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FF Deewani#2 Ch 43, pg149, DISABLED (Page 111)

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Posted: 05 August 2011 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mIsHeZ.x

omg has she lost her memroy o suma...y did u say wil she love him tmrw...?!?! wos apenin
 
 
 
tink man i cnt beliv u dd this
 
 
 
now u gona tke ur time updating..while tarpaofying us..
 
 
 
No way!  I would never Mish!  Come on do me a favour, I hate memory loss tracks man, why does everyone expect that of me, Confused.  You bumped your head gal...LOLTongue 
 
 
 
But seriously, that question is based on Dutta's mind boggling dilemma lol, he can't face Naku because of the loss and suffering she's faced because of him.  WinkWink
 
 
Arre you accused me without hearing my side of the story...ShockedShockedShocked...
 
 
And then you taana maar me!  I am actually gonna update quickly this time, thank you very much.  Disapprove  And FYI I am on community serivce - thanks to U...WinkWinkTongueTongueLOLLOL
 
 
Hmm so should I consider this your comment.  TongueLOL
 
 

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Posted: 05 August 2011 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rrs1391



Rani!!  Hug...now u bug me all the time, and ur this far down the line of comments...LOLTongueTongue

part 1 - anna ke daant toot gaye , pitai bhi achhi thi, aur gunshots to mastClap

Yeah and you can consider the few extra kicks in the ribs by Dutta, from your side...as per request. Wink  Or would you prefer the gunshots lol...LOL

part 2 - dutta takes nakku to hospital and beg nakku's life and scolds bappa was an imotional partCry

I know, Embarrassed, but Dutta is a lost cause when it comes to Naku.
 
part 3 - dutta saves nakku Clap

Ta-Da!  CoolCoolCoolCoolCool
 
 
part 4 - the question in dutta's mindConfused

Yeah, I agree with your 'emo' lol, but that's exactly how Dutta feels as regards to Naku waking up and accepting everything that happened.  EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
awsem update jiska mujhe tha intezaar jiske liye tha dil bekarar woh update aagayi love you tink for this pig anna's dhulai,
 
 
I know I really wanted Anna to feel pain before he died, and fear being most important.  And thank you for loving me lol, I love you too. Hug
 
 
bevakuf dutta se panga le raha ab ja hell mein and dutta takes nakku to hospital and doctor ko dara bhi diya love him yaar what a lover and when the doc declare nakku dead and the scene that dutta presses her chest and the dialogues made me cry Cry
 
 
Oh man, my intention isn't to make anyone cry, but seriously this thread has had and equal amount of ansoons, as Babi lol, now that's a good alternative..LOLLOL
 
 
and nakku back for our lion and the question in dutta's mind but our nakku never leave dutta and our gadha scolds bappa in this condition such a gadha as i said always do next as soon as possible and totally the update is awsemClapmazaa aa gaya par aansoo bhi
 
 
LTL and ansoon do have a dil ka rishta lol...Embarrassed.  And of course you guessed right, Naku can never leave her gadha.  LOL 
Now let's talk about you, ab tera comment par kar mujhe mazaa agaya.  Wink  Aur if I don't update soon enough, I'm sure you'll be here to remind me innit.  LOL Wink  Thanks for your feedback babez.  Smile
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Posted: 05 August 2011 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mnx12

Wonderful updateClapClap Datta finished Anna, giving him his well deserved death.Naku was unconcious for 2 day, he must be shattered, she came back only for him. She will understand & love him because she has returned for him. His heart still beats for him. Waiting for the next partSmile

 
 
Thank you hun!  Smile  Yep, end of Anna, with a much awaited death.  Naku was unconscious for 2 full days yeah, but she died on the third...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed.  She can't stay away from him even if she wanted.  WinkWink
And as for Dutta his heart will always beat for his Nakusha. 
 
 
Cheers for your thoughts hun, I am trying to get the next part out soon for defo.  Thanks for reading and commenting.  Wink
 
 
 

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Posted: 05 August 2011 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by norey

wow what an update, loved the anger from d reminding me of the ltl anna days and poor N it was heartbreaking and tense but she made it phew!!!
good update keep it up. thanks
 Norey
 
 
 
Hi Norey, Smile
 
 
First of all thanks!  Oh I am so glad that you were reminded of the good ol' days of LTL, man I miss them.  This is a compliment in itself.  Embarrassed
 
Thanks a lot for your encouragement, through your kind words. 
 
