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PART 5 7 C
Borivili to Vapi
Mumbai Ahmedabad Shatabdi
May 24th Tuesday!
Khanak: Not in THESE clothes!
Khanak: You are early.
Shaan: Yep! I have to go to the site after.
Khanak: Itni subah?
Shaan:You know there is no day or nite at the site.
Khanak: Much like how your life used to be?
Shaan: So we have decided to fight before the goodbye?
Shaan: (softly) Is your Uncle not here?
Khanak: Nahi unko chutthi nahi mili, he took time off for Shirdi.
Khanak: You haven't shaved!
Shaan: I didn't! I knew we wouldn't kiss.
Kaki walks out in that moment "Khanak, yeh dekh, Kaka ne jo check diya hai who theek hai ne" (in Gujarati)
Khanak steps back and walks away, takes the check from Kaki looks at it "haan yeh to theek hai, par jo Registry mein mangwaya tha, who to Aada keh rahe the ki koi Rs12, 320 dene hain" (in Gujarati)
Kaki: Abhi yeh kaam mein nahi le paayenge?
Khanak: Aap isko rakh lo main dekh loongi (reassuringly)
Shaan picks up yesterday's newspaper and saunters to the window, reads.
Khanak:Kaki, bache uth gaye?
Kaki: Mehul ziddi hai, Mitali uth gayi par baithi hai (embarrassed)
Khanak: Main jagaati hoon. Ritu nahi aa yi nahaakar, checks the clock on the wall it shows 5:10
Shaan is on the phone, talking with people at work, in Hindi and English.
Kaki drags her suitcase to the living room and starts rearranging, Shaan goes back to the sofa, lest it seems like he is prying.
After she is done, she asks him if he will close it. in Gujarati!
He has no clue what she wants, he walks up to her and goes on his knees.
She repeats in broken Hindi
He smiles and obliges.
Khanak is out, sees him on the floor. Walks into the kitchen to set water for chai for the kids. Transfers poha to a bowl and starts doing the dishes. He gets up and sees she is working away.
Khanak (looking at him) Hum late to nahi ho jaayenge?
Shaan: We are OK Khanak The roads should be pretty clear.
Kaki: Driver aaya hai? (In gujarati)
Shaan: Yep! Neeche khada hai.
Khanak: Will we need another car?
Shaan: Nope! I brought the Range Rover.
Kaki: Main Mehul Mitali ko jaakar daanti hoon (in Gujarati) (walks away)
Khanak doesn't even look at him, busy doing the dishes, wiping the counters and putting things away, helping Ritu out as much as she can.
Shaan walks over to the kitchen and leans on the entrance way (its an open kitchen, so there is no door, the back of the sink area faces the living room)
Folds his arms across his chest "Do you clean up every morning before work?"
Khanak: Not really! We usually cook at nite. I do! (smiles) Ritu hate sto cook.
Shaan: You do it everyday? (shocked)
Shaan: Cant you get a maid?
Khanak: we tried, but she took too many days off and we were constantly hungry (grins)
Shaan: Your hair is still damp you know (softly)
Her heart skips a beat at the change in tone "I know! I don't use a dryer, just let it air dry it"
Shaan: Oh! (feeling this fervent urge to feel it)
Shaan: Will you call me?
Khanak: (face flaming) Umm'. I am not sure kitna time milega
Shaan: Oh really? (mocks)
Khanak: Yep! (drying the hand towel on the rim of the sink)
Shaan: I wont show up for sangeet if you don't call me every day!
Khanak looks up at him in shock
Khanak: You cant do that!
He has a "Cant I?" look
Shaan: Try me Khanak! (just for her ears, as Ritu walks walks up)
Ritu: Yeh tumse bhi kaam karwa rahi hogi? (disgusted)
Khanak: Excuse me! Shaadi waise meri bhi hai!
Ritu: Hogi! Par Shaan ko kaam karte hue main nahi dekh sakti (winks)
Khanak: What ever! (turns to leave the kitched from the other side of the sink island)
Ritu: Breakfast nahi khilayegi kya isko? Who bhi mera bana hua poha?
Khanak: Tumne banaya hai, tum khilao, zyaada tasty lagega unko (smiles sweetly at Shaan before walking away)
Ritu: Tum dono lad rahe the kya?
Shaan: I didn't think so (acting confused)
Mehul and Mitali rush to the living room to get a glimpse of their Jeeju again.
Mitali holds his hand and jumps up and down: "Aap bhi chaliye na hamare saath!"
Shaan:I wish! But I don't think Khanak has bought tickets for me (embarrassed by the obvious gushing)
Khanak is putting things away in the living room, giving instructions to Kaki about the number of bags etc.
But she is listening
Khanak: Mitali, shaayad who Sangeet mein bhi nahi aa paayenge! (there!)
Mitali is shocked!
Shaan: (back at Khanak) If I am busy I cannot make it Mitali. There is a, kaam par mera matlab, ek problem hai.
Ritu brings him his plate. Urges him to go sit down and eat.
Khanak is in the back room, getting her dupatta and purse and stuff
Kaki is ordering Mitali to go take that shower, she whines and leaves, Mehul gets ready reluctantly whining "Shaam ki train kyon nahi lee Di"
Khanak: Kyon ki already main 3 din late ja rahi hoon! (biz like)
She sits down on the divan opens her purse and sorts things in it.
Ritu: Do you need money?
Khanak: Ummm'. I don't think so. I took Rs.20k out lats nite jab tu apna dupatta dye karwa rahi thi.
Ritu: I might have Rs.8-10k, ruk deti hoon (runs inside to grab her purse)
Kaki conspiratorily whispers something in Khanak's ears.
Khanak walks inside with her, hands her some money
Ritu steps out and hands her the money she has
Khanak winks "Chal I will use it for at the Summer Sale at Rang Bandhej" (winks)
Ritu: Aur doon? (smiles fondly and hugs, tears suddenly flow down her eyes)
Khanak is teary eyed also.
Shaan is super uncomfortable, he just stares
The kids are done getting ready
Mitali is taller than Khanak is wearing Khanak's dress
"Di, kurta chhota hai na?"
Khanak: Ek dum pretty lag rahi hai, abhi fatafat baal bana, please"
Ritu: Have you eaten?
Khanak: No! Not hungry!
Shaan walks back to the kitchen to drop his plate in the sink, he sees its sparkling.
Khanak walks over to Sooraj's pic, and stands still. Ritu quietly walks away.
Khanak is staring at the picture of a man whose life was snuffed out so early. Shaan is getting a bottle of water from the frig, when he turns, he sees her standing there motionless. He returns his water to the frig
Ritu is dragging the bags out, he signals her with a "I am going to ask Pradeep to bring the car closer" (lets himself out)
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Odhni (Khanak Ki CHOICE) - 23rd Aug PRECAP !! VHQ
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OMG the PRECAP
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Precap scene deleted.!!
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what a precap....!!!:]
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