hi nahin! Sachi, JAAN, uski galti hai!"

 

"Achcha, uski galti hai...okay...haan AAP sahi keh rahe ho, ussi ki galti hai...I mean afterall, USKI biwi ne usse kaha than a khaana banane ko aur USIKI biwi ko bhook bhi lagi thi aur ofcourse USSI KI BIWI PREGNANT HAI!!!! HOW STUPID, MAAN! HOW CARELESS! AAP kabhi nahin sudhroge! Bhaad mein jao! Mera baby aur main apne aap khana kha lenge kyonki baby ke papa bahut bade LIAR hain!"

 

And with that, GEET picked up her wallet and made to rush through the main door, not even stopping once and looking back at the man who was now looking crestfallen and was beginning to get up and run after her.

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"GEET! GEET!"

 

MAAN could see her in the distance as she waddled off in the dark, empty street and he could not but smile as he realized that this was his JAAN  taking matters in her own hands and he lightly jogged to catch up with her...

Paune baara baje

Dono ghar se chale

What's going on?

What's going on?

Soye hain raaste

Yeh kahan hum chale
What's going on?
What's going on? 

GEET turned towards her husband who was now walking backwards, his hands in his blue jeans and his biceps showing ruggedly through his flour strewn black ganji and light smile on his face and she had to admit he looked really handsome but she was still mad at him for ruining her dinner plans and was not willing to let him off the hook that easy so she fastened her pace...

 Bulaya kisine tumhe kya
Yahan jo tum lehrate aaye
Kare hum jo chaahe tumhe kya
Jo aaye humko samjhane
Hum to chale peeche tum kyun pare
What's going on?
What's going on?

 "JAAN , I am sorry na! Chalo ghar chalo...zidd mat karo...khana aa gaya hoga.Chalo, GEET!"

 Paune baara baje
Dono ghar se chale
What's going on?
What's going on?
Chalo chodo nakhre
Dikhana, dikhana
Duniya ka na koi
Tikhana, tikhana

"Nahin, MAAN! APPNE jhooth kyon bola! Aur kitni der lagadi! Mujhe kitni bhook lagi hai, maloom hai tumhe?! Aur sirf mujhe hi nahin, tumhare 'MAAN junior' ko bhi bhook lagi hai! Kabse chooho ki tarah mere pet mein ghoom raha hai!" GEET said using air quotes for the name that MAAN had 'thought of' for their baby! 

Kahan seekha baate
Yeh banaana, banaana
Duniya se humko yuhn
Bachaana, bachaana

 MAAN faked a scowl, "MK ko chooha mat bulao! Uski shakal tumpe nahin ja rahi hai!" and he doubled up laughing at the incredulous look GEET gave him at that statement and then groaned when he realized that he had just angered her more. GEET was seething now! 'Khana na banana ek baat hai, par mujhe chooha kehna! Ab toh main chodoongi nahin tumhe, MR.KHURANA!" and she hurried on, now not even noticing MAAN 's presence. "GEET! JAAN!" MAAN followed her, now a little apprehensive because of the weirdos he had spied sitting a little distance ahead, most probably drinking and not on their best behaviour and his angry wife was walking right into them...

 Ladki ho tum
Dekhna pachtaogi
Baadhi hui laut ke phir aaogi

GEET halted a few steps when she saw the men on the road and thanked her stars that MAAN was right behind her and felt immensely relived when she felt MAAN 's large warm hand at the small of her back guiding her through and silently communicating that she was not alone to those wasted men but her pride was too much to swallow and as soon as they were at a safe distance from them, she shrugged MAAN's hand off and glared at him, resuming her independent angry-and-hungry-young-lady walk, leaving MAAN to silently swear behind her...

 Seekha humne
Jaakar phir na waapas aana
Hum to chale peeche tum kyun pare
What's going on?
What's going on?

 MAAN was now getting a bit angry and frustrated and he was worried about the fact that both his wife and his child were hungry and all he wanted was for GEET  to get back to the warmth and shelter of their home and he would cook her a 7 course meal if that's what they both desired...

 Paune baara baje
Dono ghar se chale
What's going on?
What's going on?