 
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Originally posted by preety_219

Hey PariHug  Hey Pooja!  Hug
 
 
Fantastic updateThumbs Up  Thank you soo much!!  EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
 
 
In previous one u showed Nakku's subconscious mind's journey into inbetween path & her convo. with Roopatai & Bappa.
But,this update was more than action,i will say parallel journey of Dutta in conscious state & in real world.
So,when wife was struggling between life & death,hubby was facing living hell right there in realityOuch
If i am not wrong,the critical state that Nakku was in for 2 days was the same time she spent in inbetween state.
 
 
 
Yes, you absolutely spot on.  I really like the way you put that, both their plights were described by wonderfully.  They were both utlimately fighting for one thing, each other, they have/will realise their importance of each other in their lives after this encounter. 
And yeah you could say they were fighting in heaven and hell, literally.  LOL
 
 
 
 
Dutta's pain,anguish,shock -everything was multipling with each passing moment & seeing Nakku almost soaked in blood & lifeless kind of state,his world sort of crashed.U know there is an interesting story of Lord Shiva & his 1st wife Sati.Devi Sati's father disliked Lord Shiva & hence he didn't invite his daughter & son-in-law for some big havan.Yet Devi Sati decided to go & when she reached at her father's place she was badly humiliated by her own father.She couldn't take that insult & burnt herself to death in the fire of that havan.When Lord Shiva got to know about her death,he lost control & he did TANDAV with her charred body in his hands & during that various parts of her body fell at different places which we recognise as SHAKTIPEETH.Shiva's anger was still uncontrolable & all other gods feared complete destruction of the world,so finally Lord Vishnu intervened & Calmed Lord Shiva.
The reason i felt like sharing this story is Dutta's uncontrolable rage strangely reminded me of the story.Besides Dutta's destructive outburst was all becaz of pain caused to Nakku.
 
 
 
Omg Pooja!  You have seriously picked my brain here.  Lord Shiva's anger is definitely something to compare with Dutta.  As in this story when Sati (incarnation of Goddess Durga) had sacrificed herself, no one was able to calm him down, as he took Sati's body away and began the destruction through his tandav.  And the Gods feared the survival of mankind, and turned to Vishnu. 
     Who used his Sudarshan Chakra to get rid of Sati's existence, and as a result her body was cut into 54 (I think) pieces, which had scattered all over North India.  i.e.  Naina Devi is where her eyes fell. 
 
So yes you're completely right.  The more he looked at Naku's terrible state, his anger grew into a wild fire over time, which just exploded.  Thank you for taking your time out and sharing this story with everyone here.  By the way Lord Shiv is actually my favourtie God.  EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
 
 
 
Anna had to die the moment he touched Nakku wrongly.But,thank god,Baaji came at right time,at that moment someone with detached emotions was needed to calm Dutta & make him realise Nakku's worsening condition.
 
 
 
Yep, I loved the way you put the first line lol.  Yes, Baji was the only one to calm Dutta down like Vishnu.  WinkWink 
 
 
 
 
Dutta's complete focus was on Nakku ,it was like he was living corpse.Her critical state only made him more angry at bappa.Bappa is right when he said to Nakku that he feared Dutta's angerLOLHe was pointing accusions at Bappa,but it was all on Nakku's behalf.To top it all,Baabi to decided to keep bappa hungry till Nakku gains conscious.No wonder Bappa sent her back,he cann't afford to stay without his laddusLOL.But,this act of Baabi is also ultimate cry for help in front of god.Its like she was putting him for test,to see how much he really cares for Nakku & any such devotee who worship him sincerely.
 
 
 
 
Oh wow, I thought Daya was the only one who caught that part about Bappa's comment regarding Dutta.  But stupid me, how could I forget that you also have the 'eagle eye', Bappa knew the extent of Dutta's rage.  And of course Bappa's bhog ke laddoo matter, LOL, why should he go hungry, if the fault is someone else's.  Wink
Babi will always adopt one method, when it comes to emotional blackmail lol, the first rule is always put Bappa on the front line, baad mein jo hoga, dekha jayega lol.  LOL
 
 
 
 
Nakku's crashing & then Dutta's refusal at believing was teary momentCry.His love for her is so strong that she had to come back.He made her come back thru his words,which reached her heart & she uttered-SAAB,the only word ,around which her entire world revolves.
 
