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PART 56 D
Friday May 13th 10 PM Onwards.
Khanak: I don't know...!(embarrassed)
Shaan: well ... you have 16 days to make up your mind Khanak (smiles)
One guy walks up to her and asks "Madam time kya hua hai"
It sends her off the edge, she attaches herself to Shaan... TIGHT!
Shaan loses his smile and responds with "Ghari nahi hai" gives the guy a dirty look.
They increase their pace, and get to the car. The guys look like they are following at first but lose interest.
He locks the doors when they are seated, the two random guys, give up and start walking away from them
Khanak: that was close! Ughh! (shuts her eyes with her hand, her heart is still racing in fear)
Shaan: He revs the engine and screeches off the dusty sidewalk on to the road, drives by the guys, they glance up to see the car, point and crack jokes.
Shaan drives off unmindful.
Khanak:Aada kehte hain raat ko kabhi beach par nahi jaana chahiye (child like)
Shaan: Tumhaare Aada bilkul theek kehte hain. There is no bloody privacy anymore.(fumes)
Khanak: I thought you were going to punch them (in horror)
Shaan: I choose my battles carefully Khanak... except in our case ofcourse (softly).
Khanak: Its not my fault we fight so much! (defensive, looks out the window)
Shaan: Not at all! (Ya right!)
He drives in silence for a while.
Shaan: If Pradeep was with us, I could have taken on the guys, he could have driven you home. I cant do it when we are alone.
Khanak: Here I was assuming you were Salman Khan at one point.
Shaan: Ha! Werent you wrong!
He dials a number on his cell phone and orders food.
Shaan: I wanted to order food for take out
Shaan: Yep veggie first please.
Listens and Thanks
Shaan: Hang on a sec (into the phone)
Turns to her, "Is pasta good for you?"
Khanak: Umm'.. fine! (nods)
Shaan: Into the phone, "Canneloni" is that all veggie?
Shaan: Yep, no spice please? Thanks
Shaan: Hang on a second
Shaan: Is it OK if I eat meat at your place?
He heart drums spreading color and heat all over when she realizes they would be going to her place "Ritu makes eggs!"
Shaan: (into the phone) I will take the Provencale Veggie Construct please.
Looks at the clock on the dashboard "In about 30 minutes?" into the phone
"Thanks" hangs up
Hits the radio. It plays Sirius Classics.
Khanak: do you ever listen to Hindi?
His car, his things, his choices, his thought process, his actions, they all fascinate her. Unwittingly drawn closer and closer to him.
There is a casual effortless, ease in the way he conducts himself. Very spontaneous, cheerful and outspoken, while having the capacity to be immensely passionate.
Her heart rate went soaring when he just SAID things to her, she wondered how she would handle anything beyond a kiss.
His hands had not touched her once, except in her apartment, on the divan, when he let his fingers massage her scalp. He was gentle yet punishing. His eyes took on a serious, solemn expression when he kissed her or looked at her while being intimate. Most other times they sparkled.
He breaks her trance again with a "Vie Lounge and Deck is a beautiful place at nite. We should go next week"
Khanak: Oh! Where is it?
Khanak: I don't venture out much. I don't know where 90% of the places are. I get to work and get home. I am usually lost if I am in a cab and the cabbie does not know the way.
Shaan: that must be why you take the locals to stranger's homes at nite(taunting)
Khanak: I don't want to talk about it (husky, fierce)
He parks outside a beautiful, dimly lit, what looks like a restaurant with a deck and lots of outside seating. The valet asks if he could park, he tips the guy and says "Khaana pick up karna hai"
Valet: I can page it for you sir!
A guy shows up with a bag with boxes in it. He pays him cash, even though the guy walks out with a hand held credit card auth terminal, unlocks the back door, he sets the food, smiles at the tip and almost bows stands there watching Shaan pull out of the parking lot.
Drive home, past 10: 45 pm. Pai Uncle is talking with what seem like a bunch of contractors.
He parks and gets her food out, she gets her things.
Pai: Khanak beta, ek minute
Pai tumhe maine sham ko kaha tha 407 ki Mrs Apte sabse pehle apna ghar karwaana chahiti hai
Khanak is embarrassed as she has been busted.
Pretends to ignore that remark "Kya hua?
Pai: tumhe maine sham ko kaha ki who first ready hai, abhi who keh rahi hai uske bte ke school mein koi program hai kal, so sabse pehle tumhara ghar karte hain?
Khanak: Theek, chabi kisko doon?
Pai: Ritwik ki mummy ko de dena.
Pai looks at Shaan smiles, "Tumhara mangetar hai"
Khanak: Jee Uncle!
Pai: Kya karte ho? (immediate interrogation)
Shaan: Je eek construction company mein hoon.
Pai: Salary achhi hai? (curious)
Shaan: Yep!... I mean, very good Uncle (smiles indulgently)
Pai: Kya hai na, jab Khanak job chode ka mann hai to chhodegi na. Meri wife ne bus 6 mahina kiya, suke baad full free (declares proudly)
Khanak: Uncle main abhi chabi de deti hoon (cutting him short)
Pai to shaan: Gadi to achhi hai. Loan par hai kya?
Khanak is horrified.
Shaan: Nahi Uncle.
Pai slowly realizes he is asking the wrong questions.
Khanak: Main agle hafte card dene aaoongi.
Pai: Jaroor, main aur Mrs pakka.Shaadi kidhar hai
Pai is shocked. "Sasural? Gujarati ladka hai kya?"
Khanak: Nahi... Sasural Malabar Hill mein hai.
Pai doesn't say a word, just stares at Shaan, he grabs her laptop back so she can get to her keys
The couple start walking away as Mr Pai gapes.
She hits the lights, he sets the food on the coffe table.
Khanak: Aap shoes utariye!
Shaan smiles "Yep! Sorry"
She washes her hands, shows him the rest room, he does too
They open the food, serve and eat.
He tries some of hers, she doesn't.
They don't talk about a thing, except "Aapko paani" "Do you have a fork?"
When they are done, she walks over to her fave spot by the window and gazes out, with a faraway look
He walks up to her, she turns around.
They are very close.
Shaan: You came home to dress up for the evening? (grins)
Khanak: Don't worry about it since you hardly noticed (aloof, yet hurt)
Shaan: Ofcourse I did!
Khanak: All you said was "Do you love wearing sarees" (sulking)
He laughs and closes the gap. One hand on the trim of the mirror, and the other holding a window grill.
Khanak: I will wear sarees every evening after the wedding, too bad you cant see me coz I will be in Chembur (challenge)
Shaan: That's fine as long as you get home to my bed each nite! (careless)
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Odhni (Khanak Ki CHOICE) - 23rd Aug PRECAP !! VHQ
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