 GEET could feel the frustration in MAAN 's steps as they followed her and she simled to herself, a devilish little smile...sure, she was hungry but she loved troubling MAAN and softly she said to her tummy, "Baby, papa gusse mein kitne cute lagte hain na? Chalo unhe thoda aur chidaate hain, okay, MK?" and she stopped short and turned around towards her husband and corked her eyebrow at him..."AAP mujhe follow kyon kar rahe ho, hmmm? Jao, apne delivery boy ka intezaar karo...main aur MK apne aap khana kha lenge!" 

Chalo humein itna
Batao, batao
Parwaah tumhe kyun yeh
Sunao, sunao 

MAAN  was now pissed and he gave her a tired look and then sat down at the bench right next to road and pushed up his legs, resting his head comfortably against it and said, "Achcha, aisi baat hai? Toh jao khana kha lo! Bas main nahin khaaoonga khana poore din, theek hai?!"

Parwaah kisse hai
Jao, jao, haan jao
Reh lo akeli jo
Reh pao, rahe pao 

GEET  bit back a smile which threatened to break into her face at her husband's cute antics and she made her way next to him, sitting down and pushing his hands away from where they clutched his legs and looking deeply into his eyes and as soon as he started giving her the loving eyes, she said - "Theek hai!" and burst out laughing! 

Rehna pare to chalo
Reh jaayenge
Thodi kami yeh chalo
Seh jaayenge 

MAAN  was flabbergasted and he spluttered out an indignant sound as he untangled himself and started walking back towards the house...with GEET following him, silently shaking with laughter and aww-ing over her husband's utter adorable-ness. 

To phir jao rehlo sehlo
Phir batlao
Hum to chale peeche tum kyun pare
What's going on?
What's going on?

 "Ab kya hai?! Jao khana khao na! Ab kyon peeche peeche aa rahi ho! Yahi check karne ki main ghar jaake kuch khaaonga ya nahin?! Aao, check karlo! Main ab ekdum nahin khaoonga!" 

Bulaya kisine tumhe kya
Yahan jo tum lehrate aaye
Kare hum jo chaahe
Tumhe kya jo aaye
Humko samjhaane
Hum to chale peeche tum kyun pare
What's going on?
What's going on? 

"Haha! Awww! MAAN!!!! AAP bhi toh mere peeche aaye the na! Ab main AAPKO kaise akela chod doon!" 

And with that MAAN stopped and turned back and gave his wife a bright smile and held out his hand which she caught deftly in her own and they both walked on together, her head resting on his shoulder and his one arm around her and one hand resting on her belly, caressing their child...

 "Woh dekho, GEET...achcha restaurant lag raha hai...wahan chale?" 

GEET looked up and was taken aback to see MAAN pointing at a 5 star looking place as they were both dressed rather inappropriately - him in a NIGHT DRESS and her in an old lose shirt of his and one of his three-fourth cargos... 

"Umm...MAAN...ghar chalte hain na...khana aa gaya ho ga..." GEET said, nervously twirling a strand of her flowing hair...


 MAAN let out a sigh and looked down on his angel and saw that she was apprehensive about their attire, just as he had predicted. He disengaged her from his arms and held her at a shoulder's length and said very clearly while looking straight into her big eyes - "Tum perfect lag rahi ho...ekdum princess ki tarah. Fikr toh mujhe karni chahiye, kahin waha kissi Billionaire ka dil tumpe aa gaya toh?" and he gave her a fake pout.

GEET  burst out laughing and hid herself in his chest and kissed him lightly right on his heart, letting him know that no one, absolutely no one could ever steal her away from him. And they both made their way over to the restaurant, hand in hand...

Paune baara baje
Dono ghar se chale
What's going on?
What's going on?
Soye hain raaste
Yeh kahan hum chale
What's going on?
What's going on?
Paune baara baje
Dono ghar se chale
What's going on?
What's going on?

HOPE YOU LIKE THE UPDATE GUYS PLZZ DO HIT LIKE AND COMMENT THANK YOU TO ALL ….

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Posted: 21 July 2011 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
Superb update... loved both the parts
Thanx for the PM

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Posted: 21 July 2011 at 3:06pm | IP Logged
yippe!!!!!
u started updating on IF Again..loved it ...cant wait until they reach india

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Posted: 21 July 2011 at 3:27pm | IP Logged
lovely update dear
i love both parts
hmmm please update soon

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Posted: 21 July 2011 at 4:06pm | IP Logged
awesome ... superb ... 

loved part 65 ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

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Posted: 21 July 2011 at 4:07pm | IP Logged
awesome ... superb ...

loved part 66 ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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