 
 
Oh god, not again, EmbarrassedEmbarrassed, I think I should get kleenex to sponsor my ff lol, I seem to make everyone teary.  Ouch  But yes you are right, their love for each other is too strong, something they will never learn to live without.  WinkSmile 
Sometime I wonder why the makers of the show didn't just call their show 'Saab.'  LOLLOL
But yeah Dutta deep down inside longs to hear only Saab, uttered by his Naku, so that kind of completes the scene, naturally.  SmileEmbarrassed
 
 
 
 
Dutta's fear about her loving him tommorrow is right from his POV,but he should have known by this time,that she can never turn away from him.They are soulmates & for her,Dutta is reason of her exsitance.
 
 
 
Woohoo, finally someone sees my point of view, for putting that line there.  Big smile  He knows that, that is exactly why he fears it more, as he knows he doesn't deserve to be forgiven for everything he's put her through. 
 
 
 
Waiting for Nakku to wake up ,pls. update next part soonSmile
 
 
 
Well I can definitely tell you, Naku will be awake in the next part.  And to everyone else who decides to read this reply, please do not fear, Naku will not lose her memory.  That will never happen in anything I write.  WinkWink
 
 
 
Lots of loveHugHugHug
PoojaSmile
 
 
 
 
Lots of love to you too babes, and thanks for your awesome comment, I enjoyed reading every part, loved your input of the Shiva story, need I say that's my favourite part.  Embarrassed
 
Bottom line, a hearty thanks!  Hug
 
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Posted: 05 August 2011 at 2:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by daya0628

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...Now why did I know it had suttin to do wid ur man lol...LOL, but dw he'll be around, hmm now dat actually suits u innit, just like Superwoman 'is always around'.  LOL

I was expecting a comment like this only haan haan he is always around i am always around haaye we are good match na EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Hahaaa I bet you were just waiting to say that, is this the part where I say 'of course you're a match made in heaven!' loool...well in any case I have said it, let's just keep our fingers crossed that Suvi don't read this lol, unless she's over him.  LOLLOLLOLLOL


Glad you noticed that!  Yes, this update begun exactly where it left off on in Dutta's point of view.  Naku was in another world, that was obviousEmbarrassed, but this chapter was to show everything that was happening in the same time frame as Naku's close encounter with death. 

You know i woke up this morning and was determined to give you a proper comment this time...because normally mine is rushed...i have work today too and weekend also looking quite busy am working everyday starting tmmrw Ouch so this was like the only time i knew i could comment properly...

Really!  Well I've never noticed that, ShockedShockedShockedShockedShocked, so you just come and get rid of my comment lol...jee thanks man.  Disapprove
Oh so it's a one only now...ErmmTongue

Woohoo, I really wanted the details to shine through in that respect, so thanks for the reference.  Wink

no probz you did it really well like always ...u noe i have noticed when i comment on someone's FF first thing in the morning i seem to catch on to small things about the update more than i do wen i read and comment in middle of the day LOL...i think i should comment always first thing in morning even i am shocked with what i was commenting LOL

 
Thanks!  EmbarrassedEmbarrassed  Haha so now the mornings will become popular with everyone then.  Wink  Well you learn suttin nu everyday.  LOL
 
 

 

Yeah, I get what you mean, but sometimes you just have to say the obvious things in situations regardless of them sounding ridiculous, it's just the way the mind works.  Yep, too right, seeing her body in that state, really got him worked up, he could feel the emotions churning inside of him.  (I could really imagine Mishal in this scene so clearly!Embarrassed).  Haha when you say excited, it makes me curious, lol. LOL

don't get any ideas re...me just meant all happy happy to see our sher beat this digusting pig to pulp :PIf you 'say so' LOL

 
 

Thank you, I'm so happy you were able to understand all his pain through words, Embarrassed, and that line...OMG...seriously, I tried to think in Dutta's shoes here, and thought you know he would say something ridiculously stupid here, but wouldn't care if he said it or not. And you Nailed it...it was so true to his character Big smile

Thanks babes, seriouly you flattering me way tooo much man...Blushing

And then that was the best I could come up with lol...Embarrassed.  He used whatever means of threat possible just to keep her alive.  Even if it meant insulting Bappa.  And yes!  You caught something related to the last update.  Bappa told Naku that Dutta was threatening to hurt people, if he didn't send Naku back. Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed  Well you are Superwoman at the end of the day.  Wink Yeah i am telling u doing this first thing in the morning really has a different effect on commenting...i have noticed with other FF too i tend to analyze more in the morning LOL
Embarrassed

 
Well I guess you know the cue...coz I agree this comment was definitely worth an applaud.  Clap


 

