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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 12:51am | IP Logged


Thanks a ton for the update ...Big smile
I just loved the fight ...
especially when he asks abt her commute-

Shaan: Tumhaare "local" ka driver naraaz ho jaata agar tum cab le leti?(sarcastic, condescending).

Khanak: Nahi, I was worried the South Bombay brats would bother me if I was walking the streets at night waiting for a cab!

Shaan: Watch what you say Khanak! you are going to be married to one soon!(silky)

Khanak: Oh! How can I forget? I still haven't recovered from the shock of the engagement.

Although her last sentence sounds a lil rude, She knows that Shan wouldn mind.. that is the comfort level they share.....


shaan sounded very cute when he said -
Make sure your fist doesn't hurt after hurling that blow.


and

You should save those punches for when you get better. They don't seem to be landing well (taunting)

Could not stop laughing wen Khanak says -
You are over reacting! Ive always travelled by buses or trains. Not all of us can afford S class Mercs. Some of us have to be walking the streets to get splashed by the water your tyres kick up.

Poor Shaan Smile

Loved the part where she wonders if even he thinks abt the life after marriage and abt their kiss etc... that is what I like abt ur writing.. very natural  and the sarcasm in each of their convo is ultimate....Smile

cheers,
Ujjwala



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Good Morning Aditi, and thanks for a brilliantly long update!! Just got into the office and of course as priority I was logged on to IF to see if you'd updated. and you DID!!  Just read the long installment provided and loved it! Love the 'spats' Shaan and Khanak are continuously having. Its so endearing Tongue 

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yaar i jst  love their love in their nok joke,,
i hope smjh aa gya hoga ...
jst loved itSmile
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PART 54A

Act II of the verbal sparring

Mangal Kunj, Malabar Hill

May 3rd, Tuesday!

5:20pm

 

She went back to being her original self! Losing most of that distress over the scores, caused by her physical discomfort. She couldn't do anything about it. What was done was done. The next one was the new target now/. She wondered how many ways she would screw that up , as she would be married by then.

Her disgust came and went. She heard Shaan chat with Ram as she sat and waited for him in one of the plush leather sofas. Her face was puffy and her nose and eyes were sore.

He galloped down with an apology, and a quick "Lets go!"

People waiting in the lobby that recognized Shaan spoke in hushed whispers about them. The ones that did not know speculated who she could be. A good looking pair always draws people's attention, and this one was no exception. Based on the argument both had by the marble desk, the people waiting assumed, it was more than a "work relationship"

The girl's big eyes were open wide, almost as if she were accusing him of something. He was being patient and firm, they noticed. They did not hug or touch each other but, there was just something between the two.

Khanak: I want to go home! (softly whining)

Shaan: Yep!

He finds some acquaintances in the elevator along the way down. They talk, chat, laugh'''.. while she leans on the steel wall, eyes shut.

He whispers something into her ear "Khanak, Pradeep's not  answering, I know where he parks, I will go find him"

Khanak: Hmmm, or I can take a cab!

Shaan: Ofcourse!

Shaan receives and sends his "See you man!" "Friday? At Liquid?" "After the game?" boisterous, cheerful like any 27 year old who is happy with life.

She wonders if the marriage will cement him to the ground. She feels more sick at that thought. Pradeep is waiting out.

He is happy to see her after so long, she manages a smile. Shaan takes her laptop and the two dozen folders she usually carries, and dumps it in the trunk.

Khanak: Arey, schematic designs bend ho jaayega.

Shaan: Give it up will you? (irritated)

They are seated, slide out  on to the street.

Pradeep: Sir ke assistant  ka phone aaya tha, aapka Accord nikal gaya.

Shaan (smiling) really?

Pradeep: Jee Sir!

Shaan: Thanks!

Khanak looks at him curiously , he responds with a "We were trying to get rid of my car, looks like we managed to"

Khanak thinks "Oh! Do I care?"

Khanak: Can I get some water?

Shaan: Praddeep who bottle dena?

Pradeep hands him a bottle, 3/4th full.

