in love with enemy-4 i m back @ 126 - Page 23

Reet did u update recently... Can't remember
plzzz help me refresh my memory by the help of another
update 😆
reet plz save me from the state of amnesia. After all u r a doctor in training. It's ur moral n professional duty to try to save ppl.
Help help... C I'm even callin it out loud for u.
Hey reeet... With or wihout an update ... I luv u . Xo xo xo

awesome!...

                                        
  

              

   

Edited by m-g19 - 12 years ago

Reet I already commented on the first part of the update n saw that u quoted it so am not editing it and posting the comments for the other half here...

Maan  n his teasings...he'll never come out of his teasing Geet at all the available chances😆...n frustrate her further...but his near confession was so beautiful...he didn't say 'I love you' but what he said to her is so painful yet far more beautiful than any 3-word confession...it spoke of his heart n soul...it touched her soul which is why she confessed so readily to him without her knowledge...that moment was so charmingly described...both of them drowning in each others confession n basking in the glory of each others love...a perfect moment for a perfect couple...and the passion u showed between them is so beautiful that I hardly find words to describe it...it was perfect Reet👏...the song is too apt to show their contained passion which is just waiting to be released yet had been kept under a tight leash... loved the way how he showed his love for her along with his concern n care n also didn't went over board in his passion...it will only add on to her trust on him...I pray after this they will not succumb to any misunderstandings in future...Beautiful...wonderful... amazing...most desired update till date...confessions n passion...all in one update...wishing for more of such updates in future now...😛😆



Edited by esha143 - 12 years ago

That was just killer! Pls update sooonnn!
Love it!

CONGRATS on the new thread...

plzzz reet do continue soon
waiting for next update

reet...just no words...really this update took my breath away...now i want also fall in love with a kidnapper...now i have to hope that someone like Maan would kidnap me...i mean he's so amazing...it was passion love everything...how  can you write like this i mean i  cant even write one page properly...and you are giving so long updates...now i have read the ff three times...and i can read it again and again...uff it was so dreamy...so update soon...really really soon...that is a warning

ps: not a warning i am begging you on my knees...
Edited by sonnal_17 - 12 years ago

This da best ff i hv read till date...just awsum...luvd it to da core...da way u exprsd maaneets feelings is just great...:-)) :-D
Dis ff made me go *speechless*
Cont soon...
Xoxo