LOL on the border...ROFL...haha now that is hilarious!  Yep she did go into cardiac arrest, so that called for electric shock treatment lol, but there's only a certain amount of shock that can be given to a dead body,  yeah i know...its kinda sad to face such situations in hospital ...i have not come across yet but i know i will eventually...i just hope i can handle it Confused
 
Kinda sad...Confused...lol you wanna think about that a bit more bruv...LOL
But seriously it's a very difficult sight, very disturbing, I wouldn't to wish it on anyone.  Everyone copes differently with such situations, you never really know how strong you are until it happens.  Ouch
 
 
so the Doctor's didn't really have a choice but declare her dead. Embarrassed  Yeah I bet you wanted to hug him lolTongue.  And yeah, once again you clocked on something else too, yeah seems i really went into ur update today LOL you're good.why thank you :P  
 
 
Well I can't argue with the fact that it is your turn to flatter yourself, it is well deserved.  Wink
 
 
He's always said she can't leave without his permission, so that's why I used that line here too. Yes that line was damn good :)
 
It's only that good coz Dutta's the one saying it lol.  LOLWink
 
 
Damn right that weren't an optionWink.  And the compressions bit, well I have heard that compressions are as effective as the defibrillators,Yup even with CPR they expect u to keep doing compressions even if it seems to not be working until they are declared officially dead...but i mean in his situation he reacted for himself and for her and wanted her desperately back  and Dutta wouldn't just stand there and watch her die, he would atuomatically do something, anything more like.  So it just fitted in well.  Big smile
 
 
Yeah I guess that's rule number one.  Not that I've ever done it lol, I wouldn't even know where to begin.  Embarrassed  Yeah I agree in his situation it was simply an act of desperation.  Big smile



'Maar daala', now that and unusual style of commenting lol.  I blame the morning LOLYeah he sort of treated that part as 'betrayal' lol, it was his way of showing he couldn't come to terms with it.  Wow that line was the highlight for you,yes indeed it was ...i  was so touched reading that line ...i was all *omg* ing lol  and yes this line really did bring out his emotions agressively.  Embarrassed 
 
 
Well then I shall say the morning is a bright one.  Big smile  OMG...okay now I'm omg *ing lool, seriouslyStern Smile...LOL...but when you imagine him doing all that for real it does have an effect innit...Day Dreaming

Lol too right she finished her conversation with Bappa.  LOL  yup thats wat i thought...lol all done and ready to come back and baam she said saab :P

Of course, uski zindagi Saab ke naam se shuru hoti hai, aur Saab ke naam se khatam lol...literally...LOLLOLLOL

Haha thanks for the title suggestion lol, but in that case every ff should be called that lol, its her registered trademark innit.  LOL  i know those are words from a song...and it just came to me wen i read that part LOL

Omfg, I thought I was the only one that got ideas linked with songs in ppl's ff's lol, guess I'm not the only one.  But heres news to your ears, I've never heard a song like that...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
 
It was kind of hard to imagine how someone would react seeing someone come back to life after a death certificate was drawn up lol, there would be a lot of mixed emotions...confusion, love, relief, happiness...maybe even guilt  ditto!  Wink  but yeah I kind of threw those words together.  *Here take a kleenex from me (on the houseLOL) , it usually me offering it so Sophia lol, but in this case I guess you in need of it. Winkyeah i needed it thanks Tongue sophie can get her own  
 
Lmfao!  I should get kleenex to sponsor my ff lol...LOL
Yep of course Naku's whole being is based around her lving Dutta. But, and that's a big BUT, look at it from Dutta's perspective, after everything she went through; because of him, he's shattered and forced to face the question itself, that can she still love him tomorrow. Embarrassed Smile
yup i think it will be interesting because both have such intense love for each other...but now even if N accepts him, he may feel so guilty as he is the reason for her state...and he may even distance himself to protect her...
 
