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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
Reet honey,

third time i have read the update...my eyes are burning but cant stop them from reading...

your updates are drugging...i have read sooo much but the feelings you stir up are incomparable...

i could feel the "i love you"...and the submission...

everything about the update was superb and beyond comprehension...u know it was meant to be felt and not read and thats exactly what happened to me..

am i making sense...??

it is mind blowing...

the intimacy, the love everything was sooo evident and pure and heart touching...

you know the one week you made us wait...well the update compensated for it..

oh godd...all i can say is please keep writing forever...because we would want to read you foreverSmile

loadsa love

Anamika

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
reet whn i read u'r update, i felt like every emotion was being evolved within me
the way maan was pleading 

Why do you have to crush me on your heels each time I come close...?

If you want the distance...don't come close geet...! please don't ...!!

one ought to read it then go back n reread it .


every emotion is conveyed so well by u ..the way maan felt hurt whn he said Oh yes ...i had forgotten what you think of me...smug arrogant ruthless...and yes  a CRIMINAL !! ...   aww poor guy ..around him, every1 respects him but the one person that he seeks approval of, is the one he is not sure of. 


To whom I have lost it ...calls me heartless...!!

now do i have to comment on this. that was the gist of the whole maan's dilemma...just awesomeDay Dreaming n u just summed it up in one shmall sentence. Thumbs Up


aww maan made geet say i luv u three times. as if it wasn't enough the first time around. he wanted to hear it again n again. to savor the moment forever. 


And miss Bollywood ,..! I accept the weather is very romantic out here ..! but we can romance down there ...!

reet u r hopeleesly romantic.LOL.i hope n pray that every fantacy of u'r come true n it lasts forever.Thumbs Up


so my heart beats were racing racing n racing till i read that part 

he carefully placed her on the edge of the bed...taking the place beside her ...gazed intently at her ...he leaned forward ...

shying she pulled her knee's to guard around ...hiding her face in her palms ... incapable to bear the heated gaze ...

sooo jaaanu. geet is really yum. i've nothing against maan if he can't resit touching her. look at her..here he is doing his seductive act n she is hiding her face in her palms. who wudn't loose their senses D'oh

sumthing about thi

and fixed her mouth above his mouth . i don't know why...sumhow i found this to b really dirty. may b the way it's written. i cud visualize this or so much more LOL


oh geet r u one mischeavious girl. killin me softly LOL learnin the tricks of the trade. 

she pressed his lip by her thumb ... rubbing them ...

his eyes flared in desire ...

she chuckled ...and nibbled the tip of his nose...

sighing he pulled away ... geet is adorable. Hug

all through their passionate moments, geet's innocence n maan's self control was evident  n i luvd that wholeheartedly. 


luv luv luv the update n in general anything u type.

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 12:26pm | IP Logged

OMGGG...dead...Dead

reet,

i have followed your story from the beginning but never really commented...SORRY...Smile

a love story between stark opposites in terms of beliefs, upbringing and mind set...Embarrassed

in your updates i have noticed that geet always had a trust issue...till the last one...but that is the most natural reaction from her part...she did not even know the name of the man she loves neither did she seen his face until recently...Disapprove

and about maan...he is a dream...he reminds me of a very famous character from a bengali novel by,
sarat chandra chatterjee... "patherdaabi"...SABYASACHI...Embarrassed

now there is something that bugs me everytime i read your updates...this DEV  is not as doodh ka dhula hua as much he appears to be...Confused

now about today's updates...

it was awe inspiring...specially the line...

To whom I have lost it ...calls me heartless...!!

splendid...Clap

it was sensuous, sexy and divine...will patiently wait till they finally cross the barrier and become one forever...Blushing

update soon...love you...Hug


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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
your updates have the power to render anyone speechless.Smile

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
awww totally loved it... it was a mega long update...
thank god you finally decided to update...
been waiting for days...
loved it...

this one line stole my heart...
' the person to whon i lost it calls me heartless or something like that... it was sooo cute...
fianlly geet admited she loved him nd confessd her love to him...

sooo cute...
it was brilliant... btw please update soon...
missed ur updates ..

will edit more when im feeling better
got a banging headache x
loveyouu reet... x



Edited by Nazmaa - 09 May 2011 at 1:46pm
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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
I OMG TOOO GUD HEY I DNT KNW D WORKING OF D FORUM TOTALLY CLUELESS SO NO IDEA ABT BUDDY LIST STUFF WILLU TELL HW DAT WRK BTW UR UPDATE IS AWSOM HEY I REMEMBEF ONE OF D EIGTY MOVIE SOME THING LOVE HURTS I DNT KNS D NAME BT D CONCEPT WS SAME BT I MSR SAY U OUTDONE IT U R SUPREB N YES U F D FIRST ONE ON MY BUDDY LIST LV U BYEBig smile

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Wat to say reet...u really left me speechless with ur update!!!
It was really worth the looong wait!!Clap
Whatever words of appreciation i use it wudnt suffice...my mind is still fuzzy from their love,the dilemna of their self,the turmoil,              their declaration to each other forgoing all the barriers ending their endless waitDay Dreaming
And the post-declaration part...OMG!!!!!!!!!Their craving for each other n their intimacy...such passion u create,such sensuousness,their love n devotion shining through every moment
HATS OFF TO YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Hug
 

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
[QUOTE=maanmeet_Reet]should i update more
 
ummm...!! the rest of it...like
 
 
the steamy part ??
 
 
 
 
seems like no one much intersted ...????
 
sigh !
 
 
 
[/QUOTE

no reet that just means that we r hopelessly refreshin n refreshing n not paying any heeds to who's commenting on what LOL

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