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Anvi2009 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 11:49am | IP Logged
Reet me lost, totally lost, in your MaanEet world...and absolutely no one can bring me out of this reverie. Embarrassed

Wow, what a sweet present after such a long time. I feel so content reading both slept peacefully in each other's arms...finally. Big smile This ought to be the best sleep of their far. Smile

Cant wait to know what will happen in the morning. One thing is for sure, both of them will wake up with a smile on their face. 

Me feeling so happy for them. After going through so much of torment, finally they found peace in each other's arms. Smile

Loved the confession, loved the romance. Finally Geet learnt to trust Maan blindly and he upheld her trust by not going a step further in physical intimacy. She allowed him to lead her, and he led her perfectly. 

Edited by Anvi2009 - 09 May 2011 at 12:00pm

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princess163 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 11:50am | IP Logged


PLEAE do read!
febinyusuff IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 3191

Posted: 09 May 2011 at 11:50am | IP Logged
don't worry honey... will give you looong comments.. the song plus the update.. I'm still shivering to type CryCryCryCry..

yeh foreplay hai toh.. actaul one kaise hoga..

and yeah .. me too worried... what will happen in the morning... I don't know in the morning they will be hit by "Amnesia" hope they won't do anything stupid..

yeah .. As both of them have confessed.. no problem there.. but what if God has decided something else????

No !!!!.. No dear...  I don't want this night to end...
satanslove IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6963

Posted: 09 May 2011 at 11:53am | IP Logged
StarStarStarausum amazing mindblowing superb fantastic ...and other adjective which i am forgetting :)
u make us greedy ...for the next Big smileWink
Star song completely apt :)
im jst thinking poor rishiWink
Amour_Reet Goldie

Joined: 26 July 2010
Posts: 2124

Posted: 09 May 2011 at 11:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luvabbybaby

Oh WOW so I loved the update (and cant wait for more) does this mean . . . Ahem Ahem the deed? Both MG dont seem to want to do such a thing . . . Umm so I am for now thinking they will not actually do it . . .

LOL Lizs dirty mind . . .

Love you Reet!

 hey rockstar !
hows u ...?
lol honey ...! i was inkling the minds with the one liner song...!
and u are right always ! they are not ready !
ab mill gaya jabab !
liz ...! temme how long it wud take to you to finish the seducing mister perfect ???

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vrsharma IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 11:57am | IP Logged
really really wonderful update. loved each word/letter in ur update.
I losttt actually. i don't know when i get my senses back. but u r realy really  great.
it was worth waiting.
i want to write so much abt update but don't know what to write as i lost all words. i forgotten every thing other than maaneet.
u r GREAT.
princess163 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 11:58am | IP Logged


I am going crazyyy!
i can't seem to stop...their possessiveness for each other ufff...
her warning to him, him addressing her as MY GIRL!
not bothering about that stupid, wont-touch-u thingy!
basking in their love...not caring about anything...the warmth of their love...their anticipation...their restlessness...and finally, THEIR PEACE...togethere, with each other...FOREVER...
main marr jaawaan!
Don't shake you head thinking i am mad ReetWink
its all your doing!
p.s.-page 4 wala padha??Confused

Edited by princess163 - 09 May 2011 at 12:00pm

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Be.edgy Goldie

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 11:58am | IP Logged
Wooaaa.. That was foreplay .. OMG! I'm shivering only by thinking when they'll actually do it!!
Reet that was HOT! Blushing
Oh fish .. I'm worried about the morning ..
Well Thank god They've confessed but hope no separation .. 
I LOVED when Geet asked him to swear about not touching anyone else expect from her.. Just TOO Good!! Their relationship is too strong and I hope it remains that way..
But HATS OFF Reet!! Beautifully written .. You are Too good!!
omg! Cant wait for more.. so plzz continue .. and By the Way Thank you SOOO Much for such a long update .. Hug

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