Hmmm no comment here...lagta hai, the suraj is having double effect on you today.  OMG LMFAO!!!!!!  Guess what!!!  Even Superman gets his energy from the sun lol, and look what you've just realised, oh wow, could it be Superwoman is coming to terms with her powers.  ShockedShockedShockedLOLLOL
 
 

 

Thank you babes, I'm glad you managed to squeeze it into your day, and hope it didn't sadden you too much.  Big smile

of course...i have told you na this is by far my favorite ff Wink

REALLY!!!!  Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smile  Wow now that's a compliment and a half man!  I am speechless here.  EmbarrassedEmbarrassedBlushing  Thanks Daya, you're such a darling!  But I do wonder, you're not just saying that to make me happy are you, cause there a tons of ff's that are way way better then mine.  EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Love you too, Wink

P.P.S.  As always you how grateful I am to everyone who listens to my music, Big smile, especially this song.  This one was really just sticking out to me for this update!  It went so well with Dutta's attitude and reaction to the whole scene.

yup i know that is why i mention na...u always like to know...i never heard the song before but was really apt for the situation

Yeah I guess that's why your such great gal.  I love that song to bits!!!Big smile

 
Thanks for your fantastic comment hun, and loved reading every bit of it.  It is much appreciated.  And most of all I love how you managed to pick points that had a little more depth, then was shownWink Clap Wink

Yup seems i have picked up on lots today LOL
no problem ...me enjoyed writing it Tongue

 
 
 
Of course you have, you've discovered your new powers lol.  LOL 
Well again, need I say I enjoyed reading it.  Wink
 
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awww tinker u r awesome girl!!
 
 
 
wil read nd coment asap.x
 
 
 
Thank you !Big smileEmbarrassed
 
LOL sometime this century, I hope...LOLLOLTongue
 
xx
u cheeky lil #&%*!!LOLLOL
 
nd yh hoping 2 coment b4 ur ff finishesLOLLOLLOLLOL
 
 
Haha I thought you'd like that one...LOLLOLLOL
 
Yeah Mish 'hoping' being the operative word here lol...WinkWink
 
 

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Hey tink'guess I finally gt round to reading and reviewing a few chapters I have read'n I hpe u dnt hav a heart attack seeing wich chapter I had 2 read from' LOL

Wow heart attack de kar, you ask me 'don't have a heart attack' roflmfao!  But yeah I'm gonna enjoy this.  Wink

Chap 19- LOL'I loved hw dutta cleared her confusion tht he doesn't dream 2 marry salman..LOL..imagine tht we myt hav naku singing maa da laadla if tht was 2 happen..lol'u no I reali like hw u hav kept dutta very like the character we saw on screen 2 sum extent'evn in ur ff he's this big don who has very simple dreams'nothing major'jus a dream 2 hav a loving wife 2 cum hme 2 n hav kids of his own'is tht reali 2 much 2 ask? I felt bad for him wen he sed seema broke my dream'.poor guy'bt b4 naku cud advise him or console him for tht matter baji cme in'aww wt a cutie he bought a soft drink 4 naku'.imagine her drinking beer? LOL'thnk god roopa n her daughter r sfe'wonder wen naku shall meet thm'wil cum 2 a shock for her 2 no her sis has a daughter'aww baji upset with dutta for breaking the bangles baji had gifted her'thnk god dutta doesn't tke their friendship the wrong way'awww dutta feeling left out becos basha havin dinner 2geva n nt inviting him'.lol'awww he's such a cutiepie'lol'.aahh wt a unique reason for dutta 2 b attached to the harmonica'in the shw it was 2 remind him of the days wen he was jus dutta a mechanic n also seema' bt here it was given 2 him by the man tht DP lost him 2'. Hmmm so baji knws tht naku is looking for her sis' it wud mke things easier if duji knw tht roopa had a sis 2'bt seems they dnt'. Gosh I wonder hw they wil react wen dey cum 2 no roopa/naku r sisters'.both tasha hav summut in common'.music' bt naku's love for music is on another level'she likes 2 dance 2'would love 2 c dutta watch naku dance'.

So Chapter 19 - The Cold Deck
 
Wow first of all I gotta say, girl you are taking me down memory lane here!  EmbarrassedSmile  It's actually making me smile remembering the time I was writing all this.  Wink
 
 
Naku singing Maa da laadla LOL.  Now that is something I can't actually imagine. 
Yeah I just wanted to show that he was a normal guy that that not necessarily dreamt of marriage, but thought of that as a motive in life.  Which Seema shattered. 
And yep Baji being generous towards Naku, and hun you are so asking the wrong person here, of course  I can imagine Naku drinking beer lol...this is me you're talking to!  LOLLOL
Well Naku and Baji are pretty close, she sees a bit of a Gaurav-like friendship with him, where she knows it will never be threatened to develop into something more, so that makes her comfortable around him.  So Baji is upset about the chudiyan being broken by Dutta, as he's fond of her. 
Yeah I didn't want Dutta to have memories of Seema attached with something he treated as his passion.  So instead I wanted something that always stuck in his head reminding him of a time which meant something different other than romance. 
Well Duji do know that she is trying to locate her family, but are unaware of all the details as yet. 
Yep music is something a lot of people have in common in this ff, but don't worry you'll see Dutta watching Naku dance.  Wink
 
