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-Elfin- @-Elfin- Senior Member
Anniversary 13 Group Promotion 2 + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

OMGGG...dead...🤢

reet,

i have followed your story from the beginning but never really commented...SORRY...😊

a love story between stark opposites in terms of beliefs, upbringing and mind set...😳

in your updates i have noticed that geet always had a trust issue...till the last one...but that is the most natural reaction from her part...she did not even know the name of the man she loves neither did she seen his face until recently...😒

and about maan...he is a dream...he reminds me of a very famous character from a bengali novel by,
sarat chandra chatterjee... "patherdaabi"...SABYASACHI...😳

now there is something that bugs me everytime i read your updates...this DEV  is not as doodh ka dhula hua as much he appears to be...😕

now about today's updates...

it was awe inspiring...specially the line...

To whom I have lost it ...calls me heartless...!!

splendid...👏

it was sensuous, sexy and divine...will patiently wait till they finally cross the barrier and become one forever...☺️

update soon...love you...🤗


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swathi9889
swathi9889 @swathi9889 Groupbie
Group Promotion 1 Networker 1
Posted: 12 years ago
your updates have the power to render anyone speechless.😊
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Nazmaa
Nazma 'Imran Khan' Majeed @Nazmaa Goldie
Anniversary 13 Group Promotion 3 + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
awww totally loved it... it was a mega long update...
thank god you finally decided to update...
been waiting for days...
loved it...

this one line stole my heart...
' the person to whon i lost it calls me heartless or something like that... it was sooo cute...
fianlly geet admited she loved him nd confessd her love to him...

sooo cute...
it was brilliant... btw please update soon...
missed ur updates ..
will edit more when im feeling better
got a banging headache x
loveyouu reet... x

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lively-piia
lively-piia @lively-piia IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 13 Visit Streak 180 0 + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
I OMG TOOO GUD HEY I DNT KNW D WORKING OF D FORUM TOTALLY CLUELESS SO NO IDEA ABT BUDDY LIST STUFF WILLU TELL HW DAT WRK BTW UR UPDATE IS AWSOM HEY I REMEMBEF ONE OF D EIGTY MOVIE SOME THING LOVE HURTS I DNT KNS D NAME BT D CONCEPT WS SAME BT I MSR SAY U OUTDONE IT U R SUPREB N YES U F D FIRST ONE ON MY BUDDY LIST LV U BYE😃
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fourleafclover
fourleafclover @fourleafclover Groupbie
Group Promotion 1
Posted: 12 years ago
Wat to say reet...u really left me speechless with ur update!!!
It was really worth the looong wait!!👏
Whatever words of appreciation i use it wudnt suffice...my mind is still fuzzy from their love,the dilemna of their self,the turmoil,              their declaration to each other forgoing all the barriers ending their endless wait😍
And the post-declaration part...OMG!!!!!!!!!Their craving for each other n their intimacy...such passion u create,such sensuousness,their love n devotion shining through every moment
HATS OFF TO YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗
 
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basicquestion1
basicquestion1 @basicquestion1 IF-Rockerz
Anniversary 13 Group Promotion 4 + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
[QUOTE=maanmeet_Reet]should i update more
 
ummm...!! the rest of it...like
 
 
the steamy part ??
 
 
 
 
seems like no one much intersted ...????
 
sigh !
 
 
 
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no reet that just means that we r hopelessly refreshin n refreshing n not paying any heeds to who's commenting on what 😆
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Amour_Reet
Reet ! @Amour_Reet Goldie
Anniversary 13 Group Promotion 3 + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Fallen Angel


Congratz on the new thread...Reet!! 😃

Fabulous update, just loved it -- it was too good yaar!! 👏

Would have given a detailed review but am busy revising for ma politics exam...😔

But had to comment cos what an brilliant update..and u used one of ma fav songs too !🤗

Plz cont soon and keep up the fantastic writing!



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Kadds02
Kads @Kadds02 Goldie
Anniversary 17 Group Promotion 3 Networker 1
Posted: 12 years ago
U are simply awesome to be true!!!
I luved it!!! .. Its was simply awesome... beautiful!!!!

Thanks for such a lovely update!!
Not to miss... I luved the confession!!!
&  still waiting for your reply on my scrap!.. Did u add me on FB???

& heyy.. continue to keep me in ur PMs!!

xoxoxo

-Kads
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Amour_Reet
Reet ! @Amour_Reet Goldie
Anniversary 13 Group Promotion 3 + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by maaneet_pisces


heyyy,,

super update...Geet tried her best and Maan ofcourse as justified being angry...😊

Reet, Geet still doesnt trust Maan???She told Adi she did...then why did she call him a loser???

Waiting for the next part desperately...
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Amour_Reet
Reet ! @Amour_Reet Goldie
Anniversary 13 Group Promotion 3 + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Dreamy_Mystique


congo shongo on new thread dear...
loved the update reet...
sorry wont be able to give detailed analysis dear...preparing for my exams...
i will be able to come  online in real sense only after june dear...
will miss u all

love u
reva
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