Shaan: Its mine! You can drink it if you like. The germs wont kill you.

Khanak: (hesitantly taking it) Don't worry, I am pretty resilient, I would kill them all.

He chuckles.

She doesn't say word,lays back eyes closed, the remainder of the 20 minute drive, until she realizes they are in his parking.

Khanak: Please! Not to your house! (complains)

Shaan: Is Ritu home?

Khanak: No! (confused) She wont be home until later.

Shaan: Dinner with Kritik?

Khanak is shocked!

Khanak: Aapko kaise maloom?

He arches one eyebrow dryly "Ritu is my friend too Khanak, she told me about Kritik"

Shaan: Can we fight while en route to the 9th?

She gets off,  bends down and grabs a wad of tissues from the back.

Khanak: She never told me.

Shaan: Arent your friends allowed to be friends with other people? (taunting)

Steering her towards the glass door that led to the elevator area. Punches some code on the wall, the door clicks open, wait by the brass/chrome door.

Khanak: she is my best friend! (sulking)

The elevator smells fresh and clean, the numbers are clear and shiny.

Khanak: Ghar par Dadi hain?

Shaan: She was there when I left for work this morning! (smiles)

Khanak: Kya sochengi! (shocked)

Shaan: You are insane.(shakes his head)

It gets to the 9th in less than that many seconds. Hari Lal opens the door, she smiles uncomfortably.

Dadi is in the living room giving instructions to another male help. She is shocked, stunned, overjoyed, to see Khanak.

Dadi:When did my grandson become so perceptive? (mocks)

She gives him a squishy hug

Shaan grins.

Khanak is embarrassed

Khanak: Namaste Dadi!

Joins hands in prayer

Dadi: My most favorite DIL! A hug is what is Namaste in my language (hugs her)

Khanak: Dadi I have a cold! (sad)

Dadi: I ve had one too, in fact Ive had 1000s of them (winks)

Hugs her anyway.

Shaan, saunters around, hands in pockets, nods to Hari Lal about something

Dadi: Sit beta

Khanak: I actually wanted to go home, he brought me here!

Dadi: So sometimes he actually thinks!

Shaan is on the phone.

Khanak: Aap busy thi?

Dadi: never for you beta! How are you?

Khanak: Good''' I was good!

Dadi: kyon kya hua?

Khanak: Got some really bad rating at work (looks at Shaan accusingly)

Dadi worries if these two are fighting again.

Dadi: Did Shaan have something to do with it?

Khanak: Everything! (continues to look at him, he pushes his hair back while he talks, it slides back to his forehead, he catches her watching him, he loses his rain of thought, and does a quick "What was that again?" "Oh OK, I apologize" into the phone)

She looks away!

Dadi is helping Hari Lal set food on the table

Dadi:They say feed the cold!

Khanak: I am hungry!

Dadi: Great!

Dadi turns to Shaan "Will you eat beta?"

Shaan nods, hangs up the call after good byes. Sits by Dadi. Dadi notices Khanak serve herself and sit back. She smiles as she notices the strong under currents.

Dadi: So have you guys done anything fun since the engagement?

Shaan: Little! (honest)

Khanak: Endless! (not looking at him but meant for him)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 8:12am | IP Logged
hei aditee,
another part..happy..
 
oh aditee..i love this shaan n khanak so much..they r quite adorable in wat they do..so cute..
 
daadi is always a sweetheart..continue soon..
 
i want may 29th to come soon..but its just real may 10..19 more days to go..


Edited by RB81 - 10 May 2011 at 8:19am
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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 8:14am | IP Logged
lovely update!

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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 8:37am | IP Logged
Aditeee.. aaja Jaddu ki jhappi le ja or go treat ur self with ur fav dessert and send me the bill LOL  ur unique Shanak are just getting adoringly sweeter and cuter by the day !!!!!!! & 2 parts up...ShockedBig smile  

will have to do this later during the day!  Work  calling !! Sigh !!!!!!!!!! Aditeee.. Go take a bow gal... I have become a huge fan of ur writting ! 




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