 
 
 

Chap 20- nice update hun'loved the basha scene wer they r singing n dancing 2 salman's song'.i found the roops n baji fight funi n baji's comments in between 2'so I guess its nt gna b Sheila ki jawani thn mayb 1 of those songs tht naku used 2 dance 2'.m dreading the next update u no hw much I h8 roops-baji jodi'(no offence 2 der fans')

 
 
Chapter 20 - Item Girl
Haha yeah I couldn't agree less, I personally really liked that bit myself.  Nope, not if it's over Baji's dead body lol...or actually Roops' dead body...LOL 
Lol none taken.  You know I like Madhu and Baji's pairing on-screen too, but in this case, Roops' character is different. 
 
 
 
 

Chap 21- dutta's jealousy continues'.nt understanding y naku prefers 2 speak 2 baji abt thngs mre thn dutta well dutta trust me evn baji doesn't knw tht much abt her'I suppose the onli man 2 fuly knw naku wil b gaurav'.wonder hw jealous dutta wil b thn'.oh so ravi's sups BG as he was in the shw n like in the shw naku was the 1 2 catch thm'..damn naku naku naku u acted so stupid 2 tel kala'like she reali wil protect dutta'.m surprised hw naku hasn't sussed out tht kala isn't hw she seems I mean isn't naku meant 2 b the 1 tht is able 2 read ppl very wel by der behaviour..she usually sees things dif from hw ppl c thm so m surprised she didn't clock on tht kala is a witch esp with the whole back up bride plan'wt a stupid idea from kala n makes naku luk stupid 2 fall for it'ravi-sups-kala join hands n hav the last laf while naku trusts kala wil sort things out'.cud it gt ne worse thn this? Haha dutta teasing baji was cute' bt damn y does baji hav 2 b paired with roops yaar!! Its gna b torture reading the next update"

 
 
 
 

Chapter 21 - Keep Your Friends Close, Your Enemies Closer

He don't never see himself as the problem lol, that's why he can't understand the friendship between Basha, not to mention his egoistic charms lol.  Yep ur soo right about Gaurav.  Yep wanted to keep most things the same as the show.  Yeah but Naku is naive, so according to her Kala won't want ill of her brother.  So that's why she thinks it's right to tell her.  Not yet, she hasn't been around Kala too long remember.  Yeah the 'back-up' bride paln was suppose to sound stupid lol...seriously, it was just to show stupid brainstorming ideas out loud on Kala's behalf to fool Naku, showing her concern for her Bhau in whatever manner she could imagine.  Heeey it won't be so bad, trust me. Wink
 
 
 
 

Chap 22- so u gt roops 2 perform on 1 of my fav songs'lol'liked her lehenga tho'.aww dutta left wondering hw gd naku wud b'.wel dutta m sure 1 day u wil cum 2 knw hw much of a brilliant dancer naku is n den u wil b mesmerised'.hayee voh din kab aayega'aww dutta buying naku chooriyan'.reminds me of the shw epi wer naku sed "saab larkiyon ki chooriyan bohat pasand hoti hai."

 
 
 
 
 

Chapter 22 - Love is 'On the Air'

 
Really...ha...well I did tell you it wouldn't be so bad innit...Wink, oh by the way glad you liked her lengha. 
Well Dutta's mind does work a little faster here. Embarrassed  Woh din bohut jald ayega (in your case).  Yeah Dutta felt the need of replacing Naku's chudiayan because he broke them  And as he wasn't able to choose a specific colour he brought all of them, and that line was exaclty why the whole chudiyan thingy exists lol...Embarrassed

 

 
 
 
 
 
 

Chap 23- wt a sad update n so much was covered in 1 update'.awww dutta n naku scene was emotional'dutta giving chooriyan 2 naku as tho it's a farewell gift n both feeling sad'.oh damn naku dutta telling u he feels hes makin a mistke n u tel him 2 hav faith'..wt an opportunity she had 2 tel him sups-ravi truth'bt she didn't tke adv of it'.cnt believe dutta fell for kala's trick n married naku like tht n blamed her bt loved the fact tht despite it al he cudnt bare 2 c her being slapped nor in pain'its love dutta'dnt they say sum1 gts hurt n the other feels the pain n thts the case with tasha..aww dun the ending was so sad'hw naku continued 2 do al the work with no1 talkin 2 her n thn dutta humiliating her infront of her kaka'so sad'. 

