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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
Reet,

you are family too(woh Anu mere liye hi tha na...lolLOL)...one week away from you and you had us all missing you sooo much Smile

love you so much for being a beautiful writer and a beautiful human being...

Anamika

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 1:45pm | IP Logged
congrats on new thread dear..
u and ur ff is awesome
u rockkk

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
res !

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
congratzzz on ur new thread...

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
Reet,

It's part 32...


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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 2:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by maanmeet_Reet

sigh ..,.! 5 update and an entire thread finished ! Smile

 CryCry
okay ..i will b saving posts for the future updates...guys please check frist 3 pages for updates ...i will be saving spaces...
 
i will update now...but wont pm anyone...
 
will edit the same post tomorrow with rest of the updates ...
cause after posting the part ..right now i will write the rest ..may be i will psot that before i go to sleep
 
thanx and love to all
 
febin saba anu reva bul nidhi nazma fourleaf clover priya esha memorable prethia pritha vinni ! sorry if m forgetting to mention but remember m not forgetting u
you guys have become my family !   HeartEmbarrassed
 
thank you dears !

Hey Reet Thnx a lot dear. Hug

4 new thread

Am totally mad cause its 1:30 am & me on PC risking my fragile neck ROFL, love U . Will edit comment when U complete update Smile

Edited:

Coming to the update:

Once again, a stunning update, I liked it fully but many dialogues were just outstanding.Clap

Heart can only be tamed with love & nothing else work after that.

Chief is smitten but he is still sore cause of their last encounter.

Geet being angelic & Maan being sarcastic  was essentially required to bring them more close.

It was sweet how she tried again & again & Maan saying "Yes...i don't know you ...at all..." was Ouch

Maan thinking, "Always brings out the best and worst of mine ...!" This is what love does. Anything 4 the loved ones.

Distance from love can never be desired. The thing all of us crave is to share our experiences, happiness, sadness with someone we believe in to be our well-wisher. 

When she suggested beating as punishment i was like please stop it chief.

"I thought you are mine ...!!"  & "...i m all yours ..!" was Clap 

"I m sorry that...Hope you understand ...!" Really Chief?

"Itnaa kareeb na aaya karo geet ...pachtaogi ...!" the rich baritone rang around her ...his eyes were darker than clouded sky of this night ... she couldn't fathom them...

She smiled mysteriously ... ..."paachtana  manjoor hai ...sao dard kabul hai  ...! par yeh doorie nahi ...!" and took  another step closer ...

"Ab bhalai mujhe  raaz nahi ayegi ...ab to yeh burai  hi meri puri jahan hai .."  This was fabulous 

Bad timing Rishi. Chief :"Lo ...talk of love ...your poor lover is here ... ...!"  r not u here chief?

Adi, the Savior behind the scene 

Yash's love story... Geek touched something subtly.

@Reet [ yash love story is very much important ...i remember someone commented that i missed his ...no dear i didnt ..i didnt reply to u as i knew what i had planned ..reet winks ! ] I don't know about others but I commented

"Yash's background was not revealed. Was that cause U don't want to blow the cover 4 up coming twist?" 

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1662949&TPN=115

Geet proposing her love. WOW Adi, once again u did it.

I liked this song before but love it now.

Adi is so nice, giving chance to Maneet to sort their problems.

I loved the addition of Geet's thought.

Adi's strict LOLvigilance was superb. Now Chief is bound. Loved how Su persuaded Geet. Adi taking control was entertaining but it also showed his care towards Geet.Star

Now U are going over board chief. 1st snapping her like that & then at dinner table. U have also proved that judgment can be cloudy on any ones part.

As if something was missing, here comes one more blow from angry chief.

Geet missing'. If not on terrace then where U want herPinch?

Huh! SRK movies have rain, terrace & "sniff sniff". Where was I to notice them.ShockedLOL

Loved "Arrgghh...! just go to hell ...! she got up frustrated ...!

Promise me you will accompany ...he held her wrist back ..."

"You love to hurt me...and so do I ...she shrugged .." Both of them are liars.D'oh

"As if  you will give me that ...? she bluntly taunted ...!" OuchOuchOuch

Unique confession "To whom I have lost it ...calls me heartless...!!"

"I love you ...!!!!!!"  Day DreamingDay Dreaming

Now childwoman has one more name, "crybaby & Miss Bollywood"ROFL

She is provoking him again & agin about his "I will never touch u again"

 Sonu Nigham is superb, I love his albums specially "Deewana"

Finally, one big problem down. (Relieving sigh or should i still hold it)

4 the upcoming morning, only guesses, nothing verified. So waiting Tongue

Continue Soon as something nudges that pace is going to increase. Geek

PS: If U have seen my old posts, let me know & that translation that u asked about was also there.

PPS: Is it discrete enough. Believe me I can't put all the things in words as I told U.   



Edited by serenelove - 12 May 2011 at 5:56am

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
omg reet wanna read the rest...but thanks for updating so far...well reserving this place for the comment once u finish re updating reet

edited...
given my long comment on pg 23 ...


Edited by preethia - 09 May 2011 at 1:24pm

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 2:58pm | IP Logged
hi, reet
First congratz for ur new thread
just finished reading ur entire FF in one go
ur a mind blowing writer dear ClapClapClapClap
u have a great ability to give life to the
words u write simply superbThumbs Up
not able to find appropriate words now
heart churning confession yaar
not able to recover from it
plz do add me to ur PM list 

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