 
 
 
 
Chapter 23 - Kiss Him Goodbye
Yeah that was exactly how it was, it was his way of ending things on a good note.  Yeah she couldn't as Kala had told her matters were solved.  Hmm I understand how you feel, but I wanted the main things of the serial to happen the same way in this ff too, so that part was important I guess.  But yeah although Dutta wants her to be in pain, he can't seem to bear seeing her suffer for unknown reasons to himself.  And again keeping true to Naku's character in some form, by her silent suffering, and absorbing all humiliation thrown her way.  But don't worry he'll make up for it soon too.   Wink 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Chap 24- yay!! Gaurav is bk n finally reunited with naku'.awww loved this update'1 of the best'..finally sum1 arrives 2 giv dutta takkar n also narrate a few truths 2 him considering no1 else does'.gaurav n roops meeting was funi'hw she was annoyed with him, thn liked him cos he saved her n thn realised tht he is naku's best friend'esp gaurav's reaction tht she myt turn around n say "we r pichle janam's premi.."LOL'aww naku lost in gaurav's embrace n dutta arrives'a Kodak moment'love gaurav n dutta's fight'verbally bashing 1 another..esp dutta sayin "idiot n wt sort of a man plays a tabla" LOL' he can b so funi'yes yes yes dutta tkes naku 2 his room cos he dunt wnt gaurav near naku...jealousy hey'. Lets c wen he realises he loves naku'.oh gaurav nt revealing tht naku is fair'.n helping her out'awww m sure naku wil tke part in the competition n win n dutta wil gt the opportunity 2 b mesmerised by her performance..yay!! cnt w8

 
 
 
Chapter 24 - Back Off, She's Mine! 
 
Love your first word lol.  Ooh thanks, I'm glad you considered this one of the best lol, I think many people liked this back then too...Embarrassed.  Yep that's what Gaurav is here for. 
Yeah man, Roops and Gaurav hated each other at first.  But as time went by she began liking him, because he saved her, and then concluded, his link with Naku.  But yeah Gaurav's nervousness was justified too, cause when a girl just randomly knows your name and starts hugging you in the middle of the street, what was the poor guy to think lol 
Gaurav arrived at the right time, comforting Naku, loved the Kodak moment description with Dutta lol, never thought of it that way.  Dutta would look for any moment to cuss Garuav...LOL.  Whao-ho look who's excited cause Naku's moved into Dutta's room lol.  Well Dutta will find out he's in love with Naku a lot sooner now.  Wink
 
 
 

Chap 25- hmmm it seems gaurav wil play the role of cupid in tasha's LS'nice'didn't expect it'. Gr8 2 c gaurav telling naku wer she;s wrong'its ryt she sumhw needs 2 prove she aint behind it all'loved his taunt 2 dutta'he is right, dutta claims 2 h8 naku yt gts jealous of her closeness with another guy be it baji or gaurav'mre gaurav cos gaurav knws naku mre thn ne1 else' haha dutta gtin angry wen gaurav says he loves naku'bt obv nt in tht way'. Wud it b rong 2 say gaurav n naku r a bit like hw radha-suraj wer in the movie hum tumhare hain sanam? Evn they wer mre closer than 2 best friends cud b n their closeness seemed 2 both the girls hubby bt nt the guys GF'.aww shastriji returns n tells AS tht tasha r made 4 1 another n their marriage happened at the auspicious time n omg gaurav n baji being nosey 'LOL'I guessed from the title tht it wud b shastriji hu wud convince her 2 dance as a form of his guru dakshna'he is ryt'it was wrong 2 let go of tht talent' aww naku singing n evry1 mesmerised'wonder wt wil happen wen she dances! LOL'

 
 
 
 
 
Chapter 25 - Guru Dakshina
 
Ditto!  Gaurav will be letting Dutta in on a lot home truths.  But he's also there to tell Naku about hers too.  Well Gaurav was a wake-up call in Dutta's life, if he didn't make entry in Dutta's life, then I guess tasha would still be at each other like cats and dogs lol.  Because of Gaurav's and Naku's closeness, Dutta hasn't realised how irritated he's become, but bothered by it, he definitely is.  When Gaurav said he loves Naku, Dutta never expected to hear it from someone else's mouth, and it sound like poison to him I guess, spesh since it was Gaurav who had said it.  And Dutta has decided that Gaurav has become his arch enemy at first sight.  Yeah you could say that, they're friendship is like that, but Dutta won't be over- reacting with their relationship in the same respect as Shahrukh Khan...Wink.  Yeah I guess the title says it all, it was only right for Naku to use the talents she has in order to save herself.  But obviously she's prevented to do so because of Babi's promise, but Guru Dakshina is something that can be asked at any time when the Guru feel fit to do so, and it cannot be refused, so it was nice and square I guess.  Smile
 
 
 
 
 

Chap 26- roops-baji engagement'.me is nt happy'anyway anna proves he aint tht stupid 2 fall for the trick abt roopa being dead bt damn' his jasoos tld him abt his caring side for naku'basically putting naku's life in2 danger'awww gaurav n naku dance'. Hmm so gaurav has hair like bobby in the song'Ewww I h8 men with long hair'LOL'bt well done with the description'cud picture thm dancing'. Ahh gaurav plans 2 cheer naku up with a salman movie bt dutta ruins his plans'.typical dutta'I thrt he myt b jealous tht they didn't invite him'lol'tink u no wen things gt better cud u hav a scene wer dutta tks naku out 2 watch a movie of salman n gts jealous abt hw naku blushes each time salman cums onscreen'.LOL'I reali loved gaurav n dutta's convo'gaurav makin dutta see the things tht he overlooked n no1 else thrt 2 consider'.like y sum1 wud ryt a letter b4 eloping' this update made me realise hw alike naku n gaurav r'.in terms of the way they talk'the way they see things' no wonder they r such thick friends'.i loved hw dutta expressed the things he noted abt naku'.awww he loves her bt wen wil he realise''.???????

 
 
 

Chapter 26 - Aur Pyar Ho Gaya

Haha how did I know this one would be popular with you loool.  Tongue  Yeah this was all to show that they are constantly at war with each other.  Anna only wants something that could directly hurt Dutta to the core, and as he's move are being watched, his concern for Naku stands out ridiculously, through the fight Gaurav and Dutta had on the street.  LOL Gaurav don't have hair like Bobby Deol, I said it was bouncing with volume like Bobby Deol's lol, Gaurav's character is portrayed by Saurabh Pandey, if you don't like him, feel free to replace him with somebody from your imagination lol.  But glad you were vivid with the picturisation of the whole scene.  Hahaaa you know when you're back you really made your mark innit, this thread was kinda soona without you you know.  But yeah I will try my utmost best to give you that scene with tasha watching or wanting to watch a Salman movie, where Dutta gets irritated.  Wink  Yeah Gaurav really talks sense, especially when it comes to taunting Dutta, and Dutta hates the fact that Gaurav always makes valid points.  Dutta hasn't realised when he fell in love with her, but arguing consistently with Gaurav is making him say things he didn't know that he knew loool...if you get all that.  But yeah, Gaurav is questioning Dutta as to why he don't look at a situation with just simple common sense, like writing the letter before eloping scenario. 

 
 
 
 

Chap 27- brilliant update'dutta realised he loved naku bt wntd 2 stil free her from the marriage bond'. Little does he knw it wnt b tht easy'omg naku cme in between n gt beaten up'poor naku' loved her explanation on y god gave 1 heart n hw its incomplete until u meet ur other half' tasha r made for each other'..wow gr8 wrk kishore..hw I wish he had dne this in the shw'.. wil it b revealed soon tht kala was behind it all I mean he cme 2 no al this mus find out tht kala was behind it al 2'

 
Chapter 27 - I'd Be Lost If I Lost You
 
Thank You!  Even though he came to terms that he loved her, he didn't want to let her know how he felt.  He thought it would only make Naku more successfull in making him more upset, he didn't want to show her how weak her love made him.  You could consider Naku in Sherni mode here lol, she just wanted out about how she felt about him.  She wanted him to realise that she truly loved him.  Well Kala's reign will come into action eventually, but not yet, you got romance to get through yet, and then the showdown of Anna.  Wink
 
 
 
 
 

Ok tink thts it for 2day wil post my review on the other chapters soon'10 chapters 2 go'.

 
 
Jee Yuvi, you really made me work hard here lol.  But seriously thanks for every comment on every chapter!  It was indeed awesome comments through and through.  Thanks a ton babes, and I'm glad you've catched up,  The rest of the chapters from here should be okay for you to get through, as now the tasha scenes kick in. 
 
Will wait for you to come round with your colourful post again.  Wink
 
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